Divine Sky Tempest

To be honest, I read the table of contents for ten minutes and I can draw the following conclusions: The author must have obsessive-compulsive disorder, and he must not be used to playing MC The table of contents is so tidy that it's hard to say anything It probably took a long time just to look at the table of contents It can be said that he is quite dedicated.

I read the first chapter of the serial volume, and I have a little bit of an opinion. 1. The author's writing should be in Riqing's style, right? But unfortunately, the author has some minor language problems in the text. 2. It can be seen from the first few pages that the author's sentence segmentation ability and punctuation are not very good. The follow-up is too long, so I am currently reading it. If there are other flaws, I will mention them and hope the author can see them.

This is not a seedling, this is his seed. . . . Too little, wait and see again

Regardless of whether the results are good or bad 😅 this book will end after the end of the tenth volume! The approximate number of words should be at least 350,000-400,000! The maximum is between 500,000 and 800,000! I will speed up the progress! One month, two months at most, it will be completed! Then start another pattern style book.

I suggest you stop reading his books. He keeps throwing away his books, and his health is not good anymore. He is getting more and more perfunctory. If you are not strong enough to endure it, it is best not to read it. If you are new to it, it is best to give up on it! I'm also ready to give up and leave! This book is also on the market. You will want to curse after reading it. Before I leave, I want to say to you... Goodbye!

It's very strange. It is obviously a very good two-dimensional style work, but why do some people keep saying in the comments that the first volume of the sequence chapter is not good? As a result, even the lovely author doubted himself... I was so curious that I finished reading the chapter of the sequence, and then unexpectedly found that it was very well written. Who said it was not well written? Come out and get beaten ~ I am definitely not talking nonsense. If you read the book reviews and have not read the book, you can feel free to read it. I think I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. I am more picky about reading books every year. I should not be the kind of person who has no discernment. However, I read less of the two-dimensional style. I have followed the two-dimensional God of Darkness... This is why I started to like reading two-dimensional books. It is more relaxed and leisurely. But if I have to talk about the serial chapters of the first volume, the beginning of the first volume is actually a little unfriendly to new readers, or I can't say unfriendly. In short, it is a relatively bold writing method, because too many characters appear at once, and they enter the plot directly. In fact, some people like this kind of writing. They drive directly and get into the action in a second. There is no flaw in the writing style, and the details and psychological and emotional descriptions are also in place. Why are the readers in the comment area so picky? However, I haven't memorized all the names, but the first volume is not very long. It only has a few words in total. If you don't want to read it, just read it briefly. At least I have an understanding, and the plot is somewhat connected. But there is one thing I want to complain about, which is the name of the protagonist, why is it called Qin Lan... I thought she was a girl at first, and the beautiful Qin Lan appeared in my mind, but it turned out to be a man~ I think some teammates will complain about his name in the later chapters, right author... Well, let me tell you the overall feeling. I haven't finished reading it yet, so I will finish it before reading it. When I first saw the title of this book, I was actually a little stunned. The Chinese name of such a fantasy fairy tale was followed by an unknown word (my English is not good...). After reading it, I found that the introduction was also very different. It doesn't matter, alternative authors are great! Starting point books are all the same, whoever can be different and good will succeed. Among ordinary authors, this book is quite popular, and the book review area is also quite lively. Sure enough, the second dimension is more popular now. It seems that the trend is more reasonable. I like to read whatever books I like, and they will be read by the audience. The basic setting is very good, and it has more new appeal than most mindless cultivation novels. The original setting is the most beautiful, and I support the author on this point. Then there is the character setting, which is my favorite part. Many two-dimensional novels may have the writing style and plot of the second dimension, but the core is not. The core of the second dimension is the communication between characters. It is interesting to have more teammates and a whole family together. The kind of Long Ao Tianwen that one person practices is just superficial. Then there is the skill of the author. We have also seen so many opening characters. We must have the skill of Water Margin. Each character should be written with flesh and blood and lifelike, and the personality must be differentiated. This really tests the writing skills. To put it bluntly, a person is a book. If you can write everyone well, you are a master. The author still has a long way to go, but the beginning is good, I hope to continue~

Book Review Post In the previous prologue and previous introduction, I believe that everyone who has read it thinks this is a thirty-rare steak. It's just that when it comes to the main text, it's completely different. Judging from the second chapter of Qin Lan being kicked by his sister in the first chapter, you seem to be able to recall the daily life of the brother and sister in a certain episode. The author is probably a comrade who often watches anime and manga, so for this kind of plot or battle, it can be said that he has read tens of thousands of manga, and writes like a master. Chapter 2 introduces two more characters, Dongfang Xuan and Yin Zixi. He is the one who slaps people and makes peace with them, crying bitterly. Then the third chapter cuts to the academy. No spoilers for what follows. There is no problem with the typesetting and it looks more comfortable. It's just that there are so many words in the next few chapters that I can't read them all at a glance. The author is really awesome! Qin Lan is awesome!

