The Holy Virtue of the Northern Emperor of the Nine Realms

I only started reading Beidi's books in high school. The content is very grand and contains the author's own thinking. Although the author may not be that mature, he is full of imagination. The nine realms he conceived are far less complicated than they appear on the surface. The variability of the narrative line is the biggest feature of this series.

Here I come~ Although I don't often read books of this type, I still follow the basic points of the novel! Looking at it carefully, I think your sense of immersion at the beginning is quite good! Attractive. The humor in the dialogue between the characters is also very good and has a bit of atmosphere. The novel has its own order and does not feel like running water. The foreshadowing was laid, wonderful. However, I think you can express the personality characteristics of each character more clearly! Many times, you will write a long paragraph of dialogue without any description of expressions or actions. In fact, I think sometimes it will look better if you can describe it! Finally, the description of the scene and details also need to be strengthened.

There has been no movement in the system for a long time. Please vote for yourself and vibrate.

Collect and recommend, "Will you be alright if you are reborn late" come to report!

It's well written, I've collected it, and the characters are vivid! Keep up the good work~~

Already collected. I feel like the opening chapter of this book is very big. I look forward to the follow-up content.

Sorry, I'm going to show off now. The author is my classmate. Maybe I will sleep with the author. . .

It's pretty good, the beginning and the progression are good. It's just that the character of the characters can be a little higher, their identity can be seen better, and they can be highlighted from the side, come on!

I took a look, it's pretty good. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, collected it.

I read it again and found that it was indeed quite difficult to read. Each chapter has a new setting. The setting mentioned at the beginning was refined and expanded a lot in the later period. The setting pace was too fast and the world view was huge. However, I felt that the number of words was too few and it failed to describe the world well. But after all, it is the first book written by Yao Di himself. There is no need to attract readers. It is good to read it yourself.

The writing is very good, but it can't be found on the PC now, and it has not been exposed. It has been collected.

Do as you please, do as you please, have a strong soul and a calm attitude "Chicken Soup for the Soul" (0 x 0)