The Beekeeper from Another World

As an old bookworm, I have the habit of searching for books on new book recommendations, new book lists, and newcomer lists every month. I just saw a 107-word book on the new book list. I thought it was very interesting. Well, it has a new title and a new editor. I don't know what to do, so I won't comment for now. I have read about 20 chapters. Well, to be honest, the writing is average according to current standards. I can see that the author has put a lot of thought into it. The level of these dozens of chapters is probably not much different from Dou Po, the enlightenment work of many people. As for the subsequent plot narration and world view, it is not clear yet. This kind of work should have been very good in the era of Dou Po, but at this point in time, it may not be interesting. Do you understand what I mean? In 2019, online novels can be said to have reached their peak. Many excellent works have gathered together. This is the best era for veteran authors, but it is also the worst era for new authors, because there are so many outstanding works in various fields with different styles. Nowadays, newcomers no longer have much time to sharpen their writing style, and now no readers (or not that many readers) have the patience to wait for them to grow up. And how many authors can persevere in the days when their grades are not good, and keep quiet in order to achieve great success in the future? How happy is that? Everyone has to make ends meet. When you are under multiple pressures from family, friends, society, and your own life, it really fits that sentence. You must have a million tons of courage to survive strong. Back to the topic, looking through the recent books, it is not difficult to find that the number of cultivation novels is not as large as it was some time ago, and more of them are supernatural or casual. Maybe the traditional cultivation fantasy novels can no longer shake the increasingly rough nerves of us readers, or maybe I am older and prefer to read Those slow-paced, relaxed and humorous books want to carve out a virgin land in their hearts to cultivate chrysanthemums and get away from the hustle and bustle (actually, they just want to salt fish). Fantasy authors are all racking their brains to think of new tricks and new routines, cultivating in the modern world, cultivating in the world of cultivation, cultivating in the supernatural world, cultivating in the world of wizards, there are many, many. Many authors feel that the reason why they are not famous is because they wrote late or for many other reasons, but in fact they are mediocre. The setting of the world is limited by the world view of the previous author, and the plot content cannot escape the existing limitations. Except for some settings of the protagonist, even the character, villain, CP, teacher, power system, etc. Are the same. When faced with a choice, we can all guess what the meaning of such a story is. Of course, not all such settings are bad. Most of the books by Wen Chao Gong, the books about changing lives with krypton money, and the books about August Flying Eagle contain this traditional cultivation setting, but most of them make up for it through detailed descriptions of plots and characters, which can also be enjoyable to read. But for newcomers, if the pen is slightly lacking in sharpness, they need to take a more eccentric approach. The setting of beekeeping can actually be very interesting, in terms of the type of bees (we set it in a fantasy world), for combat use (it can be divided into single bee fighting, group bee fighting, adding poison to them, adding bloodthirsty feedback, adding combat madness, adding sharp armor breaking, plus There are many body formations), auxiliary uses (detection, medical treatment, parasitism control, treasure hunting, hallucinogenic types), edible (specialized in absorbing spiritual power equivalent to spiritual stones, simply delicious, providing toxins, for others to eat*^o^*); and then to raising The selection of bee sites, those that can add buffs to bees, those that can make special honey, those that can produce mutations, all kinds of things; There are also the selection of plants, which ones are used for combat, choose the ones that proliferate very fast, it is best to complement the bees, what kind of combat bee hunting Hunting provides it with nutrients to help it grow. Take a beehive with you and a few seeds. It can produce combat effectiveness in the forest in a short time. There are other useful plants that I won't go into details. A setting like this is very interesting. Isn't there some kind of power of faith? The bees that are being raised join in. Who says that bees cannot have faith? What kind of poison is faith? Let them believe in the queen bee, and the queen bee believes in the protagonist, and finally extracts it and supplies it to the protagonist. I just made a random setting, don't worry about it. All in all, don't be restricted by clichés, boldly and conscientiously write about the world you think is interesting, and you won't be bad. Well, that's about it. Come on, author 🙂

Don't write too hastily. Write carefully, and what you write will definitely not be guessed.

Unintentional first

That Xiu Xiu is really a failure... The inexplicable fact that she got the inheritance feels very abrupt, and the appearance of the protagonist is not mentioned much, so Xiu Xiu becomes a little fan girl inexplicably. And why should you give her the trophies you get from killing enemies... If you say that you have thoughts and intentions about her or think she has good prospects and want to invest in her, you can also say that you want to give her hush money or something... You suddenly have a share in it... Almost let me People wonder if the author hired a ghostwriter... Everything else about the imaginary plot is pretty good... It's strange that Xiuxiu has another male supporting character who recycles things... Sigh... I hope the author can revise it... I really can't watch it if it stays like this later.

Why don't you dissect the key parts and sell them as spiritual stones, and throw the rest into the Kingdom of God for decomposition?

Author, I really admire this book A very good theme, a good beginning, but you ruined it in many places. I think those places are really problematic and even if you want to suppress the development of the protagonist in some places, don't treat people as blind In the front of the alchemy, there is a bottle 100 100 bottles and 10,000 results. Good guy, what did you say in the next sentence, 100 bottles and 5,000? Do you treat people as fools? 🥱 Okay, I don't want to say anything else. I will just say this. In fact, the book can still be used if it is refilled and some places are removed. The development is still good.

Bee God (✘) Crazy God (✔)

I read the first chapter and found it interesting, but I have a question: Is there any necessary connection between the tragic experience of the protagonist in his previous life and the subsequent story 🤔

Author, you are too slow. Everyone updated in July, and now they have more than 1 million, while you only have 330,000.

