Magic Brush Liaozhai

There really shouldn't be so many heroines. The later period is all about those girls, going back and forth, getting to know each other, and then getting married. Isn't this a stallion romance? There is no story.

I came here because of the strangeness of the world of Liaozhai. I saw this full-fledged sense of destiny around chapter 50. What is it?

A summary of the female characters in this book so far: Chunyan - the cute maid from Tianjiang, Jinse - the arrogant young lady, Hongyu - the energetic girl from the sports department, Ying Ning - the natural one, Sun Li - the virtuous housekeeping department, Ruyu - the academic and bespectacled girl, Mingyue - the cold-blooded three-year-old girl, Xiang'er - the yandere pink cut black

After reading the book review for a long time, I figured it out For women who don't want to accept, please don't arrange too many plots The woman is interested in the protagonist or the protagonist is interested in a certain woman Try to arrange it, decide on the title, don't procrastinate A woman can be the protagonist's vase, but don't arrange other men It is very disgusting to hurt the protagonist's woman The main task is used to upgrade, open a map, etc. The branch line is used to recruit women, how good

Are eunuchs popular among all Qidian authors now? Why are every update so unstable? Well, I think some authors who are not full-time writers can guarantee at least 3,000 words a day.

I cried after falling in love with the other person. I can't update it.

I don't want to criticize this book, I just want to say that your Liaozhai is too anti-ancient. Since you know that your knowledge should not be revealed in that period, then you really don't know that your system should also change due to today's readers' understanding. The gods you write are too close to people. This close does not refer to life but just like the fairy animations made nowadays. The fights between gods are still the same as martial arts movies, gods and demons. What readers actually want to see is not anti-ancient Liaozhai, or Yi Zhongtian talks about chatting. It's similar to Zhai, system, power system, distance, IQ distance, etc. Your control is okay, but the direction is wrong. The monsters that have formed inner alchemy here for hundreds of years have I even recognize that IQ, and the power system is too ridiculous. , I know you want to say that Liaozhai is written like this, but, as mentioned before, you know that the modern knowledge should be adapted to the ancient knowledge, and conversely, the ancient knowledge should be adapted to the present. You should also know the cognition of today's readers and the current view of the Xianxia system. , The writing is not very good, it mainly tells what I want to say, and I sincerely hope you can walk faster. I hope you can work hard for the next book.

Well, how should I put it. The book was okay at the beginning, but when it came to the woman, she fell in love with the protagonist inexplicably. There was no emotional foreshadowing and no time to settle. When the protagonist needed help, he just said, ah, I miss you so much (I like it) and then blah blah blah. A lot of women agreed without saying anything. Then the daughter of the Wheel King and her maid knew each other. Did the author treat girls as animals that can be in love with the protagonist at any time? The emotional line is a mess, except for the emotions, everything else can be seen. I withdrew first because I couldn't stand the abrupt emotional line.

If it doesn't suck in the later stage, it will definitely be a god, and I will post it as proof.

VIP hasn't read it yet, would you like to ask if you have ascended the throne? I'll wait and see when I ascend to the throne. Although I don't have any starting coins, I'm lucky. I won a few draws and got a lot of bonus coins 🤭. Or I'll come back when the limit is waived.

This fanfic captures the essence!

The first book signed Come on

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Is there a book club group? I ordered the last two-dimensional yellow hair book, but I didn't join the group. Now that I see the author's writing is so good, I want to join the group.

Fortunately, I didn't read this book earlier (ಡωಡ). I just became fat.

In terms of writing style, this book is relatively good now. The author's writing of the main tasks is still relatively comprehensive. It would be better if the side tasks could be more comprehensive.

I left a comment on the red envelope at 17 o'clock. I don't like it, so there is no comment.

I have been following it for nearly a week and finished reading it. It feels like a Chinese fairy tale. I am encouraged by my little January card 😁

