I Reincarnate You and You Are Reborn

Haha, I'm watching it again now, though. . . . . This is my first time reading a Danmei novel. ＾0＾~

Suddenly I feel like your writing is a little better. Is it an accident? Um. . . Come on＾0＾~

Haha, the title of the book is great! The beginning is very good and very tempting to read on. The story setting is also very attractive and gripping. The pair of peach blossom eyes at the beginning made me burst out laughing! Reading further, I feel that there is still a major problem, that is, the narration and dialogue are not tied to the plot, or are not closely integrated. It is recommended to avoid side language and dialogue that do not express the theme. The plot should advance quickly and there should be suspense and conflict. It looks a bit uncompact now. No matter the flaws, I wish you can become a god soon!

If you don't like it, you don't like it, you have to tell the truth

It's pretty good-looking, but it feels a little watery and makes a splashing sound.

Come on＾0＾~The writing is not bad, but. . . . . I personally think you should add more character descriptions, well, the story is good. (I'm telling the truth)

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It's this one, hehe, hehe, I found it!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The character descriptions are a bit sparse, and the rhythm is a bit unclear, but the subject matter is very good and novel. I think it's ok, it can be a little more detailed and slow, and the number of words memorized can be reduced! Not enough!

This name is a bit like a girl's video... The introduction doesn't seem to be related to the content... The first few chapter titles are very weird 😅 The first few chapters don't seem very attractive. Some of the plots are too long-winded, like just taking over the body, the mother's reaction is not real, and the meaning is understood. She just said: "I am your mother!" And then shed tears, almost. Forcibly writing it like this is a bit stealing the show, and the key point is not touching... The writing style is a bit relaxed and youthful... I feel like the style of a female channel, yes, this should be put on a female channel! Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, come on!

Ha ha! You can't delete it, just leave it hanging...