Onmyoji Who Lives in the Second Dimension

I feel that the subject matter is very appetizing, but the plot is unsatisfactory. The plot of the novel is a big flaw because it involves whether everyone will follow it. Why are some fantasy novels unsatisfactory, but there are many recommendations and monthly votes, that is, they have fighting plots. To be simpler, everyone should go to the cinema to watch movies and watch less romantic movies. Because it is bland, it can be bland, but there should be a little bit of passion. A bland plot is difficult to write, and it requires a lot of writing skills. Since there is no technical way to achieve immediate results, then we need skills. Write something about eliminating demons, fighting, and pretending to be b. Isn't it okay? It's too bland and I don't want to update it. Personal opinion: I will continue to keep it. Come on.

The dramas that appear in the full text are as follows: "For the Time" 1. Chuunibyou also needs to fall in love 2. Stupid girl 3. Online wife cannot be a girl 4. Gabriel's fall 5. Soft-tone girl 6. Backstreet girl 7. Delusional student union 8. My sister can't be that cute 9. When the name of the flower has not been heard 10. There is indeed something wrong with my youthful love story 11. Miss Kaguya wants me to confess 12. The wasted daily life of a female high school student 13. Mr. Elmanga 14. The Magical Index "The Origin of the Big Star Overlord Festival" 15. How to develop a passerby heroine

I read Chapter 75 and can't stand it anymore. I don't understand the point of writing these characters out. Is this going to make people hate me? After watching it for a long time, it was either the male protagonist being arrogant or grabbing pineapple buns, and then a bunch of shameless female supporting characters. I was convinced and couldn't like the characters at all I gave up.

Why do I feel like the main character is so zz... I've read more than 90 chapters, and I felt it was okay at the beginning! The more I watch, the more I feel that the male protagonist is a bit zz…

The protagonist is a two-dimensional person, but he doesn't know anyone. Is it reasonable?

Ah, it's so cool to watch it all in one go. A December vote would be disrespectful, I just ask for more.

I suggest the author write more about the daily life of the protagonist and the shikigami. I feel that the shikigami doesn't appear much except during battles. He is like a tool man. It is very interesting to write more about the daily life of the shikigami. For example, it is very interesting to go to the attribute cafe in Hannya women's clothing. The race between Miko and Mengpo on the school playground created urban legends. The daily routine of just writing is a bit boring. Anyway, can there be more shikigami scenes?

