The Moon Hangs in the East Wind and Ying Changgeng

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, cheers for you first. I admire you for having the courage to write an article. Like me, I always want to write but never have the courage 🤤 First of all, after reading a few chapters of your article, I feel that your ideas are quite good. The content is clearly explained, and there are also descriptions of the environment. You can also use foreign objects to express emotions. Although it is immature, it is still pretty good. Secondly, I would like to give you a small opinion 1. The plot of the story is not exciting enough. To put it bluntly, it is not exciting or eye-catching. This is not enough to attract readers to continue reading. It is recommended that you set up a small conflict or a little fun every few chapters, and a big conflict at each stage. 2. The narrative language is a bit straightforward, and the narrative is a bit straightforward. There is no suspense and it is not very good at attracting readers to continue reading. It is recommended that you leave a small suspense and blank space in each chapter or plot. I'm not as good as you at all. Just take a look. I sincerely wish you the more you write, the better! Come on, come on, come on!

Great, April Snow Fox came to visit with "White Bone Marriage". It has been collected and will continue to pay attention. Come on, come on 😳😳😳

Received, received from each other, and encouraged each other.

Come on, work hard. Already collected. Visiting with "Taikoo Zunxian"

Come on, I'll give you all the tickets for female videos from now on