Seal the Spiritual Realm

Well, this, because the time span is too long, the writing was started two years ago, so the pace of the first part was too slow and the plot was too bland. Now that I have realized the problem, I am ready to revamp it. Apply again after renovation, hope to pass

Come on, as long as you persist, you will be rewarded in the end.

I have been thinking about this book for a long time, and I don't know if it will suit readers' tastes, but I still want to write it like this. I have read a lot of books about Golden Finger and Jiraiqiang. Although it is very hot-blooded and exciting, I always feel that it is missing that bit of authenticity. Maybe fantasy novels don't need this kind of realism, but I still want to insist on it. You can see that the protagonist is a new person, and everything about the protagonist will be integrated into his growth. Strength, ability, character, love, soul, and hatred all need to be gradually produced and revealed during the process of brewing. After all, talents can be possessed, but no one is born with everything. Finally, please collect and recommend, and I wish every reader can be happy every day!

The writing is okay, but the plot is not familiar. It looks interesting. Come on, try not to stop updating, I believe the results will come up after signing the contract. Um, I'm saving it, it's best to update it as soon as possible. By the way, remember to pay attention to each other. Go and collect my books too. Favoring and encouraging each other is not

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The setting is a bit complicated, and it may seem easy to forget. Open a setting inquiry post Sixteen attributes: gold, wood, water, fire, earth, thunder, sound, wind, poison, ice, holy, dark, energy (energy), alien (space), soul (soul), light Human level: level one to level seven spiritual master, followed by Zun, Zun God, and Holy King. Spirit beast levels: one to ten Spirit beast qualities: ordinary beasts, exotic beasts, mythical beasts, holy beasts I will add the rest later~

Come on, encourage each other, the novel is okay and you have your own ideas. Already collected. "Ming Zhiyuan" is visiting, welcome to return 🙂

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The writing is good, it has been collected, please visit again!

Use as little dialogue as possible that does not enrich the image or tell the story. The author can refine some words... The paragraphs should be of consistent length, and the plot should add conflict or desire... A good book never tires of being revised a hundred times, even if no one cares about it, it should make itself more interesting. The moso bamboo has been climbing steadily in the last short period of time, which is the result of its inconspicuous and crazy rooting in the past few years. Encourage each other!

Has the author applied for a contract? I am also an author. I have written more than 100,000 words, but I don't have many readers. I want to be alone but it's too lonely. Not asking for mutual acceptance or anything like that, just complaining and complaining. Come on, I will read your article. If you can give some superficial suggestions, the author doesn't mind. Sorry if there is any inappropriateness😁