"I'm back." "Welcome home." Brush God, who was watching TV, heard Tsuchimikado's voice, turned his head and said with a smile. "I'm exhausted. I played games all afternoon without realizing it." Tsuchimikadou fell on the sofa. Yukionna had returned to her shikigami state and was sitting outside the refrigerator door, blowing the cold wind. Perhaps the temperature of the snow girl is low. Although the refrigerator door is always open, it does not affect the freezing of the freezer layer. Although there is nothing in the frozen layer. After resting for a while, Tsuchimikadomu stood up and said, "I'll cook first, what do you want to eat?" "Anything is fine." "Ice cream." Tsuchimikadomu looked at the Yuki-onna speechlessly, eating ice cream for dinner... Should I say that it's really you? Whether it is Wang Dong or Tuyumendong, Tuyumendong is very good at cooking. Before time travel, his mother deceived him when he was a child and he would not be able to find a wife if he could not cook. So Wang Dong studied for more than a year and still knew how to cook some home-cooked dishes. As for Tsuchimikado, it was because he lived in a dead house and lived alone that he was forced to learn some Japanese cooking. Tsuchimikado also benefits from this, and he knows some Chinese and Japanese cuisine. Of course, Tsuchimikado himself is usually too lazy to cook. Things are different now. In the past, when one person ordered takeout, at least I could barely afford it. Now, when three people order takeout, my wallet can no longer bear the pressure. Although Yuki-onna and Broom God are actually shikigami, they don't have to eat, but Tsuchimikadou always felt uncomfortable eating alone while letting them watch. Of course, you have to eat together to have a good meal. Tsuchimikadou looked in the refrigerator and took a few eggs, "How about we eat omelette rice today?" "No problem." Broom God is always so easy to talk to, he insists on cleaning the room every day, and he eats whatever Tsuchimikadou eats. As for the Yuki Onna... "Is there any ice cream after eating?" "Yes." Tsuchimikadofu had a dark look on his face. However, if you think about it carefully, insisting on eating ice cream is actually one of the cute features of the Yuki Ono! …… After dinner, Broom God took over the task of washing the dishes. Mendong Tsuchimika looked at the mysterious charm in his pocket and couldn't hold back his hand. This shot... This shot will definitely produce SSR. "Do you want to summon a shikigami?" Tsuchimikado Fuyu smiled bitterly, I can't help it, SSR is too tempting, I can't control myself at all! "God Broom, I'm about to summon, do you want to come and see it together?" God Broom walked over quickly, sat next to Tsuchimudong, and curiously looked at the talisman in Tsuchimudong's hand. Tsuchimikado Mento discovered that whether it was the Snow Maiden or the Broom God, their expressions were very serious when the Shikigami summoned them. Of course, the snow girl's face is still expressionless. After reciting the incantation, a lazy and charming voice sounded.  It doesn't matter if you didn't draw an SSR, why don't you even get an SR? But... The three-tailed fox is quite pretty, hehe! "Three-tailed fox, follow your call." Every word and every action of the three-tailed fox seems very tempting. "Mitsuo, who... Are you?" Tsuchimikadomu was about to say hello when he suddenly heard a sound outside the window. Everyone looked over and saw a girl with an eyepatch hanging on the window sill, looking inside in surprise. When she saw that the other party had discovered her, she suddenly panicked and her hands relaxed involuntarily, "Ah." "Three-tails, Snow Girl, save people." When Tsuchimikado Fuyu saw this scene, he didn't care whether the other party saw the scene of her drawing cards. He saved the people first. You must know that this is the third floor. If you fall down, you will die or be disabled. The three-tailed fox and the snow girl immediately rushed over. Although the snow girl is stronger than the three-tailed fox, the snow girl is a magical shikigami, while the three-tailed fox is a physical type. In terms of speed, Sanwei can outstrip Yuki-onna. I saw Sanwei rushing out of the balcony, jumping up, grabbing the girl's arm, and Sanwei's tail curled up and hung on the edge of the balcony. By the time the Yuki Onna and Tsuchimikadou passed by, the three-tailed fox had already pulled the girl into the room. "Are you okay?" Tsuchimikado Mendo asked. The girl shook her head and sat on the ground with a pale face without saying a word. Tsuchimikadofu didn't know what to do for a while. He had never encountered such a situation before! Because of my own reasons, I scared the girl terribly. Now the girl doesn't speak, what should I do? Waiting online, it's very urgent! "Rikka." "?" Tsuchimikadou looked at the girl, what does Rikka mean? Her name? "Kotori Rikka, my name is." "Oh, hello, my name is Tsuchimikadomu." "Are you... Seimei-sama?" Kotori Yurikka raised her head and looked at Tsuchimikado. Although she was still a little scared about what just happened, she really wanted to know the answer. "No, I'm not." Tsuchimikado denied decisively. Kotori Yurikka was stunned for a moment, a little frustrated, but when he saw the three tails next to him, he seemed to have thought of something, and immediately covered his eyes and shouted: "The eyes... The eyes are resonating..." The four Tsuchimikadou and the others looked at Kotori Yurikka speechlessly. , "That..." "In order to find you, I have come here after countless years." "Little brother Xiaodong, is this your little girlfriend?" The three-tailed fox curiously poked Tsuchimikado's cheek, and Tsuchimikado also looked confused. "Um... Do you and I know each other?" "Yes, in the long past, you and I have met. The moment I saw you, this evil king's true eye told me about the fate." Tsuchimikadomu's mouth twitched, Damn, your serious look almost made me believe it! This guy can't be a chuunibyou! "Um, what's the matter with you?" Tsuchimikado Menfu didn't bother to listen to the other party's second son, and asked directly. It's a pity that Kotori Yurikka has completely entered the state and continued: "The Evil King's True Eye uses a holy heart to control the power of darkness. It has the power to see through everything. Therefore, you are the Seimei-sama I am looking for." The corners of Tsuchimikado Menfu's mouth twitched, "You were just fooling around!" Kotori Yurikka's eyes wandered, "But there is no doubt that you are Seimei-sama." "I am not." "Then What's going on with them?" "Cosplay." "Then why is her tail so powerful?" "Then why does she appear suddenly?" Br> "How many have you seen?" "Lin, soldiers, fights, all, formations, formations..." "Then you have seen them all!" Tsuchimikado Fuyu raised his forehead and made sure to close the curtains the next time he was summoned. But... Who would have thought that there would be people hanging outside with ropes to watch him summon!

