Immortal Path Space

I have been reading novels for 13 years. This novel actually makes people want to read it more and more. The author is actually a newbie? All I can say is you are a genius. You are destined to be a good writer of novels. Except for some minor flaws in the details, the entire concept and layout are perfect. There is one thing you must pay attention to next. Next, the protagonist must use some kind of adventure in the immortal space. Then he became an elite who leapfrogged the challenge. The plot must be reasonable. Never try to conquer a larger realm. If you develop in this direction, readers will not get bored as they read later. Many novels just don't grasp this degree well, which makes them more boring and boring for readers as they read. In the end, most of them abandoned the book. Personally, I can barely finish two out of ten novels at most. It's not that I don't have money to watch it, it's that it's not worth my money to watch it. I summarized the fantasy novels over the years. Most people give up on this book, not because the author didn't grasp the details well. There are nine books out of ten. They all happen to the protagonist. There is only one copy left. There are just too many female protagonists, and many people don't like to watch studs. Author, think about it, readers can see more than 100 pictures in a book. Even two or three hundred. It shows that readers recognize the novels you wrote earlier. Otherwise, if your writing is not good, the first few, dozen or dozens of pages will basically be discarded, and it is impossible to read more than 100 chapters. Then here comes the problem. What is the reason? There's only one problem. That's the protagonist. For example, the main character is abusive, and the protagonist's abilities are not outstanding enough and are mediocre. For example, you can't fight beyond the level. For example, the protagonist can conquer a great realm and still win. After just one or two of them, it will become boring and impossible to watch. Especially during the period when your novel is being serialized. Because the author is too late to update. I have found novels of the same kind that are better than yours. Then when I look back, I may delete the previous novel. So you have to keep readers coming back. This is the first time I have written a review of so many words. I really don't want your genius to be buried. Write a novel well. You definitely have a future. Come on!

I also think the book is beautiful! ! ! The book is beautiful! ! ! The book is beautiful! ! ! Say the key points three times! ! ! Although the author's writing style is not very strong, it is much better than the pretentious slaps in the face that some authors like to write! It's not like some book reviews say it's written like a primary school student. I can't write at the level of a junior high school student! (Facepalm) If the author is a newbie, he would have written really well! ! It's just that the protagonist in the article doesn't have any big adventures except meeting his golden finger space! The author could have just given him another great adventure. (Not forced) Also, I like the protagonist very much and don't want the protagonist to die alone. If I can't create a heroine who can match the protagonist, Shui Rou'er is actually not bad! I don't recommend Harem (of course this is just a suggestion). It took me more than two days to read it in one go, and now I give the author good reviews! ! Come on! ! !

The author has made great progress. From the first 2-30 chapters, which were quite satisfactory, he gradually developed his own style. Now, I feel that the more I read, the more interesting and exciting it becomes. 2500 coins offered! Come on!

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that there are too many poisonous points. I will list them one by one below. Welcome to the bad guys. (1) The monetary system collapsed. It was said earlier that during the Qi training period, the maximum number of spiritual stones could be several hundred or thousands, but the single item sold at an auction during one Qi training period could reach hundreds of thousands. (2) The author does not remember events and does not match the context. 300+ Blood Ganoderma sold for 14,000, but two sold at auction for 90,000. Can one auction double your stuff? (3) The world of cultivating immortals is too white. Who would dare to buy at an auction held in a city with a Golden Elixir Stage, where a Foundation Establishment Stage monk could use his coercion to threaten others? ? (4) The protagonist is trash. Not an ordinary waste, with the same 4 spiritual roots, Shouhou reached the same level as the protagonist with far fewer resources than the protagonist. Among ordinary people, they are also useless. What's the use of having so many resources? ? There are too many left, so keep reading and pick out bit by bit to complain about.

It's quite interesting to watch, but the author's control of details is too poor. The rest are pretty good, nothing toxic, and there are only a few disgusting routines. But the details are really hard to describe. Such as spiritual stones and shops. The author's setting requires the use of foundation-building pills except Tianlinggen, otherwise it will be useless. Then there is the old routine of the secret realm where the outside is extinct, and only by practicing Qi can you enter and step on the foundation-building medicinal materials. One pill of Foundation Establishment Pill was auctioned for 350,000 spirit stones. I don't know how it will be round when the Foundation Establishment is all over the ground in the later stage 2 Shop Pig's Trotter You opened a brewing shop because you had space to grow medicine, but you offended a family in the city and couldn't leave the city. However, the shop's monthly business was very good. Aren't others suspicious? They are constantly being sold every month and there is no way to purchase them. Even a fool knows that there is something going on. He has opened an alchemy shop again. It is probably like this. I haven't finished reading it yet. Overall, if the author perfects these details, I think this book will be really good.

They have all transformed into gods and refined their bodies, but there is still no heroine. Not a stallion, but having dysfunction is even more disgusting 🤢

Sorry, the foreman refused to get off work while moving bricks at the construction site today, so the update is a bit late.

I really don't understand. Doesn't the protagonist have the formula for the Jingyuan Pill? If he didn't hand it in because he was afraid of being thought of changing his ways to become an immortal, but he was so forced that the demon clan killed all the mortals. Why didn't he announce it? The release of this elixir will not do any harm to the protagonist, but it can effectively fight against the demon clan. Too selfish. Real. It's fine if you're afraid of danger, but the protagonist just doesn't want to make friends. I don't want to see it anymore when I see this. So disgusting. The writing is so rubbish. It's clearly written about the protagonist farming in a low-key manner, and it also writes about a race war. Do you want to end it by writing the protagonist in the end? Don't be rubbish. It's okay at first, but the more you read later, the more disgusting it becomes.

12 Monthly passes, it's no problem to add more, right?

What a nonsense, a bunch of mortals created their own kung fu! Even the most rubbish exercises have been continuously summarized and revised by countless ancestors over hundreds of millions of years with their blood and lives. The author used his brain! If anything.