Unknowingly, I have read about 200 chapters of this book. It is a very good book, with the style and flavor of Liaozhai, and a sense of fairy tales. Plus it is a harem. It is indeed a good book, and the author's writing style is also very good. However, the only thing that will be criticized for this book is the harem, because I don't know if the author will change in the future, but I will mention my own views on the first 200 chapters: The speed of collecting the harem in this book is the speed of Liaozhai. It is very fast. As a result, I often say that I saw some stallions in this chapter. This is also the disadvantage caused by collecting it too fast. I don't know if the author really likes the harem and wants to write about the harem well, but if so, I would like to make the following suggestions to the author. If not, just think that I am talking nonsense: First of all, I think the author can add some Shura field plots, which can be said to be one of the most interesting plots in the harem setting. It not only increases the interest of the book and makes readers enjoy reading it, but also increases the sense of existence and characterization of the harems, so that they are no longer necessary. People will say that they are stallions. After I saw the meeting between Yan Ruyu and Sun Li in the Jinling chapter, emmm... Although there is no plot where ZZ becomes a sister to a sister, there is basically no description of the Shura field, which is not in line with common sense. It also reduces the fun and gives people a very bland feeling. Secondly, the author can describe more sweet love plots and direct ambiguous interactions between the male and female protagonists, and write those plots in more detail (I mean the oral sex type, or it can go further, I don't know where the level is, hahaha), this kind of plot is actually It's also very good, it looks sweet, and at the same time, it makes the portrayal of the female characters more detailed, and the readers have a more subtle understanding of the female characters. This kind of plot basically made my aunt laugh 2333 the whole time. This is also one of the ways to make the harem more interesting to watch. To be honest, I think a harem without these two points is no longer a harem (personal opinion), or it can no longer be a harem novel, because such a harem only leaves the setting of a harem. The cool thing about a harem is that it is just a shell without the inner essence, and it looks dry, like this Although the harem is more enjoyable when you collect it, it actually disappears after you finish it, and then... It's boring. You may forget some female characters after reading the book, and they will not form a clear impression in the reader's mind. In short, this kind of harem is just like the early online novels, it is just a pleasure to increase the harem. The point, rather than actually describing it carefully, belongs to Mo's soul. And the author's way of writing only has the setting of the harem, without the interest of the harem. Coupled with the fast speed of Liaozhai, it is inevitable that people will not criticize the stallion. Therefore, if the author really loves the harem and wants to write a good harem story, You might as well give it a try by writing like this. If you can't write it, you can read "Asking about the Red World" written by Ji Cha (definitely not an advertisement). The reason why there is a lot of nonsense is also my understanding of harem literature after reading this book. To be honest, Ji Cha is the only author I see who writes about harem carefully. emmm, that's it, come on, author!

When the protagonist has time, he can copy Fengshen and Journey to the West to increase his reputation.

I feel like there are a lot of comments about withdrawing if there are many female protagonists, or withdrawing if there is only one female protagonist, which is all wrong. . . . In ancient times, there was no monogamy, and it was not illegal for people to love whatever they wanted. . . .

What a beautiful book. Don't you like reading without reading the title? Don't know what Liaozhai is like? If you don't know, go check it out. What happened to the two extra wives? Are they eating your rice? Did you drink your drink? There are gods and ghosts, there are good deeds and virtues, there are infatuated scholars, there are women with soft intestines, there are immortals, there is Yama, there is the underworld, and there is the heaven. Weird gods and ghosts, crazy men and women, this is not a bad story

Reading the chapter reviews, I found that the author, in response to readers' requests, has included a few less female protagonists. Can I suggest the author charge more? For example, Yan Mingyue. .

There was a scholar named Lou in Henan who was from Qingyun County. He tried to gamble with others and sleep in graves in the mountains to prove that there were no ghosts in the world. Everyone is different. Lou Sheng laughed and said: "You don't talk about strange powers and confuse the gods. The ghosts you talk about are the troubles of mediocre people. I am familiar with Master's words and there is no such obstacle." One day, Lou Sheng and his friend Cai Sheng visited Xuchang to visit relatives. When they returned home, they met a man and a woman who asked for a ride on the road. They said they were going to Qingyun. Lou Sheng asked for one person and five liang, but he agreed, but the two made him suspicious. After walking for several miles, the man asked the woman about Buddhism and even wanted to obtain magical powers. The woman answered with mysterious words. Lou Sheng saw this and said, "You are cheating. You want to defraud me of my gold and silver, but I can't do it." With the incident of sleeping in a grave as a reference, the two of them kept silent, and Lou felt ashamed and complacent. Not long after we met in the temple forest, I said goodbye and entered the temple. Lou Sheng asked the man again: "How can you prove that ghosts exist?" The man replied: "There are no ghosts in one place, but it does not mean that there are no ghosts in this world. One person says there are no ghosts, but it is not everyone who says there are no ghosts. You can prove it without proof. Many things in the world are different, so ghosts are fake. Although the spirit is not trustworthy, it is not a reason to be arrogant. Since you know the master's words, you should abide by the instructions of respecting ghosts and gods. "It is also said that alchemists are crazy. They are famous officials and have their own desires and worldly conditions. If you have the method to distinguish alchemy, you can avoid being confused." Lou Sheng asked for his method, and the man then explained in detail the technique of self-generation of the idol, the use of light and vision, and the effect of black bean paste and rosin. Halfway through, the man stopped and said with a smile, "I'm here, and I'll stop here. We'll meet again if we have the chance." Lou Sheng leaned out of the car and saw an isolated temple standing in the wilderness with no human habitation. He asked, "There is no village here, only a City God's Temple here. How can you live here?" The man got out of the car and smiled and replied: "I am Qingyun City God, and I have been appointed here as my new boss." After speaking, he entered the temple and hid in the temple. Lou and Cai looked at each other for a long time, speechless.

