There Is a World in My Belly

What is the use of the supporting character's attribute panel? What we are looking at is pig's feet, and we can't remember the attribute panel of the supporting character. Can we write down the number of words?

When I saw the second picture, I felt that it was a mess and there was no order at all.

It feels weird. If gods and demons are fighting, wouldn't the protagonist have a stomachache?

Another novel in which the God of Creation ends up in person and is then pushed to the ground and rubbed by people in his own world!

By the third golden chapter, I knew the style of this book from now on. There is a mastermind behind the creation of the world, and the protagonist's funny style is not rigorous and brainless. I guess there are holes that can't be filled, the start is too awesome. Imitating and raising all human beings is probably just that.

You are boasting at the beginning, and it feels like you can't hold it back. You might as well have started with a system. For the sake of the next game plan, I just want to say that the excuse you made is really bad. You start with a system, reward a planet, and there is no one on the planet. If you set it as a game, it will be over. 😓 It's really the start of the persuasion type.

I have read a lot of mainstream novels about the creation genre, and although I like them very much, they are not all that eye-catching (including several masterpieces, but not this one). I feel that as a reader for six years, it is time for me to seriously write half of the book (I don't know if I can write it down, but I am still good at it)           Author——OAA

It's a mess, what did you write?

It's such a mess, my head hurts.

The character design of the protagonist is too contrived and seems mentally immature. When I read Chapter 5 or 6

I go -_-|| ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? I just read Chapter 3, what the hell d(ŐдŐ๑) It just feels like one word, chaos. Withdraw, withdraw, you can't afford to offend.

It feels like a boring running account

It looks good, but I have no money and can't recharge the starting coins.

The start is a bit bad, but it's basically fun later on

A game with an air wall cannot be considered a complete game world, let alone a virtual game. A complete virtual game must simulate at least 70% of real-life situations. Have you ever hit a wall of air on your way to work?

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After seeing the ending and your thoughts after watching it, please be more attentive, author! The plot is confusing! The same paragraph appears in several chapters! A lot of settings have not been filled in! I also made a lot of typos! Wait... But the plot is pretty good. If you write it well, you can write at least about 1,000 chapters! However, I can also see that this is definitely the first time the author has written a novel. If it is not his first time... Then I have nothing to say.

This novel is so crazy. .

No wonder there are only 300 chapters. This introduction makes me confused.