Out of the Way, I'm About to Cast a Divination

????!!!!!! Is the male protagonist my name???

This book was very good when I first read it. The author's writing style is good and the flavor of ancient Chinese is quite strong. But in terms of plot, first of all, after the heroine and the hero met, when the heroine explained her origins and cooperated, it felt a bit urgent. The second is the coffin fungus chapter. I felt that there was no sense of immersion. The main characters' participation in the scenes was too stretched, and it became like really watching a story. I suggest that the author can change it to explore step by step. If a sub-story is too long and the protagonist is offline for too long, it will always fail to make it into the article. The above are my little suggestions. I don't mean anything else. Just take a look at it, 😁😁

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