An Neng Retreats

The story has exciting twists and turns, and it captures the characters' images into details. It's generally good, but the writing is lacking and needs more experience. You can read more and learn more, the writing is smooth and there is no nonsense. Keep up the good work, I will pay attention to you silently 🙂

Emphasis - ★My updates are really slow and unstable. If you can't accept it, thank you for liking me, but I may not be able to do what you ask for, so... ♥♥♥♥♥ Don't give up on me! ! ! ! ! Please! ! ! ! I love you! ! ! ! I will definitely follow the boss's instructions! ! ! ! Give me a chance😭😭 I'm really trying hard... Don't remove the book from the bookshelf, feel free to scold me in the comment area if you have any problem😢 /The pleading of a humble street boy.../

I just watched a female channel boss, the writing is very good. Looking at you, do you just want to say that female videos are monsters? I don't know how to say it, but you portrayed Gong Du very well. The two people set off each other, one seems arrogant, the villain's pride complements the other's helplessness, and the disappointment in all things, it's indescribable. And it is this helplessness that makes people feel distressed and heavy. Very good

I just want to say. . . Author. . . I'm really convinced. . . It's amazing, the investment failed within a day or two, and then the update got stuck. I admire you, I admire you 😅

Number two is in my permanent collection. Come on 🤝

You are really strong. Originally, everyone only had more than 400 words in spelling, but you reached the 600-word requirement in an instant, and successfully pushed me out of the first place. Sisters are very strong!

The update will be released at noon tomorrow, so don't wait~

I've felt it for a while, it's okay, keep going😊

Here we go, two votes for support, hehehe😁

Alas, dear readers must have discovered that there are actually two updates today, which is too difficult. In fact, that was originally tomorrow's update, but accidentally... Alas, my hand speed is too fast, so annoying. Tomorrow. . . Well, I will try my best to update!

The story is pretty good, but the writing is a bit weak. Some are deliberately not natural enough. Gong Dou almost always has this tone, so it can be forgiven, but it's not wrong. The plot of the story is well written, but the layout is not big. It is good to read as an ordinary novel, but it is not enough to meet high standards.

It's well written. I want to read it again after reading it. It's the feeling I want. I will continue to pay attention to it. Come on, please do more.

The ancient romance can be written in such a compact and natural way, with a tense plot, which is really addictive!

Didi! Here I come! The plot rhythm is well controlled!

▲Overall Comments: The writing of this book is concise and beautiful, the narrative is smooth and natural, and the characters are well created. Although it is a cliché plot, the author's unique elements are added to the cliché. Overall, it is a very interesting book. ▲Micro ★Advantages 1. Writing style: The writing style of this book is concise, the narrative is not confusing, and the description of some events is not complicated and clear at a glance. 2. Plot: The plot of this book is excellently grasped. From the beginning, the heroine is killed by the female partner, to later, step by step, she starts to pay attention to the male protagonist. The series of twists and turns in the middle are not confusing and fascinating. And it deeply touches on the theme of the three golden chapters, making people want to read it. Furthermore, this book is very distinctive in the character creation of some characters, such as the infatuated male protagonist He Yu, the cool Wei Zhao, and the kind and intelligent female protagonist Guan An. The author of these characters has made their personalities distinct with just a few words. 3. Grand View: The characters in this book have three correct views. The heroine is not a virgin, and the supporting characters are not brainless. The frame is not collapsed, the main lines are not messy, the paragraphs are reasonably distributed, and the overall view is free of defects. ★Disadvantages 1. Writing style: The writing style of this book is concise, which brings obvious advantages and obvious disadvantages. The concise writing style makes some plot descriptions insufficient and the atmosphere insufficiently rendered. Hopefully some more specific descriptions can be added. 2. Plot: Because the beginning of the book follows the routines of most ancient books, the story tends to be cliche, and the development of subsequent events is not innovative enough. Moreover, the world layout is slightly smaller and not grand enough. 3. Rhythm: The rhythm of this book is slightly weak, and some places do not bring out the rhythm it should have. However, the rhythm in some places is very good. I hope it can be improved further. I hope you can get better and better, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง By: Baidu Tieba, Jingmeng Yuanran

The story is a good one and the writing is very smooth. I like reading new stories♥! Da Da grasps the pacing very well, and the plot does not drag out. Some minor issues have been raised in the text. I feel that if you want to resonate more with readers, you need to use more writing on details. For example, about the poison in the first chapter, you can use more words and ink to describe the pain and feeling of the heroine after drinking it. Also, the description of the characters' appearance seems a bit sparse 🤭. Come on!