System, Are You Serious?

The first six chapters, I don't understand what is written?

The setting is interesting, but the plot falls apart.

Although I haven't read this book, please don't make complaints, okay? The author is obviously generating electricity for love and exercising his writing skills. So those comrades who don't like to see it, please leave quietly. After all, if you post a complaint, won't there be fewer people to read it later? This does not improve the author very much. The author has not improved very much. After he finishes writing the book, aren't we the ones who will feel uncomfortable? So if you really can't bear it, please don't complain and try to put forward some suggestions for modification instead of dismissing the comments.

Sorry, I have only seen more than ninety chapters. I am not bragging about it, it is not bad, there are some poisonous points, but there are also some laughs. The personalities of some characters are written out, but there are too few details in some aspects. For example, I have never watched Naruto, I don't know Kushina, I don't know Kyuubi, I don't know the plot, and I don't know her relationship with Boruto. So, if there is no general introduction, how can I understand this book? By analogy, if you don't know who Guangdai is, his skills, etc., You will be very confused. Of course, the above is not too much. In fact, the most important points are two points, no sense of substitution and no main line. The sense of substitution is illusory. Some people like to be funny, some like to feel refreshed, but few people like to be poisonous. The Saiyans were very good at the beginning, which made some people who like the invincible style look forward to how the protagonist will be wiped out. The chat group is also very good, and it will make some people who like to show off look forward to the protagonist's various spoilers and being licked. As a result, it turned out that he was a Saiyan and the leader of the group, and he had a sky-shattering system. However, the Saiyans pretended to be pigs and ate dirt, the group leader knelt down and licked the group members, and the welfare system was invaded at will. Furthermore, the part of being a slave at the beginning was a bit poisonous. Even if it was later found out that his father deliberately cheated his son, the poison was poison. It is impossible for many people to become poisonous without seeing it later. My imagination is actually quite broad, and my writing is not bad, but I can barely read it. Unfortunately, the imagination is too big and the stalls are too big, which makes people look chaotic, very messy.

What? It was the first time that I read such a painful novel, and I was really convinced.

I feel like the main character is like a virgin, it's so frustrating

The author generates electricity for love with more than one million words, 6 ah

I can't understand it. It seems that most of them are from the game. I don't know. I'm totally confused.

Seek to evolve into a two-shift beast and a third-shift beast.

I have written so much about this book and no one has read it yet, so I would like to post a discussion to support it. Thank you for your hard work.

Author, I feel like you need to introduce your personal information when they join the group, otherwise we will be confused. Let's introduce it to the protagonist's world. Otherwise I wouldn't even know what I'm looking at

It's okay. I spent a day reading it and I can still read it. I don't know why no one is watching it.

I have read more than 100 chapters, and the slave book is really poisonous. I really wanted to hit someone after watching it.

People who don't play games look a little confused.

I am not afraid that you will work hard, but I am afraid that your efforts will go in the wrong direction, although it is good to use love to generate electricity. But you sent electricity and wrote about loneliness

This book is good and the writing is not bad. You can say food and grass. But the details of Goldfinger are a little unclear. Also, are you serious about calculating time in Chapter 14? 😰

This... What am I looking at while riding a horse? There is a golden finger, but in the end there is only a little bit of slag, and the scum above is my own. Is this some kind of alternative NTR that I'm riding on? Author, if you want to innovate, please first understand the market, okay? You won't get any benefit except using a spoon to look for gold in the dunghill. I can't even read the first dozens of chapters. No matter how good it is, I won't read the rest. You are of no use except comforting yourself.

I like to listen to books, so the number of the author's idioms in writing, such as "lai luo" and "de shuo", is really uncomfortable (´ . .̫ . `)

But when I finished reading the book, my heart couldn't help but tingle.

I can't complain anymore. I can't bear it anymore after 11 years of studying. A Saiyan doesn't want to practice quickly and keeps swimming in the water.

I followed it until the end, it was actually pretty good.

I searched for 100 to 2 million words and only 2 books were updated in this category in 3 days. Come on, author.

Okay, here, I suggest the author write a single chapter to explain the previous characters. Otherwise, I don't even know you. Let me see something. Your explanation is not specific enough and there is no main line. In fact, it is acceptable. The most important thing is the sense of substitution. After all, it is easy to have no main line when writing a book for the first time.

I must give you money. I admire this kind of perseverance and persistence.

Actually, I think it can be like this. If you want to make money, open another book, but don't rush to finish this one. There's no harm in it anyway. I don't want to finish it at all.

Good people are misbehaved and act like monkeys. Good systems are written with fifty-cent special effects. Any one of them can be defeated.

Do you know how I read it? Just read the first few pages and then go straight to the ending.

Why hasn't the price of 390,000 been put on the shelves?