Start with an Island

Author, don't develop this book too fast in the early stage, otherwise you won't be able to write it in the later stage (everyone knows this) In the middle, there may be pirates seizing Dayuan Island, and the protagonist is trying to get it back (this is the first time I will write more details)

You have a lot of requirements and you are quite confident.

Generally speaking, the book is not bad, but there are still some old routines 🤫🤫, but these are acceptable. The most important thing is not to write fantasy.

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It looked good at first, but it was inexplicable why a woman's love line appeared. I couldn't understand what the parents wrote. It would be better to just start with both parents dead, so I tolerated it. Later, ancient martial arts powers and bodyguards appeared. I really thank you! Waste of time

She went from being a mainstream person on the island to being a personal bodyguard and a campus beauty. I can't afford to be hurt.

I was successfully persuaded to quit by the protagonist's mother. It's a bit disgusting to be like this.

I suggest you not write about the heroine or the supporting character. A person who is five years older than the protagonist. An ex-girlfriend whom I haven't seen for a long time. A former best friend of the heroine with a bad attitude. A passerby who pretends to be a 300-pound girl. Can you write something normal? Ask the readers what they like.

You feel that this novel is an imitation, and I am afraid that it will be like another novel in the future. The world of the island will become like cultivation or fantasy, and using money to buy carrying weight is a bit tricky.

I read Chapter 80 of Discouraging Resignation. The treasure appraisal industry requires a reserve of knowledge, and young people are generally not good at it. I think the old man is not wrong, and it is appropriate to question. If I were to put myself in his shoes, I would also doubt it. The protagonist directly cursed people and said that the old man was too much. I don't know who is too much and has a character problem.

The emergence of ancient martial arts and supernatural powers made me give up on this good book. Goodbye

Li Xiaoyoucai, what kind of name is this? It's so twisted.

Please write less emotional dramas. Originally, it is the love of parents for their sons, and everyone understands it. I've been through it all before, but I'm a little annoyed by this mom when you keep doing this.

I really like it, and I engage in these disgusting pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. Can the title of the chapter with these disgusting slap-in-the-face plots be clearly stated? I'm jumping to read it. It's so disgusting.

The name of this heroine seems really unpleasant.

Shouldn't this book go to Fantasy Pingdao? In the city, in real life, we are on the wrong track!