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When I read Chapter 4, it seemed like the protagonist had a harem in the introduction. I didn't know if the protagonist had a harem, because it was set at the beginning that Cheng Yuanyuan liked the protagonist so much. If the protagonist didn't like it, he should cut off the contact directly and avoid starting a harem if they wanted to be together. Otherwise, it would be very uncomfortable to read because I have read too many novels with such scumbag male protagonists. In many novels, the protagonist loves A so much, and then starts to describe being entangled with B. I have seen this routine too many times.
I'm drunk. The main character's company is full of yin and yang. It's boring to watch all the women. Also, the constant ambiguity is disgusting. I feel like the follow-up will be the harem. I'll just give it a try. I'll give it up after my patience wears off.
It was good to watch at first, but the sudden appearance of a certain Huang made me instantly disgusted. Please stop writing about the routines from ten years ago! Very childish, okay?
It's the best star novel I've ever read
Li Luo was able to pick up several. I saw him mention his ID card several times. What is the status of his ID card? Don't get excited! Who knows, find out!
In the first chapter, I felt like this protagonist was so useless.
Three wives, the girlfriend from the first chapter is dead. Improvise
The poison test is completed. Read five chapters. The result is out, and no surprise, someone from "Shiya" wants to give experience to Pig's Feet. In these five chapters, the original spare tire has successfully become the heroine, and "Shiya" may become the spare tire. Looking at it written like this, maybe you have thought about it The love line is gone, and it is broken within five chapters. This kind of dog food is the most unpalatable. I feel like the most enjoyable part of entertainment novels is gone. The novel I wrote will be published as soon as it appears. Is this everyday writing?
Accept less women. So far, the writing is very good. Don't just write songs for outsiders.
Come on! The writing is very good. I can see that your outline is excellent. If you delete it too much, it will look very abrupt later.
The author went too far in making the heroine silly.
Since you are planning to write a harem story, don't write the emotional scene in such detail at the beginning. The heroine is so infatuated at the beginning and the readers are completely drawn into it. However, when the harem opens later, it will be very annoying to watch.
I couldn't sleep at night and found a novel to read. After reading one chapter, I was full of flaws I wonder if the author can read this post I will tell you my humble opinion. If there are any mistakes, please let the author and readers correct me.
Who is the heroine? Harem or single heroine?
The title of the book was good, so I jumped on it.
If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. There's no need to slander it here. I think it's pretty good. The various situations and character arrangements are quite reasonable. It's not a mindless story or something that just looks childish.
It's a book in 2020, why do you still use an antique plot to tell me your feelings?
Does a Spring Festival Gala author have to write for a month? I'm convinced too
1.4 Million words, 1,400 recommendations,,, Is this such magical data? A few days ago I saw a book with millions of words and more than 10 million recommendations, which was also magical. .
Has this author sealed many books? Such a familiar name
I thought I would have a harem, I'm really speechless
I wrote some summaries for newcomers to the harem. The harem of this book, the protagonist's character, wisdom and a little bit, and then the pace may be a bit fast at the beginning, but then there will be a lot of plot, and then it will not make people uncomfortable, the plot will not be brainless, and then it is also very exciting. The most obvious shortcoming is that some chapters are suddenly missing, which may be due to the system website. The missing content may only be a few lines in a certain chapter, and it is not driving content, so it should be a problem with the website. Then there are some casually mentioned things later that may not have been solved later. Maybe the author forgot, but they are all small things and there is no viewing obstacle. In the end, this is a well-organized and entertaining article.