Vast Immortal Qin

The book Xian Qin is still worth reading when you are short of books. According to the book, Zheng Ge's journey from proton to emperor of heaven should be twelve or thirteen years ago. It is too fast. The protagonist obviously wants to lay a solid foundation for the Qin Dynasty. The highlight should be here, slowly watching Zulong build worlds one by one, and finally build heaven into the ending or sequel. However, a large part of the article is about the protagonist conquering the world alone. The role of Zulong here is more to constantly receive rather than conquer, which is obviously off topic. It might as well be called "About me leading the Qin Dynasty to conquer the heavens". Having said the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. Except for the inexplicable girl's cruel treatment in the first apocalyptic world, the other worlds have their own characteristics. At least there are no obvious poisonous points, and the writing is relatively smooth (there are a lot of typos). I spent a week of free time to read it, and I didn't feel unfinished. It shows that the author did a good job of ending the story at the end (¯ㅂ¯crimin). Well, this is not considered an advantage. Finally, I hope the author will write better in the next book and achieve better results (｢･ω･)｢Hey

The fear of being dominated by classical Chinese😅

1. Conversations in classical Chinese and other descriptions in vernacular Chinese. Classical Chinese is written language, that's for sure. If it involves using classical Chinese for letters, edicts, etc. At that time, there is certainly no problem, but it is obviously a bit strange to be half-literary and half-white. Personally, it seems that the author's classical Chinese writing skills are still lacking, and the spoken language can be filled with more words in vernacular. 2. This is not a historical article, nor is it a textual research. There are some historical errors and omissions in the article that we readers can understand, but it is best not to make major discrepancies in the descriptions of some times and celebrities. 3. It feels like the air is a little high. It's fine in the short term, but if you do it from beginning to end, it will make people tired. Put it where it should be. All in all, this is a book with very good ideas. I hope the author will continue to work hard＾0＾~ PS. I also like Qin Shi Huang

Wang Wuyi failed because the author did not shape it well. The setting is apocalyptic, and the characters are not the children of young ladies or big shots, that is to say, they come from ordinary people to middle-class families. Or maybe it was good before the apocalypse, but it would be depressing after the apocalypse. Maybe this is the case if you have a peaceful personality and are well protected in society? ? But in the last days, people must have been severely beaten by society and still be like this? ? ? Especially after being down and out. Not to mention treating a strong person like this. It can be said that a person without self-awareness is still Wu Zhao? ? ? Dealing with people? ? ? ? The little girl gave him a cold look, then looked at her brother. He didn't show the slightest fear, but seemed more relaxed and generous than his brother. A trace of surprise flashed in Li Chunqiu's eyes. This girl, so different, reminded him of a name - Wu Zhao. "If she dies like this, the world will think that my master has no vision." Therefore, she needs to become a master to prove that my master is not wrong. " The old ghost was stunned, what kind of logic is this? "What if I don't?" Wang Wuyi covered his face and looked at Zhao Zheng coldly. Zhao Zheng smiled, "What is your name?" Old ghost" Aren't you going to try your method?" Wang Wuyi's whole blood seemed to freeze for a moment. "No! No! No! I promise you, I promise you." " Zhao Zheng glanced at her coldly and said: "Now, shut up Wang Wuyi shut up instantly. Original text, maybe a few sentences are missing. But the contrast between before and after is too great, too abrupt. The character design when we first met might be a little better. When you set up a horse for the people behind you, everything changes. I have always insisted that the persona I met for the first time might be better, at least not so awkward.

I have read more than ten chapters, and since I met the tiger, I have started to show off like crazy, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

To be honest, coming from the last novel, I really admire the author's imagination. Although there are some flaws, the flaws are not concealed. It is really a masterpiece. If I can stick to it, I feel it can be called a divine book. It may be a bit difficult to become a god. After all, it is difficult to agree with others. I voted for two recommendations. When your book comes back in a while, I will subscribe to the original version for you. I'm sorry that I kept reading pirated copies of a good book. It wasn't until your book was sealed that I decided to subscribe to it for you. In addition, I also like this book of yours The king of Qin swept Liuhe, and he looked down upon him. Flying swords cut through the floating clouds, and the princes came to the west... Although they say it was the violent Qin Dynasty, I really like this era and this emperor...

The author ranks first in Qin Chui. After reading the beginning, anyone from the Qin State can play all kinds of music, and I was convinced. Go too

Don't write too detailed about the underworld, it's very watery and the plot is embarrassing. Just write about the heavens and the Warring States period, but the pretentious scenes given by the author are really embarrassing, just like Ying Zheng pretending to be in another world,

Author? Is it you?