It was bombed in for the third time 😅

Volume 2 (starting here) Chapter 1 is extremely poisonous. When he saw his younger sister kicking his sleeping brother's stomach, he immediately checked. . . Recommended, it seems this book is not suitable for me

This book is so short, please read on.

Are you suddenly a eunuch again?

I will slowly read it until the fifth volume, and then eat it all together. However, the first order has been given. Finally, I wish my fellow author, Comrade He Xiaokang, to take good care of himself and work hard to write more novels.

Meow, I can actually see wt here ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿ Then I must cheer for the author~\(≧▽≦)/~

I feel that the writing is much better than the previous article⑧... But it still feels too deliberate... And the emotional line is still... A bit baffling. Maybe it's because I fell in love with you from the beginning, which is a bit hard to accept...

Added to the bookshelf because of the cover of Fighter 3. (｡•ᴗ-)_

This is a bit poisonous at the beginning (I can't accept it). . . This is the ward. There is a half-dead person lying on the bed. I feel better because of the noise there??? If it doesn't work, you can just leave the door. What do you think of being in the ward＠(￣-￣)＠

6666666, This is the most awesome, a street kid passing by gets lucky

The two women at the beginning of the first chapter almost made me think they were Lily. When I looked at the comments, I found that there were only 51. Then I realized that I seemed to have read this book before... I seemed to have seen the Sha Pojun somewhere. Then scroll down the comments... This book list is all about marketing accounts, it is really strong.

You all say that the writing is poor, but why do I think it's okay? It's smooth and easy to understand.

Since my health is getting worse day by day, I have to finish it in a hurry, but I still want to thank everyone for your support and love. I will write again after I get better and have the surgery! Thanks to everyone, and sorry! Goodbye! I resign!

Rubbish articles, faulty stories, full of violence, extremely vulgar, and boring, even burning the midnight oil 🤤🤤🤤🤤

Why did it take so long? Is it over? Off the street?

Who can tell me whether this is a bad ending or an outline? To be honest, I don't remember his previous books, so I don't have the confidence to read them.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

There are still 28 days until the new book is released.

(Signs of the Emperor and the Forbidden Curse) Parthenon A voice came from the Temple of the Goddess, Your Highness, the woman you asked me to follow, I followed her to the Holy City but then disappeared. She was very alert and almost recognized me. A masked woman tells a candidate about her mission. Well, thank you for your hard work. You go down first and I will take care of the rest. Xinxia said softly in her most seductive and soft voice. Xinxia stroked her heart, seeming to feel the blood and the excitement of her heart. This feeling seemed familiar. In fact, after she used resurrection on Little Flame Fairy, she could feel the feng shui changes in Little Flame Fairy. Maybe it's because they have the same heart. This time she felt it too. She returned to the dormitory and asked the guard next to her to stay outside. This time it felt a little different, this time her heartbeat was mixed with the excitement inside her. From Little Flame Fairy to warrior to commander, to great monarch to supreme monarch, every breakthrough brought notice to Xinxia. And this time her heartbeat was mixed with her inner excitement because the boiling blood seemed to be closing the distance between the two souls. Slowly promoting the relationship between Shenhun and Xinxia's soul. What the soul involves is cultivation, and Xinxia also feels that this breakthrough is extraordinary. Unlike before, this breakthrough not only brings about accelerated heartbeats and boiling blood, but also gives her the opportunity to break through into the forbidden curse. From the beginning of her awakening, she practiced hard every day. When she arrived at Parthenon, she seriously and diligently learned the higher realm of purity and pure self-healing magic, in order to protect her brother Mo Fan. And now, she got this opportunity. She no longer needs the protection of Mo Fan's brother but can become a good sister who protects Mo Fan. Although the little Flame Fairy has reached the perfect body when the totem cleanses the marrow, it may be because of the oppression brought by the Siren leader, the breakthrough brought by the Qinglong to the little loach, Mo Fan's hard training, seeing her father working hard, deciding not to be lazy and being a good daughter, and her heart of pursuing and protecting her father, giving her signs of breaking through to a higher realm. However, if you continue to break through, you will be at the emperor level! ! ! How many old mages, including forbidden spells, have spent their entire lives trying to obtain summoned beasts, and how many old mages have dreamed of summoning beasts? How many old forbidden curse mages have the capital to compete with the emperor? Looking back at that time, the Holy City with its many forbidden spells was manipulated by the emperor. If Mo Fan took her around the world, wouldn't the military, the Holy City, the Magic Association, the Tribunal, and the Black Vatican all give way when they see her?