Golden Feng

The writing is good, the logic is smooth, and you can see that a lot of effort has been put into it. Unfortunately, the footing is a bit crooked. It can be seen that the author does not want to forcefully support the Jin Dynasty. After all, the protagonist is Han, so he cannot forcefully be a dog licker to extend the life of the Jurchens. But that's the impression I got after reading the introduction and title of the book. Although it is novel, you also know that there are many emperors and Han Dynasties in the starting point (no irony intended), but starting from the Jin Dynasty makes it difficult for people (passer-by readers) to have a sense of national identity. Many Ming Dynasty and Qing Dynasty novels are very poor in text, but they can attract many readers just by being miserable and relying on the hatred of country and family. However, it is impossible to change it, but you can make it clearer in the introduction. There is also the issue of the heroine, which the author does not need to worry too much about. In this kind of serious historical novel, readers will not care much about the heroine, or even not have one. On the contrary, too much writing will make people unhappy. Finally, cheers, author💪

Don't give up. Other time-travelers can help up the Northern Song Dynasty, which was ten and a hundred times more rotten than the Jin Dynasty. You can also help up the Jin Dynasty again and unify China. 🤓

Dear readers, you can first read the relevant works before reading. If it is really not suitable, it is because my level is too low, and I apologize to you. I will continue to make progress!

He looked like a beggar and could scare the people watching the city gate. After he was caught and tortured to extract a confession, he could even pretend to drink tea when he was ready to be questioned. The treatment was really good.

Dear readers, Happy Mid-Autumn Festival!

Has the author finished depositing the manuscript and sending it out? 😄... Code the words together, don't update intermittently. . .

Why don't the recommendation votes decrease so much?

Not bad, come on, author, stop being a eunuch.

The development of the protagonist is too slow. It took me so long to start writing and I don't know when I will be able to make a breakthrough....

In a feudal hierarchical society, if you don't get a good birth, you can only study or go up the mountain to rebel. Studying in the Kingdom of Jin is useless, so you can either become an official and become a slave or kill people and rebel, forcing people to join the gang. When the team is big, you need to pay attention to the system and so on.

Here comes my brother😏😏😏😏

We can reward each other. I'll be your first fan. I'm poor. Let's start with one dollar.

The Meng Yuan era was truly an era of invincible human power. Even if it repelled the first few invasions, it could still recruit servants to form an army of over one million to continue the invasion. You really can't beat it, and you can't fight it to the end. We can only wait for the enemy to disintegrate and split within itself.