Dream Game Master

I suggest you change it. After reading the first few chapters, I think some of the things in this chapter are good. The author said earlier that the wizard was killed by a "monster" in the dream world. Later, I don't know how to explain the resurrection of the player. In the early stage, the power level is not high enough to be able to overcome it, but what about later? But how much capital does it take to build strength in the early stage of resurrection? The author asks you to respect your own previous settings (this is a dangerous dream world, and the memory of your golden-finger wizard relies on "danger"). If this is not handled well, everyone will disperse and collapse. I hope the author can write it well.

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After reading the introduction, I found that it still has potential, but halfway through, I realized that the pig's feet have been inherited, but the tone and behavior are still a loser and childish. It's easy to get involved by reading. Although most of them are diaosi, who wants to really become diaosi?

First time tipping 😜 "Manual Funny"

The pig's feet are too skinny! Can you be a little more serious?

What the protagonist got was obviously the memory of a wizard, but why did it look so awkward when it came out with Chinese-style exercises? It would feel much better to change it to a Western one or change it to basic training methods and basic swordsmanship and then separate them later.

Type in the name you like, one is limited to one per person 🙂🙂🙂 It may not appear, but it will be included in the notebook. The name should be normal and within the family name. Appears on, otherwise the author would have this expression 😰😰😰, then, I love you 🌹🌹🌹, pretend I am a girl[ fn=8]😃😃 The format is almost like this Name: Mo Junyi Height: 1.8 Meters Gender: Male Age: 20 Identity: Doctor Ability: To be determined by the author himself, I am afraid that I will be more awesome than the protagonist all of a sudden (this should be normal, not too buggy) Then the author will help me arrange it. This is mine, manually funny

Let the author create a book club! ! !

Discovering Fairy Seedlings, a good virtual cultivation article, please give the author a big boost, don't collapse, eunuch

I don't understand why the protagonist can still get the source of dreams when he fights the monsters he created in a world he created? Could it be that this self-created dream world can automatically generate dream sources? So why do you need to do it yourself when it can be automatically generated? Isn't this world yours? A dream source generated by your own world does not belong to you, and you still need a creator god to brush it alone? I don't understand what this setting is?

Ten million US dollars per coin is too fake. Is it okay for more than 10,000 people to spend at least 50,000 coins every day? 500 Billion US dollars a day, the real world is estimated to be in direct financial crisis. Because the skill can only extend life by 50, and can be exploded directly from monsters, the price is only 10 coins. Not to mention one million coins, there are many people who are willing to sell a few for 10,000 coins. Moreover, the real government will probably send people in, especially if the protagonist causes a lot of troubles, but if you don't write about the government, you will lose your IQ, and it will be easy to get a 404 if you write about it. Therefore, this type of book is very easy to collapse, and the only one that is better written is "The Great Way of the Lord God".

Leave proof! ! ! I, Mr. Li, bet that those who can stay after reading Chapter 4 are definitely extraordinary people! ! Let's not talk about the character of the protagonist. A big boss behind the scenes, he personally enters the game at the beginning, and it's okay to enter the game, not to prepare for the future, but to simply show off. According to the author, ordinary people, to gain power, they have to show off and play well. But it's not like you to show off! ! ! Chapter 4, I really can't read it. This kind of articles all have player attributes. The author only has a few words in the player attributes, and the explanation behind the brackets is more than a hundred words, and they are all words that he thinks are awesome. Anyway, I really can't stand it anymore after the fourth chapter. Do you like it or not? Some people say it's food? ? ? ! ! ! !

After seeing the latest chapter, the protagonist became invincible in the dreamland, and even went to play dungeons with players in person. The protagonist's father created a power, and then a certain passerby player can bully others. He is really a relatively low-level boss behind the scenes, just like Hongjun, the great emperor, personally went out to compete with the human race for hegemony.

I wanted to be funny, but I lost my temper and felt extremely toxic.

The design is interesting, but the author's writing is so vicious.

Write down my thoughts and use the space to comment. In fact, why do many authors writing virtual games now have to write about killing monsters and upgrading? Let's talk about why there are character upgrade games in reality. The reason is not that the technology is too backward. So use it to do tasks, kill monsters and upgrade to reduce the amount of calculations. But your novels can be transformed into surreal games and virtual worlds. If players can't tell the difference between real and fake, it shows that technology has caught up. You still refer to character games. Is this possible? Just like the current king and chicken, the degree of freedom is higher than before. There is no reason for you to play a virtual game or a novice village, and then someone sends you a mission.

The title is actually Chinese, Qin Guogong=Duke Champion Marquis=Marquis Zheng Bo=Earl The Viscount didn't pay attention Qingyang County Baron=Baron

🥱 In fact, this book is doomed to hit the market from the author's idea of ​​a race war. It's a test and a test. It's all your own imagination with no actual basis, and it also deceives players! I want to say that you can come full circle? Also, I really can't imagine the author's brain circuit. If you don't recruit people immediately when you have the energy, you have to take one test, two tests, etc. To recruit people all at once!

I wanted to raise him, but I didn't expect it to end.

There's something wrong with the last part of Chapter 18, it's too heavy with the previous part.

Creativity is a good idea, but it's a pity. Are there any novels about similar dream creation games?

Does the author have a book club?

I really like it, why is it gone?

If in reality there is a game with poor benefits, extremely explosive, and a game that only pays for money, let me tell you, no one will have much motivation to play it. Do you think the players are really smart? Don't you put any thought into this type of novel?

Let's start a new book (￢_￢) Actually, this book has done well, and it will probably have about 200,000 fans after it is written... It has just been released...

Well, the overall outline should not be too clear or too certain. Just know the main line, otherwise it will be difficult to write... (Personal opinion, I don't like to make mistakes)

It's pretty good, but it's a little watery, maybe because of the writing style! There are loopholes, but it's not poisonous!

This alternative main god version of the novel is very well written, I hope the author will continue to work hard! Come on

There is a novel that begins very much like him.

I just read the beginning, and it's about the universe. I've read books by many authors, and their universe is the earth. I'm embarrassed about this because the threshold for online writing is low, but you can't possibly not know that the earth is just a planet in the universe. Why does one earth become the whole universe? Do you have any idea of ​​the size of the universe? The solar system is just a tiny speck of dust in the universe. How old is your Earth? You can represent the entire universe.