Flowers Fall Silently

[Impression of the work] "The male protagonist is reborn, the female protagonist travels through time, power struggles, and IQ is on the line." Different from the female protagonist's perspective in most female channel works, this book starts from the perspective of the male protagonist An Wang, and cleverly explains the background of the story to readers from the perspective of market rumors. The characters in the article have different thoughts and turn back and forth, which makes the reading different from ordinary short stories. After the male protagonist was reborn, he saw Lin Shu who was different from his previous life, and gradually developed a liking for her. At the beginning, the heroine Lin Shu appeared in front of the readers as a man. Since the name was familiar, I automatically assumed the role of Lin Shu in the TV series and thought it was a beautiful article. Of course, after the eighth chapter, the author also revealed the fact that Lin Shu was a woman disguised as a man, and she was reborn through time and space. But maybe because of preconceptions, I have always regarded her as a boy, especially with this name. I hope the author can portray the year of the female characters. [Book Title & Introduction] "The introduction tends to explain the background." From the perspective of the book title, this should be a book with indifferent writing, as if the author had the same feeling when writing it, with delicate writing and eloquent words. Judging from the introduction, this gives people a sense of tension of power struggles, turmoil, and chaos, which is even more magnificent. But the feeling after watching it is calm. Although the plot design is not routine, and it is more like each having their own plans to frame each other, the author writes it too indifferently, giving a feeling of being aloof from the world. [Writing Style] "The writing is smooth and the reading experience is excellent." The author's writing style is quite good. Although the sentences in the article are not amazing, they are more comfortable and natural. What's even more rare is that most of the paragraphs in the article are short sentences, there are no long paragraphs, the words and sentences are concise, and there are not too many cumbersome descriptions. The reading experience is very good. [Plot] "The plot is unfolding, but there is a lack of suspense." In terms of plot design, unlike other protagonists who show off their skills through time-travel and rebirth, both the male and female protagonists in this book are the best among men. Adding a time-travel and a rebirth, it has more of a battle of wits than the natural golden finger. However, the opening pace is slow and the plot design in the following chapters is weak, so that the whole article does not have a strong sense of substitution and lacks detailed characterization. Take Chapters 17 and 18, where the male and female protagonists enter the palace, the male protagonist falls into a trap, and the intersection between the male and female protagonists deepens as an example. This should have been a better process of psychological transformation of the male protagonist, which could focus on psychological portrayal and conflicts, but the male protagonist dismissed it as "just kissing a man." This is an understatement, and the reader's reading experience is not deep. The subsequent appearance of the queen should increase the conflict and tension of the plot. The fragments of chapters will give people suspense whether King An will be framed, but the danger is easily averted, which will give people the feeling that a "power struggle" is nothing more than this. Many of the plots in the article are understated and passed over in one stroke. I hope the author can build a complete plot structure. Character Design"The character design is distinct, but lacks a sense of hierarchy." The characters in the article have distinct personalities, but they tend to be flat. Good guys are just good guys, and bad guys are just bad guys. There is a lack of versatility in the characters, so the characters are not three-dimensional enough to read. Since the heroine is Lin Shu, let's take the Lin Shu on TV as an example. He is resourceful, but not healthy. He values ​​friendship, but is not an absolute good person. He comes across as weak and tolerant. When depicting characters, the author can consider the multi-faceted characteristics of the characters instead of a single image. Such characters will be more flesh-and-blood.

Very gorgeously written. Collected. Ask for mutual acceptance.

This is my first time writing, so there will inevitably be some omissions in the writing. During this period, I will gradually revise the previous content😄😄

Come on, it has been collected, the writing is very good 👍

The writing is good. The name Lin Shu always reminds me of a character in a TV series. I recently rewatched the TV series and I felt a little bit immersed in it. The plot development and character description are quite outstanding. Personally, it feels good and I can't see anything wrong with it.

Well written, come on, "Drunk Pillow Ming Dynasty" will support you

I would like to ask, when can everyone wait for the update?