King of Los Angeles

Is the main character black or white? Indian? Chinese-American? Mixed race person?

As a head coach, the head coach shouldn't help the protagonist if his own players are harmed in their career. . . . . . Does the head coach still need prestige? ? ? ?

I feel like those who still write books now are all innocent otakus, and the emotional scenes are written in a very embarrassing way. Almost all the Chinese protagonists who go to the United States are great men who train hard and don't go to nightclubs. What's the reality?

After reading the first few chapters, the title is very confusing. Now that I have traveled through time and become Gary, I can just use this title from now on. Sometimes Lin Feng, sometimes Gary is very dramatic, which destroys the sense of immersion.

It's really troublesome to say that I can't post book reviews on my computer. Ask the author to take a small notebook and write down the key points. 1. Basketball articles are of course not only about playing basketball, but also about relationships, life, etc., And even entertainment and basketball like Hua Gonggong and Tucao, but don't be too cliché. Some scenes and the heroine were poorly written. 2. Please don't stray too far away from basketball in all these life branches. I can't figure out what to write about a woman who gathers people to take drugs. This person must be addicted to that kind of thing because the sense of substitution is strong. Readers will definitely not feel comfortable having sex with such a person. Sister 3~(￣▽ ￣~)~ This word has been abused at the starting point like strong (anal fissure), so this is a branch line. Please be careful, that fat agent... Of course, you are the author. For example, a certain Tou Tie Ai who is very good at writing never listens to suggestions.

There is no more Black Mamba!

I have read other basketball articles, and the protagonists basically don't lick dogs. Except for two books, one is "Basketball Purple Edge", where he licks Kobe Bryant wildly, and this one, licks James wildly. Ai Jiang's book, except for licking Jordan a little, treats all sharks, Kobe, James, and Duncan equally, and just beats them up. You are very powerful, but I am invincible. In Tucao's book, no one except Curry and Durant can be spared, and Jordan is always crazy about it. In the still life book, the protagonist is the biggest, Nico is not a good guy, he only has a good relationship with Yao Ming. Shui Danqiao's book, pink fairy tale version of NBA, gay league, Xiaohei, endless whitewashing. You two are so special. You are so talented to be able to lick James and Kobe like this.

In memory of Kobe Bryant, the forever Black Mamba. The famous NBA star Kobe Bryant died in a plane crash just before 4 a. M. Beijing time today.

Isn't it training? Isn't it about getting ahead and making money to treat my adoptive father's illness? From the first picture to the end, I didn't put much effort into it. He just went out and had fun. The protagonist's advantages and disadvantages as a point guard were not shown. Sorry, it's quite toxic to me.

I've already worn it and I still insist on calling him Lin Feng. It's weird to see a white man with the middle name. I'm tired of watching the constant switching.

Giving up 10 million U. S. Dollars to sign with Anta is poisonous enough.

Many friends have asked about it, and I forgot to mention it when I was writing. The skin color of the protagonist is the same as that of Stephen Curry. If you can accept Curry, you can accept the image of the protagonist of this book, but according to the One Drop of Blood principle, the term belongs to black people. Handsome appearance is just one word, handsome is the end, refer to the protagonist of the movie "Trainspotting".

I am fully subscribed to QQ Reading. The author has two points that make me very confused. The first is whether the protagonist can use the same name. It is very confusing now! Secondly, describe the appearance of the protagonist. Until now, I have no impression of what the protagonist looks like! These two points greatly affect the reading experience!

I can't complain. Since you are already dressed as someone else, stop being Raymond Feng all the time. The style of painting is too inconsistent. If you want to write about Raymond Feng, just write a Chinese or an ethnic Chinese.

It's too awkward to force patriotism. I hope the transition can be smoother.

The most annoying thing is people who travel through time and become foreign devils. Even if they dress up as Chinese or travel in real form, it would be fine.

Names running back and forth, a special drama

In 3 seconds on the basketball court, on the defensive end, you can predict the direction of the opponent's dribbling and intercept it in advance. If the dribbling range is large, you can try to steal. If the opponent has the intention of passing the ball, you can intercept the pass in advance. If the opponent shoots, you can block the shot. If the opponent shoots in the pick-and-roll, you can predict the rebound. On the offensive end, you can use dribbling and positioning to predict the opponent's defensive strategy, and you can also use shooting fakes to predict the opponent's defensive intentions. In the basketball world, with physical fitness, as long as you practice shooting well and block and kill, you only need to match a few suitable teammates to win the championship in the first year, and you can win all honors. Writing it like this when I first read it shows that I don't understand the role of these three seconds in the basketball world at all. .

To be honest, I was a little bit addicted after reading about 100 chapters. Because of the season time chosen by the author, and there was no game at all this year, so the plot and game content were dragged on. In the end, it might have been originally a novel about watching basketball, but because of the time choice and the plot, it became an urban romance novel? ? ? I really hope it can be written well in the future. It was really a bit uncomfortable to read it in the early stage😣

If you want Gary, then Gary, if you want Raymond Lam, then do Raymond Lam. Authors like Gary and Lin Feng, who are both guilty of stupid mistakes, have not seen each other for many years at Qidian. What do you want to express? Isn't it good to use a unified name? There is no point in messing around and it affects reading.

Why bother writing about foreigners? Everyone who reads NBA novels likes to see Chinese people playing in the NBA.

What I find very uncomfortable is that when I change my name from Gary to Lin Feng, the sense of substitution is very poor. I personally find it very uncomfortable.

The author is so ruthless, he even scolds himself, he is very capable of yin and yang, what a good guy.

Aoao

Can't we just change the main character's name? Lj

2018 Show, I don't know how to bring it in. One of the novels is interesting, and the other is a sense of inclusion. Well, the book review is 100+, author, come on, I will withdraw it first.

Are you serious about these three seconds? That's not omnipotent in sports.

I originally wanted to take a look, but the skin has been changed, so forget it!

Fight on the street, I read a basketball novel, you asked me to read about selling lottery tickets, and even the names were changed for a while, you wrote a hammer

There are a bunch of women's names on the cover. Is this a basketball article? Funny