The Three Kingdoms Came to the World

This book is okay, but the writing about the relationship between the protagonist and the protagonist is very poor. If you are not good at writing about emotions, I suggest you not to write it. The interaction between the protagonist and his parents in the author's book seems really awkward. After reading it for a long time, I have the urge to abandon the book. I couldn't stand it when I saw the main character interacting with his uncle! I hope the author can improve it.

I saw Chapter 51, since it is about the Three Kingdoms, why is Dian Wei so weak? A person who has just transferred can scare away a famous general of the Three Kingdoms. If you are transferring to a heavy armor soldier, you can beat Lu Bu. It is written in the Three Kingdoms genre, read more about the Three Kingdoms, and give up decisively 🤫🤫🤫

The first big poisonous point of this article: The battle loss rate of "Building Villages and Killing Wolves" is 39% 1 Don't be cowardly or afraid, and use your life to benefit college students! ! ! I can't imagine that a team that only relies on simple divisions and has little integration will have a stupid impact. And then no one ran away? Are the people of our great dynasty so high-quality? There is no plan, no formation, more than a hundred college students are just the background, and the professor who can plan the camp is just a decoration. Saving people and losing territory is the truth of both, eh? Isn't this China? ? 2 The reason for the incident: It took four hours to get water back and forth. I want to take the author and reinvent the wheel! ! This is just a problem, not a crisis! ! The article said that after the war, the average combat power per capita was ten, but before there was no upper limit on combat power, the war started? Are you taking your life for granted? Three Conceptual issues. Do you think this is a game? This should be the author's fault. After "Jungle Breakout", "Bandits Attack" still doesn't seem to take life seriously. Vomiting blood🔨🔨🔨, I want to say that this battle is the "Village Building and Wolf-Slaying Battle" but the battle damage does not allow

The overall feeling is good, but too taken for granted.

I think there are too many expression descriptions and not enough psychological descriptions.

Recommended. It's a book you can read. Come on.

Do the historical figures in this novel have any memories of their past?

I have read a lot of books on the Three Kingdoms theme, and this book is very novel. I feel that the description of the force value in this book is too vague, and the force value of the famous generals of the Three Kingdoms is also a bit embarrassing. How big is the difference in the value of a little force? It's understandable that the protagonist is extremely powerful

My personal opinion is that in this kind of hegemony-type novel, the protagonist's rational skills should be fully developed and his emotional control should be strengthened. In the beginning, you can have this kind of chatting and laughing, but as the number of people increases and each position is established, this kind of thing will become less and less. I felt good when I read the novel of Xie Ying in the past. There are some places that I can learn from. After all, it is also a type of hegemony. I personally hope to join it. There will be more interesting content about personal and family luck in the later period. The system should be updated. In fact, I think that after a certain number of villages are built, it can be updated. You can add communication system, luck system, dungeon system, etc. As far as dungeons are concerned, you can bring out certain generals, commanders, counselors, or soldiers. This requires farming style and slowly develops. Modern people basically Everyone is wise. You have no reputation in ancient times. How can you recruit talents and common people? Even if the protagonist is powerful, he is only one person after all. There are so many strong men in modern times. It is impossible for him to be the only one. Moreover, some places are not very reasonable. There is no explanation on whether firearms and firearms can be used. If so, how can soldiers be organized, disciplined and equipped with weapons? Will the protagonist establish the first village, and what about foreign countries? The Three Kingdoms is only the history of China, and there are many foreign histories. I don't know yet. After all, I can only take care of my own surroundings first. But this needs to be explained clearly in the middle and later stages, so do you need to change the title of your book? That's it for the time being. I hope the author can write better and better. There are too few good books now.

Dragon Tower, Ye Zi is unable to name it. We collect some dragon towers, which will be randomly used when coding. The format is as follows: Name/Gender/Common Weapons Fang Fan/Male/Lance Weapons, small props and equipment in line with the Three Kingdoms can also be used randomly.

Okay, the writing is not that good, but it's better than the previous ones. It's just better than many novels. It's just that it's not as popular as it should be. Since it is the Three Kingdoms, it is best to make the fights more exciting. What you wrote feels a bit forced and slaps in the face. It feels like the large-scale war fights are not written well and have no finishing touches. Also, the characters are not set up and written well. It feels like they are all just background actors, which makes the writing a bit anticlimactic. If the fighting can be written well, it will be considered a masterpiece. I don't mean to point out the uncomfortable parts to let you know. When your income is not good, just post a single chapter or explain it at the end. There are still people who support you. I wish your writing will get better and better. I don't have any money, so I will give you a 1,000 reward.

In fact, to be honest, the talents of modern times are ten thousand times greater than those of ancient times. They are all standing on the same starting line. It will not take long for these ancients to become cold, not to mention they are all familiar with their characters 😒😒😒

The writing is very good. I hope no one will massacre ten thousand people or a whole city in the future! ! ! There must be limitations, such as physical strength, endurance, mana, etc. From the time when lords built villages to the founding of kingdoms, it would be speechless if a god appeared. If the god takes action and disappears into ashes, what else will be built? . The comparison of strength cannot be compared. The comparison of lords is between people and resources. Some suggestions, I hope you will adopt them.

