Tang Lion

After watching it for the first time, I have some personal comments: the description at the beginning is very good, and it can be seen that the author has worked hard at the beginning, but the subsequent description is flat and lacks description. In other words, the characters do not stand up. It feels like watching a video introducing a movie. The screen flashes by, and there is still kung fu. I personally guess that this kung fu is a tool for the protagonist to participate in the dynasty. It is estimated that the number of subsequent appearances will be relatively small. And in the case of Li Shimin, I feel that the description is too light? The person who can endure it for so long and finally succeeds in ascending to power must be too shallow in this city. You have to know how many people Li Shimin won over in the early stage? Li Jiancheng would target Li Jiancheng after he had directly shaken the crown prince's position. In such a targeted situation, Li Shimin was able to seize the opportunity and successfully ascend to the throne. Now, someone appears out of nowhere and he trusts him so much? It's almost like the protagonist does whatever he says. It's a bit taken for granted. And if it's written like this, I think it lacks a lot of exciting plots. I hope to sit back and strengthen the opposition, conflict, and fullness of the characters. Personal opinion, for reference only.

After reading two chapters, I died of poison, and I just felt like - embarrassed! Nondescript stuff, said to be an old man who died after experiencing the Anti-Japanese War, turned out to be a young man who likes to complain after time travel, and even discussed the theory of time travel with Sun Simiao. What the hell is this?

Wow, there is no heroine? Not uncomfortable?

It's okay, don't write that the protagonist is very old and reborn, because the author is not that old. You don't understand the thoughts of people of that age. Just like my own thoughts from my teens to now, my sensory perception of things is different in every aspect. You can't write about that kind of mentality. Even if a person who is nearly a hundred years old is reborn as a young person, his mentality will not be that of a young person.

A good start. Unconventional... Chapter 2, from a personal perspective, collapsed... I thought the author would use a vicissitudes of old man to introduce the protagonist, but the character design in the first chapter did not work.

By comparing the first chapter with this chapter, it is not difficult to see that this is obviously not written by the same author. The level difference is obvious. The portrayal of the protagonist in the first chapter is perfect, but the level of the second chapter has seriously declined. I don't know if you have ever seen an old man in his nineties. They are simply a treasure. Their eyes seem to see everything in the world. The second chapter has a serious conflict with the first chapter. Reading the first chapter is like climbing Mount Everest and overlooking everything. After reading the second chapter, I instantly fell to the bottom

When I saw Tianpin Martial Arts, I didn't want to watch it. This is the History Channel. Why did it become a martial arts?

I think the first chapter is great, but there is a problem with time travel later. The protagonist, an old man who is over 100 years old, meets old man Sun Simiao. How can there be a sense of seniority with a big age difference? The two people should be similar in age. The dialogue is like a dialogue between peers. It is ridiculous to change a person's mind once he travels through time.

The beginning of the first chapter is wonderfully written, I invested in it, and the author worked hard.

I just don't understand. Why do you guys who write about the Tang Dynasty always hang out with Li Shimin? Travel without rebellion. It's no use being a time traveler.

To be honest, I don't recommend that the author include industry in the ancient text. The reason why the world is so polluted now is because of industrialization. And the author will obviously evolve this book into the ancient times of industrialization, which means that industrial pollution will be advanced by more than a thousand years. From another perspective, the protagonist can be regarded as a sinner through the ages.

Are you in your 90s or 20s? I can't figure it out.

Tell me quickly, what is your relationship with the Tangshi flagship store on Taobao?

It is impossible to describe the state of mind and attitude towards things in one's 90s. The contrast with the first chapter is too strong. The level dropped instantly.

It's been a month since I stopped updating, but I still pushed it last week

The author is really good. Civil strife, locust plague two years later, now you ask Li Shimin to use grain to make wine and sell it, 666

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The Tang Dynasty went to conquer the Western Regions to satisfy Lao Li's pride.

It's interesting at first, but then it's too pretentious

The writing is very good. If the first chapter is not connected to the following, it will be a very good book. The first chapter mainly describes the character's personality, experience and general trends, but the second chapter directly overthrows it. . But after reading dozens of chapters, it's still very interesting if I don't think about the content of the first chapter. I don't understand the author's point in writing the first chapter. .

Damn it, I didn't realize the eunuch until I saw the last picture.

I still have Song female 🤓

The VIP speech I just received was different. I felt like my tonsils were speaking.

You can tell from the introduction that he has very little experience and lacks writing skills.

I didn't find it exciting, the whole process was lifeless, just like it was arranged and performed.

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This book is so disappointing, any recommendations?

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