
The Quick-Wearing Male God Is with You
快穿男神与你同在
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Fantasy Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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636Chapters
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My imagination is wide open, surprises come secretly
I have to say that this author really grasped the routines of romance novels very well... After time travel, another handsome young man came to him. No matter how he took advantage of it, the young man was unwilling to stay with the heroine. Emmm, what should I say? The author is a boy and I really have no experience in this kind of female-oriented books. I have no choice but to show my shame. Let me just say a few words about the plot design and language style. In terms of plot, the book is set in a fantasy world, but I think it is more like a fairy world, where the levels are not very clear. In general, the story of this article is centered on romance, but it is not as exaggerated as "I only have eyes for you". When the two protagonists intersect, some other necessary characters, events, objects, etc. Will appear from time to time in the novel to create a feeling of an ancient world for readers. It can be seen that in this book, the author still consciously sets a worldview framework, and readers can have a desire to explore when facing the worldview framework. One more thing I have to say is that this book is a romance novel and it actually uses the system! I really rarely see systematic writing in romance novels! When the author wrote this review, the book was still short, and there were no obvious signs yet, but I always felt that readers could read on. The author has a great imagination, and maybe there will be some surprises later on? As for the language style, the author still makes a relatively fair evaluation. Although there is nothing elegant about the book, the necessary narrative is still more written, unlike the casual descriptions of ordinary white texts. This is related to the author's seriousness. Of course, the author's language skills must also be good. New authors need encouragement. This book is very imaginative and has exquisite design. It is a book where you can seek surprises! (The copyright of this book review belongs to "New Book Recommendation Circle", author Luan Yang)
[Passers-by's Comments] Gao Fushuai CP Bai Fumei
Preliminary score: 78 points Number of words read: 50,000 words + 20 chapters Type of work: Fantasy romance Status of work: Contracted, serialized Reviewer: Zhile Travel [Book title introduction] (15/20) Book title (7.5/10) This name is straightforward and clear, indicating that it is a fast-travel novel and a romance novel, and it should have a good effect of attracting the sun. Introduction (7.5/10) This introduction is as straightforward as the title of the book. It not only explains the background of the hero and heroine, but also points out the direction of the story, while not forgetting to show affection. Three Golden Chapters(15/20) Chapter 1 Return to Modern Times (1) The first meeting between the male and female protagonists is magical enough. As the heroine Fu Ningyue was plotted and knocked down from the ninth level, she happened to be rescued by the handsome male protagonist Xie Zerui, and the two fell in love at first sight. Chapter 2 Return to Modern Times (2) When Fu Ningyue, who was originally a girl from Earth, traveled to the world of cultivating immortals, she had already obtained the golden finger of space. This time she got another system. Oops, the author is really her own mother. The system created an identity for the heroine - the daughter of Beijing real estate developer Chu Yuan. Chapter 3 Return to Modern Times (3) Fu Ningyue fabricated that she was born into an ancient martial arts family, but Xie Zerui refused to comment. Two months later, Fu Ningyue recovered from her injuries and said goodbye. Xie Zerui personally bought her a place to live in Beijing. Story(15/20) Immortal Fu Ningyue was knocked down from the ninth level, and happened to be rescued by Xie Zerui, and the two became friends from then on. After the newly obtained system operation, Fu Ningyue transformed into the illegitimate daughter of Chu Yuan, a real estate developer in the capital, and moved into the Chu family openly. In order to restore contact with the four protectors of Jiuchongtian as soon as possible, Fu Ningyue needed to earn 180 million within a month. She chose the skin care and pharmaceutical industries. With the full support of Xie Zerui and her father, her business empire expanded rapidly. Advantages(16/20) 1. The author's writing style is relaxed and humorous, with constant jokes, and frequent Internet hot words. It has a strong sense of modernity, making reading stress-free and allowing you to enjoy reading. 2. The characters are vivid and lifelike, especially the male and female protagonists have distinct personalities. Fu Ningyue's free and easy confidence, Xie Zerui's handsome and capable, make the two of them full of CP, and they are definitely a match made in heaven. 3. The plot develops reasonably and smoothly, the rhythm is relaxed and measured, and the conflicts in the story are constant, which increases the readability and cohesiveness of the novel. 4. My biggest feeling after reading this article is that the cost of love has indeed become higher now. If you want to obtain true happiness, added value such as good looks, family background, etc. Are essential. The biggest highlight(17/20) 1. The way the male and female protagonists met is magical. The female protagonist fell from the sky and landed on the male protagonist's private island. She was seriously injured, but was promptly treated and cared for by the male protagonist, and the love affair began. The author's imagination is strange and interesting. 2. The identities of the male and female protagonists are set as tall, rich and handsome CP Bai Fumei. The heroine first traveled from the earth to the world of immortality, and after obtaining the space, she successfully became an immortal and lived for thousands of years. Inadvertently, he was plotted to fall into the mortal world, and at the same time he obtained the system, which can be said to be all the benefits. The male protagonist is tall, rich, handsome and thoughtful, which the author used to attract fans. Disadvantages 1. The color, font, and artistic conception of the cover are all good, but the pattern is a little dazzling. 2. The author's chapter title is too insincere. 3. Han Chengyu In the conflict between Han Shao and Wu Shao, Han Shao's performance was low. Mr. Han's brother started to hinder the heroine's pharmaceutical business without investigating clearly, which is a bit unreasonable. Summary: This is a very interesting fantasy romance novel. The author uses humorous writing to outline a love story between a handsome man and a handsome woman. I wish the author will write more wonderful books.
