I Want to Be a Great Cartoonist

There is too much content that has nothing to do with comics, and it's not just the word count that's bad, it's just that the author has problems controlling the plot.

I recited the preface to Lanting's Collection backwards. What's the fucking point? If you don't know anything, will any teacher think you are a genius? They will only treat you as a retard, okay... This is too poisonous. And if you, the author, want to write about comic themes, then you should at least have some professional knowledge... It feels like you have a good grasp of the plot. How to draw it? The last punch is really not suitable for the era of 2006.

The plot design, character creation, lines and dialogues are all too childish, and all kinds of gory. The plot template written on the skin of a comic book feels like the way to copy Jin Yong's novels and submit them to newspapers a few years ago. But in writing novels, creativity and outline are not the most important. Character creation, dialogue design, writing style... To be honest, they are too childish. Especially the dialogue design makes me feel that the author is a student with little social experience. The plot design is basically based on brainstorming, and I have no understanding of the mentality of adults and social dialogue methods.

The protagonist is childish and the supporting characters have facial makeup. They copy Japanese comics and shout about the rise of Chinese comics. Regardless of whether the supporting characters are from different parties or each other, except for the two women who appear on the stage, they all feel a bit disgusting. Gay friends feel brainless. If you didn't know that you are the protagonist's gay friend, you would think it was a villain deliberately written to show off to the protagonist. The protagonist signed a contract with someone, without even reading the contract, and copied the name of the protagonist from Japanese comics without changing it. Wouldn't comic readers think that the author is Japanese? Japanese comics are all drawn in black and white and there are a group of assistants who dare not say ten pages on a Friday. You have to follow the basic method when copying comics, right? With your update speed, if I were your opponent, I would hack it. You hired a group of people from Japan to be gunners.

It looks like a white text covered in skin. There is basically no description of the content of comics and animations. It only gives readers an impression that the protagonist copied some anime, and the other side copied some anime, which is a running account. So is the emotional content. Delete it from the bookshelf with no intention of rereading it.

After reading about 30 chapters, the author said that the comic has been serialized, and he only writes that sales have increased. What do comic fans think after reading it? What about outside opinions? What are readers' reactions after reading it? None of it, no writing, this is one of the great things about copywriting. It always writes about the protagonist's daily life, but it seems dry and misses the point.

The protagonist might as well become a fire rescue team member, either jumping off a building or causing a fire.

I don't want to read it, I'm too lazy to complain

Please keep writing, author, it's very good (ง •̀_•́)ง

Chapter 122, it's not Hanba, it's Kuiba

Zhen Ni, Ma Du, I have just read Chapter 24. Three classmates have already jumped off the building, one was caught in a fire, and his father still ***😰😰😰

My Hero Academia is not that great

I have really been looking forward to this type of book, and I also like all the comics that appear in it. But if possible, I still want to use the original name of the character, Qiban. It feels weird (I will always support it)

So be it, let me tell you my opinion. Well, to be honest, I didn't see the climax at all in this book. Generally speaking, your novel must have a climax. You just pave the way. With so many pictures, you should be able to lay the groundwork. Do you know what my expression looks like when I read your novel? There is no fluctuation in my heart. It's not that the writing is bad, just take a short paragraph you wrote. Let's talk about PKing with others with one punch, and then what? What about the climax? What about a slap in the face? Suddenly it's gone, you know that can seem very discouraging sometimes. Then I went on and on and started making animations. Well, if you want to make animations, just make animations. After a dozen or so pictures, they all look like water has been collected, and there is no feeling at all. It is recommended to think more about how to make readers feel involved.

In fact, the writing is okay, but I always feel that a lot of things are missing. And I write a little too much on a daily basis. The reader's feelings after watching the book are not written, and there is no sense of pleasure. It's the kind of pleasure that surprises others, but I haven't experienced it yet. 😥😥😥

There is indeed a reason why the category is urban literature.

I highly recommend Takahashi Kazuki's Yu-Gi-Oh! You can make a fortune by buying cards.

75,000 Ghost readers are online

I was excited to read the comic book novel at first, but the emotional line in the first three chapters was completely dissuaded... A woman who seemed to have killed the protagonist in her previous life, and the protagonist still likes her after being reborn? And the plot of the fire is too unreasonable, right? It's said that the fire was huge, but the firefighters hadn't even arrived yet, so the protagonist just rushed in without any protection like Dang Touqing, and it's still on the fifth floor? He never thought about what his parents would do if something happened to him. He only thought about the girl's family affairs, so didn't he think about his biological parents? In the previous chapter, I wrote about cooking for my parents, but in the next chapter, I just did this? You are just that female classmate. Doesn't it have much to do with you if you don't count things from your past life? This setting of such a secret love is too bloody. Furthermore, this woman is also selfish. If she is not related to you, but at most is your secret admirer, isn't her life valuable? It's even more disgusting to engage in this kind of psychological activity if someone else goes in to save your mother and you can't stop them. It's over. I originally wanted to retreat after reading the third chapter, but after looking at the chapter title in the fourth picture, I stayed again. As a result, this shit really fed me mouthful after mouthful... Having experienced a fire, if you think of the theme of heroes because of the impact of the fire and the people struggling in the fire, forget it, but you still only think about this woman Lin Ran, I really have nothing to say, nb. I really want to say that it was born out of personal feelings. I really feel aggrieved by the heroic theme. There is also a sentence at the end: "Perhaps, there will not really be superheroes in this world, but I will be behind you and be your hero silently." I'm sorry, brothers, I really can't bear it and withdraw first 😰 Excuse me, excuse me 😓

When I read a book now, I first read the recommendation votes. Books with less than 10,000 votes are mediocre. Your book doesn't even have 2,000 recommendation votes. After reading more than 20 chapters, I realized that it was indeed true. It is indeed mediocre. 😅

Comics divided into seasons? It's not like JOJO changed the protagonist, or there are no other paintings. The newbie in the series took the initiative to pause it, which is so nonsense. The first serialization of the protagonist of "Dream Eaters" was paused for a while, and then cut in half. In short, I feel that the industry situation disclosed in the book is not credible.

Cartoonists should be single. . . Dog head

I remember I said two days ago that there were serious bugs in the work. Lin Ran knew you were the author from the beginning, but he didn't know it after more than 90 chapters. If the author is really serious about his work, I suggest you change these chapters. It's just a suggestion. I will still follow the novel. I hope you can refer to it! {"NickName":"Leisure City Lord","UserId":334780746}