Big Dream, Thousands of Worlds

I suggest you write honestly and honestly, because your writing style is nothing short of brainless and pretentious. If you insist on pretending to write in a serious way, it will make you look different. There is a faint air of force in every line. Coupled with the weird writing style, it will make people dizzy at first glance. You should be able to decide whether it is suitable or not. You are not suitable for this field, but the book you wrote also involves several high-quality books. Among these books, my favorite is "Seeking Demons." I almost died after just reading the volume you wrote about "Seeking Demons." Just looking at this point alone does not mention what happens next, at least the front part is ruined. Ruined to a complete mess, Qiu Mo's style has always been mature and steady. After looking at yours, it's true, every line is full of "I want to show off", and the writing is not good. I have been a swordsman since I was born, and I have only practiced swordsmanship. However, when I accidentally saw farmers plowing the fields, I got excited and went to the fields with my swords. You have to learn from the hard work of the old farmers, and that's not all. You have to work with your swords, and you end up in a different place. Not to mention the aura between the lines, there is also the unusual style. Just talking about your writing style, do you really not feel that there is anything wrong with it? There is nothing wrong with the writing style. It will get better after more practice. The key is that now it matches the style and the force hidden in the words. It is like a child dancing with a sword, which is nothing in itself. But at your age, it would be overestimating your capabilities to go to the battlefield to kill enemies. You don't know what to do at what stage or what field is suitable for you. The other thing is that you didn't check how your writing went before you finished writing it? Post it without looking for typos, poor writing, etc.?

Author, your book has a lot of bugs!

It was good at first, but that woman showed up and force-fed her with poison. Forget it, there will be another one if this one is gone. I won't go.

After reading ten chapters, pretending to be cool with a boss of the same level is called pretending, but pretending to be cool with Jin Dan, who is countless times weaker than himself, is useless.

This novel is not good at all: 1: A saint always likes to show off in front of people in the golden elixir stage 2: It is said that the entire human race puts its treasure on the protagonist, but the protagonist just starts showing off and beats other sects. Not sophisticated at all. 3: After making other people's sect into a mess, others invite the protagonist to be the elder behind the scenes just like no one else. The protagonist agreed immediately. 4: For two attendants, I will keep writing about the inner activities of the attendants, and also write about the psychological activities of an idiot female attendant. 5: Someone in the sect said that they want to open the Xutian Palace, and they want the protagonist to go. The protagonist agreed immediately. 6: The ** female attendant said that she wanted to change and wanted the protagonist to take her there. That female attendant is in the same realm as a soldier, so what's the use of taking her there? The protagonist also found a bunch of people who had no excuses to take the beauty with them. 7: Since you have traveled so long and are already in the realm of saints, you know that you can travel, so you should probably have a plan. However, I have seen that so many protagonists are led by others. Wherever there is a fight, the protagonist rushes over and pretends to be a chicken when he hears the Xutian Temple is opened. 8: Does it mean what others say? He also said that if you cultivate to the realm of a saint, you don't need to pay attention to other people's conspiracies. After watching it for so long, I feel that the protagonist, a saint, is one of those golden elixir stage thugs. Wherever you point, hit an atomic bomb! These are so well written. If you delete this book review of mine, then I will post it every night to see if you are tired or if I am tired.

In other words, it's frustrating to watch. The protagonist doesn't know how to deal with these cultivators, and even all the methods he uses feel like they are mindless.

I feel that the world chosen in the introduction is very discouraging, and I am worried about whether I can control it. Mortal Stream is about ordinary people defying the sky, Zhe Tian is about being invincible, self-reliant and self-reliant, Mu Shen Ji is about daring to change the world and break the gods in your heart, Emperor Domination is about old monsters who are invincible and conquer the nine heavens and ten places. Let's talk about ordinary people's time travel first, and then go to Zhe Tian after the mortals who go first. First of all, there is a problem with the order of the Shepherd God. I don't know how the author dealt with it. According to my understanding, when a person who can travel through time goes to other worlds, he will first feel doubts, fear, and indifference about his own time travel, whether it is caused by human beings or his own talent. What's more, the protagonist is from the divine world and he is a saint and he doesn't know about other worlds. It's very problematic to first travel to a mortal and experience the world that covers the sky and then to the God of Shepherd. After experiencing so many worlds, the strong men and experiences seen can make a person in awe. How can you break the god in your heart if you let the protagonist go to the God of Shepherd? Besides, the protagonist himself is a high-ranking person in the divine world and has never experienced the life of an ordinary person. Let him go to Mu Shen Ji to help Qin Mu, break his superior class and reduce his own interests. This is a reason to persuade him to quit. Then he goes to Emperor Domination. This is a personal show of Li Qiye. You never know how many trump cards King Li has. World Lang may have misunderstood his own strength. Therefore, the world ordering and world selection in the introduction are very discouraging.

