Tears Like a Spring on the Cliff

Is the paragraph a bit too long? ? I'm so tired from watching5555

The writing is quite good, but some paragraphs are too long, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Can't it be divided into more paragraphs? Paragraphing is also a basic skill in writing.

After reading a few chapters, the writing is comparable to the traditional novels I have read before. I hope you won't stop updating!

I can finally comment. It's well written, but the heroine's life is too miserable. Come on, author, wait for the update. A little suggestion is that I feel that the coherence of each chapter is not enough. Sometimes I even feel that I have missed a few chapters. Although there are explanations in later chapters, it still feels like an illusion.

I like the author's writing style. Come on 👍

The writing is good and the emotions are delicate. It is worth reading.

The heroine's life is indeed a bit difficult. Some of the plots are very delicate. Please update it as soon as possible.