Rebirth of the 90-Year-Old Fisherman Girl

The writing style needs to be improved, and the novel is a bit like a composition. I hope the author can pay attention to it in the future. The heroine has a good personality, but I hope it is the type of heroine who quietly gets rich. Don't be cliché. It is better for the heroine to go to a big city and meet people with good family backgrounds after she grows up. It is a bit cliché to meet three people with good family backgrounds at the beginning. Well, don't let that Ning be offended by being together with the surname Gu. Every time I read this kind of novel, it's a bit annoying. It's the same. Every time the heroine gets rich, she will definitely meet a lot of rich and powerful people. . . They are not all in the same environment, even if the heroine does marry a rich and powerful person in the future. I also hope that the female protagonist will get rich first and reach the same position, instead of getting to know the male protagonist from the beginning. It doesn't matter if the male protagonist shows up later. I like the heroine's character and the ability to marry under the sea, so I hope the author can write an article about how powerful women are.

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The subject matter is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. There are many typos. In some places, there are too many words, too few words, or improper wording, which results in the meaning expressed in the article being opposite to the author's idea. If the author has time, read each chapter slowly and revise it to make it more attractive. Another problem in the article is that it is wordy. The heroine has expressed her thoughts in the previous paragraph, but she says it again in the next paragraph. Although the wording is different, the main meaning is the same. Such paragraphs should be deleted, otherwise it will affect reading. The setting that the heroine is a fisherman is quite interesting. She is very powerful if she has super powers in the sea. There is no need to have other golden fingers. The main idea in the article is that the heroine is going to college. There is no need to get to know people with strong backgrounds before going to college. She can just get rich in a low-key manner. The heroine can live a good life relying on her own powers. There is no need to get involved with people with strong backgrounds. It is too cliché.

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I really like this kind of article, about fishing and treasure hunting in the sea... But there are too many shortcomings in this family. I am not interested in this aspect. It is really not worth reading. I might as well write a farming article. Write more about *** and less about trivial things about home affairs. I am sure more people will read it...

There are very few updates every time. When will updates be added