Shuzang Avenue

It looks okay, keep working hard ✊

I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I can't read it anymore. It's equivalent to the protagonist gaining a unique ability and then developing it in depth. The real ability is out of touch. The author has not properly handled the relationship between ability and progress. According to what I have read so far, the author has to write to the tens of millions level, or the ability will be greatly improved in the later stage, and then it will be unfinished!

There are too many organizations, and the intelligence of a country is so poor that it is like a sieve. Can this country still exist?

From the time the relationship was confirmed to the time when I stayed with my girlfriend, why did my parents not have any protective measures? By now, there are several hostile forces. Why can't the protagonist think of his parents? ? ?

Let me talk about the problem with this book: the author completely does not understand that offense is the best defense. As long as any war occurs on your own homeland, even if you win, you will lose. Because it is easier to destroy than to build, especially for a person. How long does it take from birth to adulthood, twenty years, and how long does it take to kill a person? It only takes a second! ! The enemy keeps killing your ordinary people, but you only kill the enemy's evildoers. Your foundation is broken, but the enemy's foundation is not. Can you afford it? If I were an enemy and would only kill your ordinary people and not fight you, what could you do to me? The enemy no longer abides by the convention, but you still abide by it? You wrote this yourself. In any war, if the enemy breaks through the bottom line and you haven't broken through the bottom line, then you lose. If you lose, you will exterminate the entire clan and kill them all. So your book is not pleasing to the eye. If you want to massacre cities, massacre each other. If you balance it, then you can still read it.

Why didn't the guy who could walk through walls call the police? Explain the situation to the police, and the police will naturally notify the Extraordinary Administration. Don't say that if he doesn't have a phone, he can go through the wall. How can he not get a phone? Can't understand. They are all being hunted and are not afraid of being exposed.

The ability you get in this book is just the wind and spirit method. You basically don't get anything from the book later. It's a bit crooked.

Either he was fighting or on the way to fight. There was nothing but fighting. He was beaten until his head hurt!

I always feel that other countries are so united, no one is causing trouble, and there is still time to cause trouble in other countries.

I don't know what to say, it's just boring to watch...

To be honest, I thought Zhou Yang was the male protagonist after reading the first chapter🙂🙂

The idea of ​​reading books to gain abilities in the early stage is very good, but after gaining the ability of the wind, what about reading books? Well, it's gone. It's boring to read.

I don't want to watch anymore after watching it. Ever since I got the spiritual realm and the ability of Zephyr, I have stayed still.

Have you forgotten how powerful a country is? You haven't experienced it, so you write so many clowns about where they are. The country is not just a person's will. When it comes to awakening, there are too many soldiers who are stronger than your so-called civilians with superpowers!

The title I wrote didn't fit, the power was scattered, and the mutant beast wasn't written well.

Come back and watch when the protagonist takes off to show off👀

Learn skills from books? Want a copy of StarCraft? Unlimited streaming of one book? A copy of Invincible Liu? Want a book about farming? A book leaked behind the scenes? Want a little H book?

The author can just write according to his own ideas. The more he considers the readers' ideas, the easier it is for his own thoughts to be disrupted. Come on.

Maybe it would be better to write more comfortably,

The title of the book should be changed to Niubi's name.

Exclamation points are flying all over the place at the beginning of more than 30 chapters... It looks awkward. Those accidents, surprises and other plots cannot be set off by exclamation points. They are always used too deliberately. There is no need to use exclamation points when narrating the plot.

It's not good-looking: the protagonist doesn't know what he wants to do, and he has found a way to practice it: he deserves to be beaten to death if he doesn't practice.

Internal fighting started before it even started: Human beings can become stronger when spiritual energy is revived:

Write slowly, be careful not to be blocked