Fantasy Comics

It is recommended that all brackets be deleted, as this will only affect reading. I remember reading a comic book fan novel a long time ago that was pretty good, but I was stunned because of the author's self-proclaimed words in brackets in one chapter. I read dozens of chapters intermittently and couldn't stand it anymore. To be honest, writing a book is about telling a story to readers, not about telling a story about yourself and writing it in the main text. It's okay to just vomit on my own, but I really want to interact and post it.

The author also said that he is a new writer, which can be seen from the writing and plot, so don't choose such a big world view for your first book! DC Marvel's Ultraman Mask is a mess of old people, but it may not work. Can you control it? Reality is not a novel. How many worlds are there in which the first book not only has a grand setting but also canonize gods? To be honest, it's the first time I've seen Ultraman written like a street hero in American comics. A guy with Ultraman genes goes to fight criminals. Ultraman is an alien! The crimes committed by the criminals on Earth are also Earth's housework, and Ultraman has nothing to do with it! Lowering the protagonist's character out of thin air! Or just change to Goldfinger like others, even if it only has Kamen Rider. If you choose Ultraman, don't write about fighting criminals. The level difference is too big. Now that the protagonist has super powers and cool armor and equipment, I'm ready to watch the protagonist pretending to be cool as if I were reading a novel, so I can kill some time! What did you write as a result? In the end, he became awesome. Although he looks very handsome, the protagonist is actually the same as **, giving people the impression that he only knows how to be handsome. It is a typical way to suppress the excitement first, but in the end, it is too suppressed. I don't know if the author has read "The Giant of Light in the American Comic World". He is also a comic book universe, but the writing is very good. It is the best combined American and Austrian text I have ever seen. "The Giant Monster of American Comics" is also okay. Different levels of the world need different starting points. The lower the starting point, the better. I have long been tired of reading such novice articles! Fanfiction is completely different! What's more, you haven't even finished writing your essay yet!

I said... Can you please stop adding your own words to the book? It's very dramatic and will lower the score of the book.

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As soon as I saw the author appear, I immediately didn't want to read it.

The punching force is 60 tons, the kicking force is 128 tons, and the speed is only 50 meters per second. Even if you are writing a novel, you are too lax. Either you don't write the data, and you should be more rigorous when writing, and you won't be able to read it**.

In the later stage, the plot collapsed. At the same time, the female protagonist became abnormal and the male protagonist also became abnormal. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have dug a lot of holes for themselves and then filled them in themselves. Are you kidding the plot? At the same time, the content is perverted and leaves people speechless =_=

I was also looking forward to how you would write, but in the end you came up with an author for me, and you were just messing around. Goodbye.

Looking at the character list, Carol really has a square aunt face. I don't know how the author can say it. It's better for Marvel not to have a female protagonist. The movie is full of crooked melons and cracked dates. YY feels that there is no sense of substitution.

I can see that the author is new. The outline is a mess and the writing is not interesting. The protagonist is so strong at the beginning and the whole plot is awkward in the end.

The first part was pretty good, but what happened from chapter 12 onwards? The author himself appeared. Farewell.

Author, the setting of your novel is a bit scary. Although the dialogue between the author and the protagonist seems funny, it can be said that he has the same ability to communicate with the author as Marvel's Transcendence Gods. If he grows up, he may have the ability to change the plot.

Although Carlos doesn't like to laugh, he is just as dangerous as Uncle Fang (sure)

The author's writing power is limited

It should be a new author, a bit novice, suitable for young book readers. Old book fans may not be used to it.

So far, there are no more than five truly good books about knights. Others are either eunuchs or simply poorly written.

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The fusion of American and comic worldviews requires very high writing skills, but the author cannot support this worldview. It is recommended to reopen and only write about Marvel or DC.

The world view is too confusing. From DC heroes to the Marvel Cinematic Universe, what is the use of Thanos? The Chitauri Hydra are definitely not joking.