Exciting imagination, hidden surprises
I have to say that this author really grasped the routines of romance novels very well... After time travel, another handsome guy arrived. No matter how he beat, scolded, or took advantage of her, the handsome guy was unwilling to stay with the heroine. Emmm, what can I say? The author is a boy and I really have no experience in this kind of female-driven books. I have no choice but to show off my humiliation. Let's talk about the plot design and language style. As far as the plot is concerned, the book is set in a fantasy world, but I think it is more like a fairy world, where the level rules are not very clear. Generally speaking, the story in this article is centered on romance, but it is not as extreme as "I only have eyes for you". When the male and female protagonists intersect, some other necessary characters, events, objects, etc. Will appear from time to time in the novel to create a feeling of an ancient world for readers. It can be seen that in this book, the author still consciously sets a worldview framework, and readers can have the desire to explore when facing the worldview framework. One more thing I have to say is that this book is a romance novel and it actually uses the system! I really rarely see systematic writing in romance novels! When the author wrote this review, the book was still short, and there were no obvious signs yet, but I always feel that readers can continue reading. The author has a great imagination, and maybe there will be any surprises later on? As for the language style, the author still makes a relatively fair evaluation. Although the book does not have any literary talent, it is not a brainless vernacular. Some necessary narrations are more written, unlike the casual descriptions of ordinary white texts. This is related to the author's seriousness. Of course, the author's language skills must also be good. New authors need encouragement. This book is very imaginative and has subtle design. It is a book where you can seek surprises! (The copyright of this book review belongs to "New Book Recommendation Circle", author Luan Yang)
[Book Review] "The Quickly Wearing God Is with You" The most beautiful form of love is to accompany you to see all kinds of things in the world~
What does love look like? She is a graceful lady, is a gentleman a good man? Is it a panlong jade table mirror, just waiting for people with eyebrows? If the two games lasted for a long time, how could they last day and night? Is it true that there was no water in the sea, but Wushan is not a cloud? . . . Fu Ningyue, the unparalleled and noble Immortal Lingyue who has conquered the entire country, has been pure and reticent for thousands of years, just because she has not met the right person. Xie Zerui, the cold and aloof emperor of the prosperous and beautiful age, is pure and stoic just to let his lover see the best version of himself. When they put aside everything in the Nine Heavens and met each other in the mortal world, the arrogant Immortal Lord is a versatile beauty who can act coquettishly and cutely, and can also run a family and start a business; the aloof Emperor of Heaven is an all-around warm man who can sweet talk, make money and fight monsters. Their love is that if I love you, then I must be a kapok tree near you, standing with you as the image of a tree, sharing the cold waves, wind and thunder, and thunderbolts; sharing the mist, liulan, and hauni, accompanying and cuddling with each other for life after life. This book "The God of Time Will Be with You" is placed in the fantasy and romance category. It does not have the various levels and upgrades to fight monsters in fantasy books, except for a magical and cute system. The author focuses more on the various interesting interactions between the male and female protagonists in real life. They have lived for thousands of years in the setting, and they are like the most ordinary children in the world, with the most real joys, sorrows and joys. The arrogant Immortal Lord will feel guilty about whether her boyfriend cares about his money, and will be happy for her boyfriend's unintentional company; the aloof Emperor of Heaven will worry that his girlfriend doesn't like his image today, and will be addicted to his girlfriend's simplest smile. . . A boyfriend like Xie Zerui, who has financial strength, unparalleled good looks, and is willing to provide you with the simplest companionship, is probably the dream of all girls. But what I like the most is the heroine Fu Ningyue in the book. She is independent and confident. She can not only be a gentle and graceful woman in front of her boyfriend, but also be a powerful and independent strong woman in the shopping mall. Beautiful love is never simply giving or giving from one party, but the long-term mutual understanding and companionship between two independent individuals. If you want to see the simplest and most beautiful form of love, if you want to have a warm fantasy journey, you might as well read this warm romance novel covered in fantasy.
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
The author's writing style is so good that I was fascinated by it.
Dear author, I have invested in your new book, come on😊
Happy New Year😁2020 is getting better and better
The author is a newbie and doesn't know how to create posts. I discovered this operation accidentally. Well, the purpose of posting is to introduce Wenwen to everyone. This article is mainly realistic. The plot will be more life-oriented, and it may also be more biased towards the real life of parents with shortcomings. The system is just an adjustment, and of course it will play a more important role. Wenwen prefers to travel slowly. I will write more comprehensively about each world, and strive to read each world as an independent novel. It is tentatively decided that the second world will be about the 1970s and 1980s, about the Northwest that many authors have never written about. I hope it will bring you a different reading experience. In addition, the identity of the male protagonist is quite special, which will be revealed later. The male and female protagonists have memories in each world, and as the world changes, their emotions will become more and more understanding. Well, what I want to express is such an article. Of course, there will be many readers who don't like this tone and will prefer quick and refreshing articles, but I still choose to find another way and slowly describe what I want to express in the article. The article may be relatively long, initially set at around 8 million words. The author may have a lot of shortcomings when he just started writing. If you have good opinions or suggestions, you can tell them. The author will read them carefully and work hard to improve his writing skills and strive to make his family enjoy the reading process more and more.
The content is fascinating and the writing is very detailed. The author must keep writing!
Great author, let's learn from each other!
Return visit, investment has been made (just the last chance, haha, so timely), everyone, please come on ❤️
It's a good book. I'll save it and hope to keep it updated. By the way, I would like to recommend my work "Spiritual Master Volume".
Yeah, it's a new cover. Where was it made? It's really well done 😁
We have received it, we have received it from each other, and we have encouraged each other.