
Three Kingdoms Mall System
三国商城系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 183k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Qin-Han & Three Kingdoms
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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455Recommends
76Fans
78Chapters
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Regarding the use of "I" and "you" in the article. In ancient times, commoners and servants generally did not use it. In addition, "you" cannot say it yourself and apply it to yourself. Also, the little girl's character needs to be changed. Try to change it within a dozen chapters, otherwise it will be very toxic and many people will abandon the book. Your use of this ancient terminology is not very appropriate. When I can be white, I will be white. It makes me so embarrassed that I almost feel like I have cancer. At present, the protagonist only shows the golden finger that he knows. After all, he is a time traveler. You still need to be resourceful. We cannot always rely on "Wenquxing" to make suggestions. I didn't watch much of the rest of it, except after I conquered the family. In short, it is still suitable for most people to watch. For beginners, the choice of words and sentences is very important. It's even more important to take the boutique route. The author needs to plan his words and sentences. For specific details, you can refer to the historical novels of the great master. Finally, I hope the author will cheer up^0^~
I see you advertising everywhere! Come and take a look! Your uncle's eunuch!
During the Three Kingdoms era, medicine, salt, and spices were worth thousands of gold. Glass, and these modern things work wonders.
Looking at the word count at the end of the book, Te Niang was speechless. Is this still an advertisement? It's really just a look and it's gone! It can't even relieve my boredom all morning!
I just read it in another book and it turned out to be 100,000 words long.
Are these the three mall systems you use to advertise?
Isn't it you, have you finished the book? The income is not as big as the investment! You are causing trouble!
Advertise everywhere, just update more, who will read tens of thousands of words?
? ? Just advertising? ? ?
I saw the author himself advertising. . . The most important thing is that I made a typo 😂 Came here to take a look
I hope that the author will go out, but there will be too many authors to go out? Go out and understand the prices!
Here, make money together, a bunch of licking dogs. Advertising😡
What? There are so many ads and less than a hundred of them are gone?
I was introduced to it by the author from other comment sections, and ended up finishing it hastily. After seeing everyone's comments, I think it's not a waste of time.
I was deceived by the advertisement 😓😓😓, how can I finish the book with so little! I don't have the courage to go in and see 😟
This half-white and ancient style of writing... Tsk, tsk, I'm not used to it
Are there any ads? Raise a paw😁
The book is very good, good, very good. If it keeps up like this, it will definitely make a splash at the starting point. However, there is one bad thing, and that is the title. At first, I didn't want to read the book, but I still felt bored. After reading it, sure enough, it's great. , For example, "Fu Han", the title of this book is very good, intuitive and innovative. So, author, come on, I will support you. By the way, don't lose the protagonist's IQ, and don't lose the other three people. It will be perfect if everyone's personality characteristics are clearly highlighted. By the way, author, I have a small request, that is, the protagonist should not use the Li family as a thing. Come on, author
When the sister saw me, I felt a bit emotional and felt uncomfortable all over.
The character of the protagonist's sister needs to be changed. How can she control the world if she can't even control her sister? If you don't use your money quickly, you will regret it if you die.
Why am I a little impulsive?
I just read a book with more than 90,000 words. Someone angrily threw 10,000 yuan, and the collection instantly exceeded 20,000 yuan. Why did I feel a little impulsive when I saw it 😂
It's okay, I'll give you a little support and I'll reward you with 500 yuan. I hope you'll continue to work hard!
After reading a few chapters, I felt it was too novice 😅 Farewell
Note the pinyin for these two names 😥 😡
Double open! ! ! Author, you are lost! ! !
The author can do it. I have seen advertisements for this book in the comment sections of more than a dozen novels on my bookshelf. I won't tell you whether it's good or not, but because of the author's hard work, let's raise it first and take a look.
I feel like it's not easy to become popular, and the plot is a bit dull. Nowadays, the urban novels are better, but the historical ones are hard to say. Also, the way he talks is very awkward. It's half-white and not white, and there's no sense of involvement at all. What I want to complain about the most is that the title of Immortal Emperor is so awkward! The meaning of the emperor is already very obvious, whether it is the literal meaning or the meaning, add the word "" in front of it...
I originally wanted to leave, but after reading the book reviews, I became curious. I want to see how poisonous the little girl is at her end
Can Lao Tie know how to be a eunuch? If you don't mind me, I support you