Reborn as an Unfinished Building

This book is as bad as the title...

It felt like a god at the beginning, but then it got more and more off track! First of all, the protagonist is almost not super strong, or the intermittent super strength is not obvious yet. The role of the protagonist seems to be a vague story line, making readers doubt whether he is the protagonist or not! I've been talking about these ghosts, but now they can't be connected and they can't become a trap, let alone filling the hole! First of all, where do ghosts come from, where does the protagonist come from, why does it become like this, how does this ghost become like this, why does it exist, is there a demonic wind in this building? ? ? Isn't this world a world without demons? The world setting is a bit confusing and confusing Anyway, the more you look at it, the more confusing it becomes, and you can't sort it out. There is no corresponding spiritual quality that can be praised by horror houses and an atmosphere that makes netizens happy. The setting of this book itself is very exciting, but the writing of this line, to be honest, the author should think about it carefully. I hope I can see you again next time, but in a big way!

The author didn't even change his pen name, so he wasn't afraid of being blocked by the editor. Author, you can do this. If the next book is not popular, use the same model and earn full attendance. As long as you open 5 books, the author will earn 3,000 per month 🤭

My first comment. I really don't know what the author is writing and I can't complain.

You've done a good job, please give me a reward, you are really a role model for our generation ~ poison them to death 🤭

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The third person perspective is a bit uncomfortable, it feels like the protagonist can't do anything.

I saw the update, I feel like it,, The author has a lot of imagination, and the plot is pretty good, quite attractive, Then, the author's detailed description is really not in place, and the writing is very confusing in many places. There are many loopholes in the setting, and the characters are all single. It's a standard starting point, so it's a cool article., But the imagination is great, come on ↖(^ω^)↗

666 Author Niubi, it makes me want to imitate what you do 🤭

There is no logic at all. The other people in the house where the person died didn't know about it. It's poisonous.

To put it bluntly, the protagonist is an invisible person 😅

Don't promote your new book in a bad book if it's a bad one. Send it here and read another bad one? ? ?

The subject matter is good, but the protagonist has no ability at all?

Author, you are good, you actually made me want to read more!

It's so pitiful that I didn't seal it even though I was beaten hard, but ended up swinging the knife myself!

The ultimate goal is to scare away all residents, right😄😄😄

You've become a eunuch after writing two books, and you are enough to disgust people.

Alas, the unfinished building will eventually be unfinished.

I found that there is a common problem in supernatural novels. The protagonist sees ghosts every day, but almost no ordinary people have seen ghosts 🤭

The writing is okay, but he is just a eunuch.

There is basically no need for the protagonist of this book to exist

This book should be regarded as a sideshow. In fact, the subject matter is quite good, but it is quite difficult to write well.

This is the first time I see an author who lets himself go... Hehe

If you want to practice the magical skill of breaking chapters, you can just swing your sword from the palace.

This, this, this. . . . There are really all kinds of novels

The author is very creative! Promote your own book Welcome to invest in your collection

I think it looks pretty good. Why don't you write about it?

The author of this book entered the palace decisively

How hard has this backstage been for how long?

It's so poisonous from the beginning, goodbye