Unknown Detective Ye Lecheng

Suspense mystery. There is "something" in the hotel, and the protagonist takes his assistant to investigate. The atmosphere is a bit poor, there is not much thrilling feeling, and the murderer is revealed, which ruins the atmosphere, although I know that is not the final mastermind. 6.5 Points, come on!

I only read three chapters, because I read books at night and then write book reviews, but I am too timid to continue reading. Just say it. ① The title of the book is too simple. It makes people not want to click on it. However, this title also hits the center. In a word, this is a simple and crude title. It is not attractive. I can only say that it is not off topic? ② Please be careful, the author, and pay attention when typing. I have only read three chapters, and there are a lot of typos, missing words, and repeated words! Chapter 1: "If you go, you will", are you sure it is not "back"? "I don't dare to come and live anymore", the word "" is missing. "Old" hotel? Two mistakes were made! There are others in this chapter that I won't list. Chapter 2 still has missing words and repeated words, making it difficult to read smoothly! The last double quotation marks are gone... ③The two of us? Write upside down? (My name) Are you sure it's not my name written backwards? Or did Ye Lecheng himself say it wrong? ④The segmentation is generally okay, but if the protagonist says it, can you not separate it into two segments? Maybe the author accidentally pressed enter while typing? ⑤The plot is good and has a certain appeal to readers. At least I can read the first three chapters. I read your introduction and want to ask, are you planning to write a short story or a long novel? ⑥The subject matter is still relatively popular now, but I think the author should also read the novels of Conan Doyle, Christie, and Higashino Keigo. If you want to write mystery novels with romance, you can read Ding Mo's. ⑦ There seems to be a difference between suspense and reasoning, right? Your tags have both.

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(⊙O⊙)Wow! I just discovered such a good book!

It's really beautiful! The character descriptions are so vivid

1. The opening is very clever and attractive, and it doesn't feel like a newbie. 2. The narrative content is too much and flat, without waves. It is obviously a very scary thing, but the sense of empathy is not very strong and there is no way to empathize with it. 3. It can be seen that the author's idea structure is very exciting, but you must pay attention to the rhythm! The atmosphere finally became tense, and before the main (and supporting) characters could worry, it immediately entered a peaceful stage. It's like breaking a wire in two different directions, which makes you feel a little tired. 4. You can add more non-complaining descriptions of the protagonist's heart. 5. The progress is so slow... I hope we can speed up the progress. Can you please give me an update?

What happened on July 14th? Do you want to express what happened during the Hungry Ghost Festival? But July 14th is the lunar calendar

There is no horror atmosphere and the plot is not attractive

Currently, Chapter 35 and Chapter 37 are blocked due to violations... I will try my best to revise them and change them back. Feel sorry