The first point of drug testing is that the training system is confusing and not concise and clear enough. Secondly, the protagonist does not know the plot and does not have a sense of immersion. What you read when reading fan fiction is that sense of immersion. If you write a book that does not even have this, how can you continue to read it? This is the most important thing. 80% Of the fan novels on the street do not know the plot. Thirdly, the character of the protagonist is okay. As long as your plot has a strong sense of immersion and the character is good, it will be successful. 80% The rest is writing and publicity.

Why do you have to show off and slap in the face? Do you think this is better, or don't write it?

The Luoyun Sect is only supported by the Taishang Elder? What the hell, this elder is in the incarnation stage, and there are only a few in the whole world. You tell me how hard it is, how funny it is.

A common problem among authors in the 10s was that they wanted to split a 3,000-word chapter into a 1,500-word chapter, and then add more points to create a new chapter. The key is to keep the beast of two chapters. A common problem among authors in the 1915s was that they would like to split a 2,000-word article into a 1,000-word article, and then add a chapter. The key is that it is still a beast of one update, and occasionally two updates. Look at one of the old representatives of old authors, Eagle At least three chapters a day, about 5,000 words per chapter, and basically 15,000 words updated every day. This is still the later stage. In the early stage, there were four chapters a day, and 20,000 updates a day. It completely crushed you, and there was no problem with the quality.

Explanation of Covering the Sky First of all,The flaws in the law of covering the sky are two assumptions made by the same person. The original work talks about the perfection of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, but there are flaws in the laws. But the original work also explains that In the Age of Ending Dharma, heaven kills all living beings, and all living beings transform into Tao to complete the world. The emergence of Tianxin is the embodiment of the perfection of the law. To be precise, the laws of the Zhetian universe are perfect, but the origin is incomplete. The downgrading of divine objects and the lack of immortality substances are due to the fact that most of Zhetian's origin was drained away by the Immortal Realm. These original works can be found, don't be misled by the fans. Also, The so-called Chen Dong said that the Immortal Emperor and other Daluo Jinxian are rumors, just like One Punch Man and Super Sailor II, there is no such thing. Chen Dong never said that at all

Chen Luo'er, if she's not the heroine, why would you write about her? Do all the women who appear have to have an affair with pig's feet? You wrote this with such emotion, I am really speechless.

You blame me, at least let me cheat a few likes 😭

Author, come and take a look. I have 2 monthly passes here.

Pig's feet are not time travellers? So it's so inconsistent to travel to the world of novels we know so well

However, there is one thing that is right: Heaven is the Supreme Being. One's original heart is Heaven's heart, just like Lingtai Fangcun Mountain.

The update of this book is a bit touching.

Take a look, hey, it was updated two days ago. ⊙∀⊙! So this is it.

Holy shit! You are poisoning the entire article. This writing style couldn't be worse. A perfect start, which made you write like this.

Mortals prefer to be speechless. A group of god-transforming monks don't think about how to ascend to the spiritual world. They always think about attacking this and that.

After reading the introduction, I found that it was okay, but the chapters were a bit lacking.

Big dream sister Wanqian, wake up like a salty egg

I read your preface, and if I read the following chapters, it seems that this book is okay.

I'm no longer the leader in the list. I looked at the gap of more than a thousand, forget it, celebrate the author. By the way, is this a sign of a comeback? The author is going to get ahead! ! !

Wherever you fell, just get up. This book failed. At worst, the next book will be a god. Come on, author.

I came across this book by chance and found it was updated 2 days ago. Is this the rate of update of this book? Or is the author delayed by something?

After raising it for so long, it still has no fat. I will give you a monthly pass first. Come on, Saonian. If you rush into the street, you're afraid of some big deal. Start over from the beginning.

The author recommends that you read the three books Yuanshi Zhutian, Zhutian Daozong and Zangliu Cultivation, which are considered better books by Zhutianliu.

... After reading the latest chapter, Dao Tianjun will not really be killed by the protagonist 😅. After all, he is also the back-up man of the Nine Supremes, so he will not die so easily, right?