Damn it, I didn't even notify you when a new book was released. If I hadn't read it on a whim, I wouldn't have even known about it.

Poor road leads to rich road There was a scholar named Ji in Jinling, whose family was rich. One day, Ji Sheng and his friends were traveling in Qinhuai. He was so excited that he took a bottle of wine and drank it with everyone. Its taste is so delicious that everyone is curious about it and wants to know where the wine comes from. Ji Sheng laughed and said: "In the past, Jiayan was traveling as a businessman and met an old monk on Nanyang Road. This monk practiced Confucianism when he was young, changed his path in middle age, and came to seek help from the Buddha in his old age, and became proficient in the three religions. When he saw Jiayan, he said that he had a destiny with the Buddha and advised him to I became a monk. However, because I missed my family, I gave him a drink, saying that my father would be rich in life, and he would not be harmed by drinking this drink. He was sixteen, and now he is seventy and two years old. Where is this monk?" Everyone laughed and sighed at the wonder of the wine. The scholar then said that the wine was a treasure in the family and was passed down from generation to generation. When his family was poor, he sold wine to make a living, and everyone congratulated him. However, one person laughed, and his voice was so loud that it drowned out the voices of everyone. Everyone was surprised and didn't know why he was laughing. The man then asked Ji Sheng what his surname was and answered. Then he said that his wine and wine recipes were all right. When Ji was angry, he turned pale and asked: "Why did the young master destroy my financial path?" He replied: "What path? The path of hard work, the path of getting up early and being greedy at night, the path of caution to prevent theft and fire, and the path of peace for the whole family..." Ji Sheng had no answer. This person taught him: "I am greedy for glory, make friends in vain, and do not understand people's hearts. I have not seen their blessings, but they are poor!" Ji Sheng then realized that he thanked him: "I think about the old days at home, and I have exhausted my thoughts. I want to be named after a strange poem. It goes against the original intention of reading. I wake up after hearing this." However, one person said: "He traveled with us to the Qinhuai River. How can we trust this statement!" Then he replied: "I heard that there is a loyal person here, and invite him to enjoy the honor in the underworld." When everyone heard this, they were surprised, but the smoke and clouds rose, and they couldn't find you when they checked.

During the Yongzheng period of the Qing Dynasty, there was a farmer named Liao in Dongxiang County who was very enthusiastic. One day he launched a fundraiser to build a cemetery for the ownerless bones on the road. He went to the village to visit and persuade, and persuaded most of the villagers to participate. Not long after, a cemetery was established. After thirty years, more than a hundred ownerless bones were buried in the cemetery. One day, the farmer surnamed Liao dreamed that he was at the entrance of the village, and there were more than a hundred black figures standing outside. These people's faces were blue and black, and their faces could not be seen clearly. The farmer was a little scared, and saw one of the figures come out and said: "Don't be afraid, we are the souls buried in the cemetery for the good deeds of the village over the past thirty years, and we will not harm anyone. We have learned that a plague ghost is coming soon, and please burn ten battle flags and 150 knives with silver foil paper. We will fight against the plague ghost and repay the kindness of the villagers." After Agricultural University woke up, he was in a trance. He recalled what happened in the dream and went out to inquire about it. Sure enough, he heard that some villages in Dongxiang County had recently been warned of plague. He hurriedly followed the instructions of the figure in the dream and burned the battle flags and knives. A few days later, the plague still broke out in the farmer's village, and many villagers were killed and injured. Even the farmer named Liao died of illness. The farmer's soul drifted to the underworld and met the souls of the dead buried in the cemetery. He was very angry and scolded them for not keeping their word and not saving the dead. The Tomb Demons cried out for injustice: "After you burned the war flag and the paper knife, a judge suddenly came from the underworld and said that they must receive and distribute this batch of supplies. In the end, we didn't get it! "

I feel that both sides of the author are being disliked. Those who support the harem feel that you are missing some heroines, and those who do not support the harem only want a single heroine. You have written more than one, and you can't regret it. You have been criticized for being crazy about the pace. No matter if there is no heroine in the future or whatever, people will say that you have a harem and lead you to the rhythm. It is better to stick to your own ideas. Those who say there are many female protagonists, why bother to hold on to a single female protagonist but not a lot of female protagonists? It's not like there are many female protagonists and no one reads them. There are very few articles with multiple female protagonists now. Okay, if one of them is criticized by you, give me a way to survive, okay? Who didn't read a harem novel when Internet literature was on the rise? Don't do everything according to your own preferences. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Is there still a way for harem stories to survive?

I have always liked the books written by Xiaomeng. They are very creative and the writing is top-notch, but they tend to break down later! I hope it won't end badly this time

The Spring Festival is coming soon, has the author collected chapters to celebrate the festive season? I don't have high requirements, just update it three times a day during the Spring Festival.