"I, you can actually be omitted." For example, it would be better to change "I will be in seclusion for three days" to "I will be in seclusion for three days", which is more in line with the habits of the ancients.

The last few pictures have made me feel the shadow of the Three-Body Problem

😅 Author, there are a lot of typos. Find a girlfriend to help you review the manuscript.

Urban Strange Book, City Master is a good one

There is a slight mistake. The protagonist asked Ying Zheng whether he could read or not when he carved something on a wooden board. What Ying Zheng was referring to was Xiao Zhuan, but Xiao Zhuan had not yet been born at that time. Xiao Zhuan was the writing that appeared after Ying Zheng unified the six countries.

I don't know how to show off and still write classical Chinese, and reading novels still makes me waste my brain.

Let me choke, I was just excited You want to show me this ending?

A general who doesn't want to be an emperor is not a good protagonist (manual funny)

This book is beautiful, different from traditional books, and it is just right for my psychological endurance. I really like the format of this book. Why is Jin so artificial? If I were to rate it, I would give it a 7, 5 or 8.

A rare book, very romantic, resurrecting Bai Qi, Shang Yang, and Lao Dan. One day it will be as grand as the Academy of Athens.

Good! The scene is grand, but you have to think about the layout. The pattern determines the size! Write slowly and don't rush. Slow work leads to careful work, and a good book will surely live up to its creator. Here's the ticket for you, please add some juice! ! ! !

Please correct typos, history, and other errors. The author will read the posts every day. Posts that are not corrected will be deleted (otherwise it will be difficult to calculate, so please forgive me). For every 200 posts filled with corrections, an additional chapter will be added. PS: The author is a famous salted fish, please show mercy!

I was about to subscribe, but I lost contact. Fortunately, I searched the author's name and found a new book.

Guess what big things Zhao Zheng will do after getting help from the protagonist? For example: Conquer the West or sweep the Huns or...

Let me explain, the fabrication was made because of religious issues and was spotted by the 404 Crab Beast under the Heavenly Seat. At present, the author has not completed the modification.

I'm going to make up myths and save money! It turned out to be fruitless! Can we still save it?

The book is a good book, and the subject matter is also a good one. However, it is really uncomfortable to read the half-full classical Chinese. Every time I read it, a strange dialogue suddenly pops up, and the sentences are still unclear. It is really uncomfortable. Different from tasteless ribs, this is more like a good dish. The chef was smart enough to add an extra half bowl of salt, which made it very salty. If you really want to write dialogues in classical Chinese, please read through any of the four major classics. Even if you only learn 30%, it will be enough to use it, instead of just reading some classical Chinese in online articles and using it.

In Chapter 80, where we entered the apocalyptic world, the man saw the protagonist waving his hands to kill the zombies, and such a man was thinking of plotting against him! The protagonist is still pretending to be cool with them, I'm really fascinated! Another sister comes out, she has the qualifications of an empress, and she also has a cold tone, I know it! What the hell👻Little girls in the apocalypse are so greedy, don't they just have the most basic respect for a strong man? 🐷

What do you want me to say? The chapters posted these days are really cool. I read ten chapters together and finished it in a few minutes. The plot became less and less attractive to me. The beginning was well written and attracted me. But after the writing of the apocalypse collapsed, especially after the writing of the character Wang Wuyi collapsed, I felt that the writing was unsatisfactory. What can I say about the role of Wang Wuyi? What is its purpose? Let's say she is a key character. The character is poorly written and her role is not much. If she is insignificant, there is no need to write it twice. She is still at a key point. If it is really insignificant, you don't have to write it. But after watching the plot, she will definitely appear. I reward you for writing this character well, because this place is really unsatisfactory. I should read the readers' comments and try to round out the character, or change the previous plot, or at least make this character more pleasing to the eye. But in the end, nothing was done. I don't know whether the author hasn't written it yet, or is unwilling to write it. I have rewarded it, but I really don't want this book to deteriorate from being a good book to having no choice but to give up on it.

How should I put it? It's okay to praise Qin Shihuang, but don't brag. In the world in the novel, before anything happens, you just say, isn't it embarrassing? It's so good. Praise him, saying that he has the appearance of an emperor and the appearance of the sun. I feel that everything that goes against the protagonist's thoughts will make the protagonist angry.

It's best for a little girl to be an unimportant supporting character, living a hard life in the apocalypse. When she meets a protagonist who seems to be an expert but also an expert, she goes her own way. It's really ridiculous and overconfident! Even if she is qualified, what four arrogance does she have just because of the character she was born with? I see that the book is very good now! But I am hesitant about this place. I don't know whether I should invest in September or whether I should pursue it! If the role is big and I will become the protagonist's apprentice, then I can only say sorry!