Azeroth Lord of the Deep

The writing was good at first, but later it felt like it was a different person, almost like a ghostwriter. . .

Author, I just want to ask what is the use of the pig's feet in this book. Now it is all about the history of Warcraft. You are here to change the future. The pig's feet have no sense of existence at all, I agree!

The further back you go, the more poisonous it becomes. You know you are seeking death but you force yourself to do so.

Okay, there is another new generation of wow novels that you can read. I think that as a novice, you write this, which is relatively new in WoW novels (I almost vomited the plot of the reborn elves/humans fighting 123 battles), but it is a challenge, because thinking from another dimension, a fish... What should it do in the plot of WoW? How to do it? It is indeed something difficult to imagine. 😠 I think you should let the protagonist be transformed by Mr. En, at least with a tentacle or something, otherwise it will be difficult to write the plot of landing in the future. 😏 Anyway, come on, after reading the Zerglings in the StarCraft world, I became interested in the setting of the protagonist giving the villain queen a pet😏😏

😒 2233 that can't be beaten even by thunder every day

What is the significance of the protagonist? Five years of strength allowed him to join the ranks of the top tier, but his influence was completely unworthy of his status. Can you please not brag about your identity so much when arranging soy sauce? Except for the many useless characters, the plot is exactly the same as the War of the Ancients trilogy, so why don't I read the original book? Do you have to spend money to watch pirated copies at Qidian?

Too much nonsense, the protagonist is like a supporting role

What is the use of your protagonist? He basically has no sense of existence, his strength is comparable to Ma Pang, but he is still afraid of this and that.

First, the protagonist is dispensable in this book. Even if all the content about the protagonist is deleted, it will not affect the viewing. Second, the protagonist's inaction cannot be covered up by such completely illogical words as "He wants to play a development game." If your protagonist has no motivation, no progress, and no action, it only means that there is a very serious problem with the author's plot arrangement and plot structure. Third, every Warcraft player has fantasized about what would happen if they traveled through time. I don't think anyone would really do nothing after traveling through time. The reason is very simple. World of Warcraft is a very dangerous place. The environment, camps, and conflicts between races will force you to either move forward or die. In summary, if the author wants to write a book seriously instead of retelling Chronicles of Warcraft in his own way, the protagonist in the later chapters must not be as completely worthless as the previous chapters. Furthermore, if you want to make this book better, I suggest you revise a lot of the previous chapters, and the protagonist needs to actively or passively participate in the so-called "backstory." What readers are reading is the story of your "protagonist", not something boring or even silly like "your protagonist is watching a show in the game world".

The protagonist has no sense of existence. It feels like he is just trying to make a fool of himself. You can watch it without the protagonist.

Improve slowly so that you can make progress

If the protagonist wants to complete the great feat of being a mortal and rivaling the Titans, which has never been accomplished, he should open up a path to reach the sky as a mage, and not just rely on traveling through memories and some adventures or talents to become stronger. After all, no adventure can be greater than a Titan, and no talent can be stronger than a Titan. And this brand new magic system can be completed by the protagonist's ten thousand years of hard exploration.

Can the First Gengmon evolve?

In fact, this story line is very novel, and I personally am very much looking forward to the future direction. As for some people saying that the protagonist is too expensive and looks depressing, I have no idea in this regard. After all, the so-called wilderness demigods and ancient gods are not on the same level. The author probably saw that so many people did not agree and could not withstand the pressure, so the plot line was written crookedly or not written down. It can only be said to be a pity!

There is no big meaning, and there is no content that makes the reader instantly see it, like an explosion.

The writing is okay. Good luck to the author.

After reading it in one go, I feel that as the story develops, the protagonist's role becomes less and less... In fact, just remove the dialogue and foreshadowing of the recent chapters and cover it in one chapter. The more important plot is actually what the protagonist did in the War of the Ancients. I hope the author will consider not letting the protagonist lose more than two chapters 🙂

At first, I thought that after being born in the Well of Eternity, he might become a demigod-level figure or a team leader to command the entire sea area, but after reading a few chapters, it didn't make much sense. Salty Fish Thoughts,