Why did the feeling change after I regained my memory? The male protagonist started to think with his lower body. When I saw a heroine who only wanted to confess to others, and the following heroines Secretary Fujiwara, Yui felt that the emotional foundation was completely insufficient. All she thought about was how to get into the harem. It completely changed. I thought the author had changed.

When I saw the main character traveling through time and not recognizing the anime characters, I decided to leave. (´-ι_-｀) But I still have to leave this book review, because it is the responsibility of Shennong! 😎

The writing is okay. It's just that the male protagonist gives me a weird feeling. I don't know how to put it, um... It's that the male protagonist's actions give me a feeling similar to licking a dog, or that he has no temper? Anyway, it's not very pleasant to watch. Also, the name of this book is Onmyoji. Why is there less content related to Onmyoji? It's all about daily life, and it's not the daily life with Shikigami, but the daily life with other daily anime characters⊙▽⊙In addition, after reading other people's comments, some people said that the male protagonist is useless. I didn't feel it at first, but after reading some plots related to martial arts, I really feel that the male protagonist is such a useless person. With such a good golden finger, he is so strong, and he can't win even though there are so many peopleヘ(_ _ヘ), even the passerby villains can't be defeated←_←Haha, but the writing style and structure are all good enough to be worth reading, so I'll give it a look. I hope there's nothing toxic at the end.

The author said that the protagonist is the cutest boy in the school So I found a cute boy, source of this picture, game Game name "Mobile Sentai, Grand Battle"

I finished reading it after twenty or thirty chapters, and the overall feeling is that there is a big gap in my memory. Personally, I feel that yy is okay, but when I see a type that I like, it feels a bit twisted. The sudden change in personality made me think that I was reading a harem manga novel again 😁. I thought that when the protagonist regained his memory, he was still the same as before, except for the changes in his speech, and his personality was still the same. It would be good, and it wouldn't be too abrupt. After all, this is a daily-oriented work. If there are too many yy elements, it feels a bit distorted. Although I was an otaku who liked anime characters in my previous life, this feeling is still understandable 🙂. I like the author's books. I hope that the author's future plots will have less yy elements. It is actually acceptable to have a harem~ I have already given my monthly ticket~ Come on, author ✊✊✊

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When it comes to writing about tabletop games, I personally recommend Dungeons and Dragons, that is, DND, and then use Thor to introduce real-life running groups, and then see the response. If everyone likes it, write more occasionally. After all, running groups are long-term. If people don't like it, just write a few chapters and then tear up the cards. After all, things are unpredictable, and group destruction is normal. If I write about Yu-Gi-Oh, for me personally, I collected cards and watched animations when I was a child, but it is too monotonous for novels, Magic: The Gathering? That thing is so complicated, how can you play it?

Let's break it up. Just dismantle the Evil King's True Eye and the Black Flame User CP at the beginning.

It was fine before the memory was restored, but it gradually changed after that. The protagonist and the supporting characters all fell in love. Suddenly, everything in daily life was turned into love for you, but the key is that when you fall in love, you have a little emotional foundation in the front. If you want her to like it, just like it? The protagonists are also various common people. I can only say that yy is too much. It is good to write about daily life.

You say it's poisonous, and there's nothing unbearable about it. You say it's good-looking, but I feel like I don't have the motivation to continue reading.

After the protagonist's memory is unblocked, with his current connections, he can develop his own mobile game (Itchy Mouse). Production team:                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     （/）                （/） ，（）， Except that registering a bank account may be troublesome (it requires registration by an adult taxpayer with a local permanent residence and a guarantee from a guarantor), in most cases the protagonist can solve it on his own.

I am starting a new book again... I hope you can support me. This time it is a two-dimensional submission. I have wanted to write this type of book for a long time.

The contract was signed immediately, the contract has arrived, and everyone can invest.

