I Really Don't Want to Get Angry

Well written, this is the Buddhist update

Great author, come on, the writing is very good, I will keep following it

There is nothing wrong with the writing and language of this book. The biggest problem is that the dialogue and plot are so awkward! The first embarrassing part is when Liu Xingyu gave the guitar to the male protagonist, and the male protagonist started to pretend that he played it like a genius, and even forced to explain. There is also the dialogue of the male protagonist in Chapter 6: I play so well, what if you like my... Piano sound. This flirting is too harsh! Redesign the plot and dialogue. The continuation and transition must be clear, the conflict and rhythm must be grasped well, and the character background must be fleshed out, otherwise there is a high probability that it will be a failure.

Ou Youyou is pretty good, and I really like heartbeat signals recently. Unexpectedly, I saw the heartbeat signal to start. I support you.

The author's writing is quite good, but there is one thing I can't stand. Bai Zhou has written a love letter to Tang Zhiqing. "Bai Zhi is looking for the clear sky, and the floating boat is in love with the vanilla." The artistic conception is very beautiful, which is equivalent to telling us that she is the heroine. In the end, Liu Xingyu snatched away Bai Zhou. If you don't love her, please don't give Tang Zhiqing so many scenes. It's very misleading! This system is also a troublemaker. You have to increase your favorability.

Is the heroine Liu Xingyu serious? She doesn't feel that the male protagonist likes her, and there is no sweet plot between the two.

How should I put it? First, the author's writing style is indeed good, but is the author an uncle born in the 1970s? What do you think of the songs sung by the female protagonists? The earthy flavor comes to your face (maybe I can't appreciate it), but this definitely does not conform to the aesthetics of most of us book lovers.

Will the author have to update every year in the future? It will become less and less.

I'm really in trouble All four books on my bookshelf are broken. Eight months Four months Two months Then there is another book and this one is gone

There has been no update for several days. You can't be a eunuch anymore, can you?

The writing is very good, I hope the author will work harder

This is a story in which the protagonist has to erect an archway even though he has become a mark.

Weekly update? Let's put on some incense first

Please update. This book will definitely become popular if you keep it up. You have trouble with money??

Is it well written? Is this a eunuch? Bye-Bye…

As the name of the book suggests, the results are destined to hit the street

Updated four months ago? ? ? ? Dead eunuch

The update is too slow, I abandoned the book

It's so well written, why don't you write it again?

What's the point of showing it up if it's not updated anymore?

The writing is very realistic, including the choice of girlfriend. It's really hard for a woman to chase a man, let alone an old man in his 60s being called "brother" by a little girl in her 20s.