Boss Please Help Me

Among the three elements of the novel, characters, plot and environment, the author mainly lacks description of the environment, which makes it difficult to imagine what kind of world the protagonist lives in. The storyline and other aspects are okay, keep up the good work.

Book Title: The Boss Please Help Me How can I describe this book? The number of words is relatively small. I read it in one go and I think there are some places that the author should pay attention to. For example, punctuation marks should be used properly and no mistakes can be made, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to read. Also, since it is a story about a different world in mainland China, I personally think that the scenery, landforms, systems, and folk customs of this world should be attractive to people, but the author has almost no description of this. However, it is commendable that the protagonist's golden finger is quite novel. It can control the shadows of other people and other things, and it can also take away these shadows and see the memories in the shadows. I personally think this is quite novel. In general, this book is still in its infancy. If the author writes seriously, everything will still be available. The author does not need to worry, write slowly, and don't worry too much about collecting recommendation votes. As long as the writing is good enough, these will come sooner or later.