Guys, please ask for the title of the drama that has been published in the novel! ! I want to start chasing them one by one

Because the author wrote this book quite a long time ago, I feel like I am reaping the dividends of that era. That was when writing anime fan fiction started to become popular, and there were very few excellent comprehensive comics that combined multiple worlds. The author is considered one of the more outstanding ones. It works, the most important thing is that there are no poisonous points, and the most important problems have been overcome. For example, many female characters like the male protagonist, the male protagonist seems to have a succubus physique, and there is no hesitation when taking the initiative, etc. At least it does not make people uncomfortable. Of course, there must be some problems. The author feels that there is no outline, so he just writes whatever comes to mind. Of course, since he is almost always writing about daily life, it is very easy to make up the word count. He usually just changes the daily scenes in anime, so he doesn't have much feeling. He can write whatever comes to mind. For example, if the author wants to suddenly write a plot, he can just add it directly. If he wants any characters, he can just pull them in. Of course, this is also a common problem among the ancient animation fans. To me, this book is quite good. After all, it is an anime fanfic. It is meant to be enjoyable to read and to make the female character like the male protagonist. . . Although if there are too many female characters, it is easy to be generalized, and the character is generalized, and it is easy to have the same feeling with no distinctive features. In this book, it is actually okay and acceptable. The character is not too generalized and exaggerated, that is, he has a certain emotional line. Although the emotional line is a bit small, at least there is a plot. The emotional line is basically in daily life. He is suddenly attracted to the male protagonist in daily life, which is indeed a bit abrupt. . . But that's okay, it's all because the male protagonist has a succubus physique and makes people like him in daily interactions. I can't help it, I can see it. The author's writing style is not very good, and his ability to conceive original plots is relatively average. Fortunately, the author is not the kind of person who likes to do tricks. He knew that he was not very good at this aspect, so he did not work on it, so there will be less original plots. Correspondingly, this way actually reduces the poisonous points. In short, this anime fanfic is relatively good. I was looking forward to other works by the author, but after waiting for more than a year 😭 the author seems to have disappeared. Maybe the author also knows that the path of writing is really not easy. This novel is a bonus for being late. If I want to write this type of novel again For novels, it may be more uncomfortable and annoying to read, because readers have been influenced by anime fans for several years, and now have their own set of aesthetic concepts. If you read the ancient anime fan novels, you will feel bored, because almost all of them are like this. In this case, it will be more difficult for the author to write, and the author is still a college student. He may go to the postgraduate entrance examination, and then find a job and stop writing novels. It's a normal phenomenon. I have several authors who have followed several books, but they stopped writing and told people that they were going to find a job 😢. What's even more outrageous is that they wrote a pretty good anime fan novel, and then started a second one. Before it was even released on the shelves, they suddenly stopped working, saying that they would be happier watching anime, and then they became eunuchs, and even that work was removed from the shelves. . . 😭

After reading the book reviews, I can only say that the two-dimensional book deserves to be annoying. They are all over-the-top. When it comes to the female characters, they all act like such a beautiful girl who treats me like this and makes me die. I have never seen a woman in my entire life.

There is only one male in all the roles. To be honest, if there are more than seven female protagonists, one per day will not be able to take turns. You can only have 19, three per day...

Does An Yilun have a lot of roles? If so, I will leave immediately. After all, no one likes to stare all the time💩

Okay?

A powerful thing about this book and "Daily Life of a High School Girl" by Idiot                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Akane Kikuchi (Death House) CV Tomatsu Haruka: "The Name of the Flower" Naruko Anjo Saginomiya Shiori (Robot) CV Toyosaki Aki: None Momoi Sakuhisa (Loli) CV Nagano Maria:           "Kobayashi" Kangna       Yamada Minami (ill) CV Tomita Miu:                                                 "Gabai Li" Ga Bai Li "Miss Kaguya" Iino Yako (not appearing) Someya Lily (Lily) CV Satomi Sato:                                                                                                                                                PS: (Voice Actor) I want to go together with myself (funny)  Kujo Hisui (Witch) CV Ichimichi Mao (M·A·O)                                                                                                                                                                                                          intentionally,

An Yilun also appears much more than the heroine. Does the protagonist like to play with Midoriya so much?

Finished with flowers. By the way, I'm asking: Is there any ordinary Chinese novel similar to this one, preferably one by Gabriel.