Princess Jing'an

The writing is good, every word is coherent and has the demeanor of a great master.

First of all, Da Da Jin won very well. It feels like you can get angry, and the content is very substantial. People who read it have the urge to continue writing. But why don't you write some climaxes and highlights? Make people impulsive and invest. That's even better! Secondly, we need to focus on punctuation and paragraphing! For example, if the three kingdoms were initially divided into Jin, Yuan, and Wei, could it be Jin, Yuan, and Wei? Or add a Chinese character after it. The 28th year of Ding'an in the Jin Dynasty actually needs to be changed to the 28th year of Ding'an in the Jin Dynasty. The first part is the country name, and the second part is the reign time. You can also divide the paragraphs into more points, otherwise there will be too many words in one paragraph. It's easy to be dazzled! Finally, you can actually describe more of the background later, for example, what major events happened and how is the national destiny? Are there any natural disasters, wars or anything like that? How are the relations between countries? And what maintains the relationship? Is it a vertical alliance or a cold-blooded relationship? Whether through marriage or land cession. That's all! Please keep writing!

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A very good ancient Chinese novel, the plot is very vivid, and the author's writing style is also good. It's worth reading!

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