
Commander, Please Sign for Your Ship Girl.
指挥官请签收你的舰娘
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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347Chapters
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At least half of the people were persuaded to quit by wearing women's clothing. I don't understand why they added women's clothing.
Originally, women's clothing was okay, but this was a threatening style of women's clothing, and my ship's wife was still being persuaded to do so even if she didn't help. Could someone convince her to kill her commander next time? It would be for her own justice. As a commander, wouldn't it be better to sacrifice herself?
Regardless of the results, I will stick with the first book.
Although I often come up with the plot in my head, I was very happy to write it, whether it was in women's clothing before or in the harem later. I like ship girls very much, and I really hope to use my own ideas to describe how the protagonist, as a commander, should treat and live in this world with ship girls and sirens. I don't like the start with Long Aotian at the beginning, because the commander himself has this attribute, and he will take whatever he wants from the ship girls in the port area. If you say you want to retire, you will retire. If you say you want to buy equipment, you will buy equipment. If you want to be a warehouse manager, you will be a warehouse manager. It would be too boring if this novel was all about how the protagonist pushes the ship girl head-on. What I want to write is how the protagonist re-establishes their bond with the ship girls, and uses every big and small thing to reflect the character of each ship girl. The protagonist mentioned above is weak because although he treats the ship girl who is very strong, he always treats her as an ordinary girl in his heart. An ordinary girl would not fight a siren with her ship's uniform, nor would she have to worry every day about whether she would fall out of favor, so the commander would exchange the equipment for other sisters. From then on, she would gather dust in the dock, like a concubine waiting for the blessing, waiting for the commander to take a look at her one day. Such a fate is really too tragic. I wrote that the main character is weak because of my own shipgirl. As a man, shouldn't I give in to a girl who is in need, not to mention that my own shipgirl is also by my side? This wasn't simply being forced, it was the protagonist who became Rusty only half-heartedly. Other than that, when dealing with outsiders, he is the commander who is so anxious that he can throw a lunch box full of lunch boxes on other people's heads.
Let me give you some thoughts on watching it. 1. Dressing up as a woman. Occasionally it's okay. What's the difference between dressing up as a woman for a long time and being transgender? 2. Bullying. After the protagonist has a powerful ship girl, he often uses the fighting power of the ship girl to force and intimidate the other party. For example, when he starts to look for a job, but he doesn't want it, then the protagonist's ship girl takes action and looks like I'm so powerful. Believe it or not, I'll kill him with one shot. Your attitude finally turned the candy store into a maid cafe, and you also used Kouki to oppress the teachers at school. Various things made the ship girl seem less kind. 3 Others were jealous of the protagonist and Kouki being together. The writing was too exaggerated, and the protagonist seemed wretched and lackluster. If you saw a pair of handsome guys and beauties on the road, would you stare at them and glare at them? Then I don't understand why passers-by watch the protagonist and Guanghui walking together like this. The ship girl comes into the house and advises the protagonist not to be angry. 4 The protagonist has too many mental activities, and I don't care what the protagonist thinks at all. It can be said that the plot is interspersed with the protagonist's mental activities. I am tired of watching it.
Originally a good novel, this is a ship girl novel focusing on commanders, but it has to include women's clothing, and it's not about building women's clothing, but about making money through women's clothing? ? I have to say that as a new author, your imagination is really unique. You won't change your gender in the later stage and become Lily Wen! A good hand of cards is a mess, so I advise you to open a new book. This book is considered useless!
If you want to dress up as a woman in this novel, just dress up as a woman from the beginning, or give a hint in the introduction. Why do you suddenly dress up as a woman halfway through? There are too many casual readers. Do you want to separate and select readers? Those who can't accept it don't need to pursue them? As a commander who protects the people, it's outrageous that he still needs to work part-time. He must work part-time and wear women's clothing. Although bringing reality into a magical world is a bit confusing. But do you dare to imagine what China's generals and soldiers looked like before the war broke out, and they were forced to dress as women for work? Such trampling on the dignity of soldiers, why do they risk their lives to protect us, and what faith do they rely on to move forward and protect their families and country? Are you suddenly dressing up as a woman after watching it well, or are you being forced by your boss and your own shipgirl for the sake of life and work? Why do you want to experience it again in a novel after being severely beaten by the real society? Is there any other ship girl like this that I can ask for? Could the commander be forced to dress as a woman? As far as I'm concerned, I gave up my position as commander and quit. The world didn't need me to save. I stopped going to school and started to survive in the wilderness. This kind of pressure is too much for a ship girl to do, so she can stay where she can to cool off. The commander is no longer in charge, and all the ship girls have dispersed. Anyway, they are all at full level, so it is easy to get along. Whoever cares about who can get the position of commander. The worst case scenario is that you can go directly to work in a factory with a guaranteed minimum wage, and just be a toolman, just to support yourself.
930,000 Words, 233 chapters, what the hell is the operation of recommendation tickets?
Well, the cross-dressing plot is too deliberate. You can have a maid and a butler if you buy some at the maid cafe. It has to be cross-dressing, and it has a long chapter. Readers who don't like cross-dressing plots can't stand it.
Women's clothing... Is not a big problem, hesitating... There is no problem But you can't write the protagonist as a doormat who just gets tossed and doesn't fight back 😅, especially when Kouki and Nagato are already stronger than others. I really can't understand why the protagonist is not angry, he is too passive (as of Chapter 88) Can anyone tell me whether the situation has improved in the future? Others are pretty good, keep up the good work
The author went too far with himself, and a good novel was ruined!
By the way, why did the author choose fantasy? When I read Kanniang novels, aren't they usually in light novels?
You guys are so awesome, it hasn't been on the shelves for so long.
/The cover is so astringent that it attracts people to click in. It can be said that the cover was well chosen. Although I didn't read a chapter of the book review Women's Clothes Are Disciplined, I still clicked on it several times.
Brother, when you write, don't imitate others too much. It's too familiar.
I haven't watched it yet, but I want to say that persistence is victory, come on! Ollie
Everything else is fine, but I can't accept women's clothing, so I slipped away.
Although the scene where a pig-footed woman disguises herself as a Lassie did gross me out, the writing was still very good in other aspects. For women's clothing, just look at a few more pictures to get used to it.
The protagonist is an old scumbag. If you like it, just like it. Don't make excuses not to accept it. OK?
I feel that Ship B is not as easy to write as Ship R. Azur Lane itself has a certain world view and internal relationships, which are somewhat limited in writing. Ship R only has the deep sea and other blanks that can be used as you like. (I don't know if it has been filled in now.) But they should all be harem-oriented. After all, Ship R is also a game of Totole. Ship B is also a lot of Lord of the Rings, all of which are lsp. Why is Ship B called Guayou 🤔
How much does the author like to use the word "is"? As I listen to the novel, I feel more and more strange