The protagonist is so disgusting. He never cares about the life or death of his subordinates. Many times he can survive as long as he takes action. But every time he watches others kill his subordinates, the protagonist just watches from the side and pretends to be cool. He waits until his own people are almost dead before taking action. This kind of garbage male protagonist looks so disgusting.

One meter 83. Weight 60? Isn't that a piece of firewood? Does anyone really like this thin guy?

Haha, my confession was successful yesterday, I'm happy ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪

If you don't like the protagonist, it's a bit of an offence. If your boss makes a mistake, he will be given a medal and then get out. This person will no longer exist. His contribution is only worth a medal, and it is still third-class. How many chapters is that? I forgot! ! ! The more you look at it, the more boring it gets! ! ! Abandoned! ! ! !

I read it in one go. To be honest, it was a little bit toxic in the early stage, but I still felt good after watching it.

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Let's talk about the first big poisonous point encountered in this book "Building a Village and Killing Wolves" 1 The casualty rate is as high as 39%. Are they still college students, sacrificing their lives and blood for the protagonist? ? ? At this time they are just water source pressure, pressure is not the problem. The external environment has not yet reached a desperate level 2 The article mentioned that after killing the wolf, the average force per person is ten. This means that the players start working hard before reaching the upper limit of promotion. . . I'm afraid that the protagonist is born to be an iron-blooded emperor, and all his subordinates will have to fight for me? If you don't level up first, just for the sake of being the best in the world, these students are not soldiers, the protagonist can be stupid, and these thirty-nine lives are all background? No one will have any problem? No one cares about life? The protagonist can fight with wild boars even before he is ten years old 3 Is it okay for a team of 100 people to be divided into small groups? Then the stupid ones rushed, you are humans, you are fighting wild beasts, and there are only sixty-nine of them in total. This is really embarrassing. There are professors and doctoral students who can build camps. You can't even fight a guardian beast. You can just shoot it from a distance with a wooden spear. This casualty rate is really vomiting blood. Saving people and losing territory is a combination of both. Everyone needs to know how to do it. It's not life and death, it's not survival in desperate situations, there's no adequate preparation, there's no IQ planning. I had a headache when I saw it. When I first saw it, I was confused. There were still a lot of things to do. Why did I just fight? Even so, I only thought of a few battle losses. Thirty-nine! ! ! ! Author, you are so true that I vomited blood. . This is the arrival of another world, not a game! ! ! He will die! ! He will die! ! You say that the concept has not changed, and you say that modern people cherish their lives. You said that the concept has changed, and you said that people cherish their lives. Ouch, my brain hurts, my brain hurts.

I remember reading an advent novel that I thought was pretty good. It was about the advent of the Black City, which is like the ancient Qin Xianyang and the Tang Chang'an. The ancient Qin Emperor and Han Wu, along with the ministers and soldiers of their respective dynasties, all descended into the modern world. When I first read it, it had not been updated yet, so I forgot about it as time went by. Now that I want to read it, I can't even remember the name. Which brother knows please tell me, thank you.

The author's layout is too small, and I only see the protagonist himself. What kind of fairy treasures are placed on the protagonist all over the network? Let's just talk about dragon veins. There are so many dragon veins in the human race, why is it that only the protagonist's dragon veins have mines? It's understandable to have more dragon marrow, but just one island in the middle of the lake? There is also the general star, the protagonist nb, but the author also said that this is divided into levels according to the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and also said that so-and-so has been mythized, so why is it that only the protagonist can get the Golden Emperor? Lu Bu only got a greedy wolf and was speechless, and Zhuge didn't say anything. There is also rune technology. Even if the author wants to write that only the protagonist has rune technology, then there are no specialties in other territories? It was also mentioned at the beginning that the protagonist is only fighting with Yuan Shu and Sun Jun. What about Liu Bei, Yuan Shao, and overseas? The layout is too small, so I can write a lot of words casually! I saw that the author had a vague idea of ​​writing double lines, one now and another, it was so confusing! Although I can understand it, it's quite uncomfortable. It's better to add a few words when writing another location, such as: In Chang'an City:…; In Anning City:…or something like that, it will be much clearer! Basically, that's all I can think of, any additions are welcome.

Let's talk about some disgusting routines. When practicing kung fu, you must squirt💩. The first fight is either a bandit or a wolf or a tiger. When you practice kung fu in the mountains, you will squirt on the team of a rich family. The protagonist always looks at women with sparkling eyes, with appreciative but not dirty eyes...

The protagonist is 180 and you told me it is only 60 kilograms. Is this a bamboo pole? ? ?

I was already poisoned to death from the very beginning.

Before Chapter 37, I was very unhappy. After Chapter 37, my mentality changed and I got a lot better. Although there are still some shortcomings, I can continue reading. Come on.

The first few posts seriously discouraged me from quitting, so I deleted the first 20 chapters. I can't stand it at all 😒 It's poisonous to a certain extent.

I saw someone writing the first thirty-seven chapters which was not interesting, but it gradually became more interesting later on. But I want to say that your later writing is very useful. You have persuaded a lot of people to reject it, but no one will read it no matter how good it is later. I also lost the desire to read after reading the first few chapters.

Thank you, sir, for using the name I provided.

It's okay based on the name. Click here to read a chapter. Rubbish. What the hell? What kind of novel can I write if I can't write the first chapter?