Author, I am going to wait for you to enter the palace and then imitate a novel based on yours. Come to the palace quickly 🤓🤓

The first part was barely readable, but the later chapters became more and more uncomfortable. By the time I got to chapter 90, I clearly had an advantage in alchemy, but I was not very strong, but I chose to join the war hall. Even though the sect had no restrictions on alchemists as mentioned earlier, it was just a plot that was forced into the plot. The author could hardly continue writing.

I suggest the author change Chapter 79. Write two more and change them into emotional scenes. Turn compulsion into emotion. Here are two suggestions: 1. Wear the Tongtian Peak on your head to reveal that the protagonist is an alchemist. 2. Be kind to her and win her favor. After all, as you explained in the previous article, Xiao Lian is from a mountain village, so you can add the attributes of simplicity and kindness to her. 3. I see that you, Lao Liu, are not good at writing about emotions, but it would be better to have an explanation, otherwise I would read your seventy-nine and eighty chapters. A small number of people will be discouraged. After all, although it is a novel, the sense of immersion is negative. It feels bad. Personal advice.

Obviously there are golden fingers and resources. As long as the protagonist reaches the golden elixir stage, he can create unlimited golden elixir angels with combat power to dominate the sect. However, he still has to sacrifice the near and seek the distant position to gain power. He is affected by the second-generation immortal spirit. It is really frustrating to watch. Even if you have the power, how many golden elixir subordinates can you have? Just get tens of thousands of golden elixir angels and you can't destroy those subordinates. Is it possible that the sect's golden elixir stage masters can have tens of thousands? Hundreds of thousands? Dozens of golden elixir stage angels can destroy the Nascent Soul stage with self-destruction attacks. I am afraid of this and that all day long.

There are a lot of poison points, I can't bear it any more. Sorry, I'm withdrawing.

I have a question, can the author answer it? Does the Kingdom of God only have ordinary flowers, plants and trees? The Kingdom of God should be similar to Heaven, right? The Kingdom of God is not deserted. The King of Gods left nothing behind? Angels living in the kingdom of God don't plant some fairy flowers and grasses?

I think the protagonist can completely admit that he is the number one person in the insect sea. There is an elder behind you, and those people will only force you to tell how to do it. You can just say enslave a queen bee and then contract a team of vanguards. Without the queen bee, the contracted spirit beast cannot be replenished even if it dies. But with the queen bee, you can use the queen bee as an information transfer station, and use the spirit bees controlled by the queen as cannon fodder. If the spirit bees are promoted, they will be directly replaced by the vanguard team, and as long as you are not exposed in the future. You have already shown your face in front of the elders and have been labeled as an alchemy genius, and this tactic will only benefit the Spirit Beast Sect. You have wanted to be taken seriously by the sect before, and now is the best time. When your golden elixir reaches its peak, you can open another peak and recruit disciples. It will be much better than doing it alone! And the most important thing is that you can take out the queen bee in your kingdom of God, label it with you, and give you and her beliefs, and others will take them as slaves, but they will only be slaves. The author can completely write the protagonist who still believes in it, so that he can vigorously develop believers. The protagonist has always been a small soldier, totally inferior to the master of the peak, and you are a genius in alchemy. Why is your spirit bee so strong? You can say that you spent a lot of resources to fill it in, and others cannot force you to hand it over. Even if you hand it over, you can use the cloud of faith to forcibly deduce an elixir with some effect. Now I think the protagonist is still not out of pretense and slaps in the face... I thought the protagonist would become a master, with tens of millions of disciples behind him. If someone comes to the door in the future, just call the disciples to join him, wouldn't it be beautiful?

Brothers, I can't do it anymore, I'm too poisonous. In fact, it's better to go to other places, but you will get poisoned and die after reading more than 80 chapters. I tried my best 💀💀💀💀💀

Bee God is a bit low. Author, do you keep bees for your faith? Perhaps it might eventually be like the Zerg race, but wouldn't it be better to raise some blue dragons, white tigers, Suzakus, Xuanwu Mountains and Seas Classic beasts? The first, middle, and later chapters may not be as good as the final chapter, but the title and introduction of your book directly kill this possibility. I have no choice but to choose to pass it by without adding it to the bookshelf.

The characters have no charm and are too utilitarian. Obviously sometimes villains can have bright spots as enemies. A villain father sacrifices himself to save his son, and there is no need to clear his name. His being a villain does not conflict with his emotions, so he can be given a decent ending! Just die. He died an unclean death. He was brainwashed into a believer by the protagonist and helped kill his own son. It's more comfortable to read a book with big eyes

The writing is very good, why did you stay in the palace for a while? ? ? ?

I've been busy for two days and it turns out it's been almost a month...

The update time is getting longer and longer, and it is estimated that this book will be obsolete.

To be honest, this book is very inconsistent. A sect that has been cultivating immortals for who knows how long, but you don't know as much about the animal world as you do? It's okay if you are a professional beekeeper. It insults our intelligence. It's like this in the first three golden chapters. You can imagine what happens next.

It seems that there will be another Dongfang Invincible in the world.

This book is so beautifully written, I have read over 100 of them, and I am addicted to it. In today's fast-paced society, I have long been in a book shortage, but this book can make me completely forget myself. If I hadn't experienced it myself, I would really be unbelievable. This book does not stick to forms and routines, its imagination is astonishing, and its writing is excellent. It is actually a novel that needs to be read carefully and carefully. I give this novel 8 points! Come on author!

The update finally started, how long has it been?

So wonderfully written! ! ! The author must keep writing! ! ! ! ! I'm really looking forward to the following plot! ! ! ! ! !

It feels like it should be a harem story, or a scumbag type one.

A few months ago I read chapter 30, then two months later I read chapter 35 and now I read chapter 41. Author, you update one chapter every month, right?

The spirit beasts raised by the Beastmaster Clan are not fighting partners at all, they are just a bunch of pigs who can play whatever they want!