Half-Demon Restaurant

I thought the author had some great ideas, but it turned out to be the same chat group, but with a different vest. I had no idea what I was writing, so I walked away.

No wonder it's not very popular. The first few chapters were about the female character, which caused a bad misunderstanding, and then nothing happened. It was as if the character didn't exist. I looked at the catalog and found that the character has not appeared until now. It's hard for people to watch without beginning or end.

I think the reason why this book is not popular is probably because the writing style is a bit shabby and sometimes typos are made Sometimes the preface and the follower are inconsistent

The writing of this book is average. I feel that many things are not described clearly in the front, which makes it awkward to read.

The protagonist's sister is just a drag.

The creativity is good, but the writing is not. It is too idealistic, the protagonist has no scheming, and the whole thing feels silly, and sometimes the character is forcibly changed. I was having a good conversation with someone before and suddenly I became "sarcastic" and had a "cold look on my face". And the strength is vague, giving people a particularly distorted feeling. And the character at the beginning doesn't even have a phone call yet.

To be honest, the protagonist's sister is so annoying

The subject matter is okay, and the writing style is gradually getting better, but this sister feels really awkward and uncomfortable.

The reason why the author's book is not popular is that the protagonist is actually a variable, and what the author needs to write is whether he can combine the settings of various comics, movies, etc. To create the most interesting and fun thing. The story is not very good. . . . Some supporting characters forcibly lose their intelligence and ignore the story of their own world. For example, Tony, as long as he has an Internet connection, he knows everything, including all fan fiction. What will be the consequences of letting these people read your fan fiction? ? There are many things that are unclear. The author wants to write them well, but unfortunately his writing skills are not enough.

So is this the case with the girl I met in the early stage, or did I just jump to see it?

I especially want to know where Wu Waner went

I want to know if the effect of fifty-two thousand is just that one million?

One more thing, this book is really not good to read.

The writing is pretty good, keep it up! Don't be shy about two recommendation votes.

The author is very Buddhist, just like the protagonist. Can't you pop out and say something back?

What happened to the girl I met earlier? Please give a message to the author

There are a lot of typos, and I don't know why it looks a bit awkward.

I have read more than 40 chapters without realizing it, and I feel that it is surprisingly good. Although the writing is average, it is okay, and the plot is okay. I don't know why it seems not popular 😰 It is a hidden good book 🙂

To put it simply, the author cannot tell stories.

There is no logic at all, and the preface does not match the follower.

You can barely look at the front. . I can't stand the sight of those world-devouring insects that appear later 😅

Although the girl who saved a life at the beginning is very important, it seems that she was not defined as the heroine from the beginning, right? So after I read the subsequent plot, the protagonist's ability allows me to see her at any time. In my opinion, the current heroine is probably Sansan (Tokisaki Kurumi), so is that role very important? So don't think of the female character who appears at the beginning as the heroine. Isn't it a two-dimensional law that childhood sweethearts can't beat the Skyfall series?

This is just messing up the introduction and it is completely inconsistent with the category.

Looking confused. . . . It feels like the author has written down his daydream in a straightforward way.

That thing, is it drugged and glowing?

Really need to improve it! (I hope the author can see it)

Does anyone know about the author's latest work related to the leaflet released in the early morning of March 7th... Let's talk about the negative energy of fifty cents... Is what is said in this article true or false? Did the author undergo a resection surgery? And then there is no emotion? ? (ﾉಥBenefitಥ) Wow, it's very scary...

I don't know what the role of sister is for.