Super Invincible Enhancement

I have been following this book for so long, and I wanted to give the author some suggestions, but I didn't know if I would adopt them, so I read the book reviews in general. It is nothing more than the following points. The first point: The character description is too serious. The old monster has lived a lifetime, gets angry at every turn, and is moved to tears by every little thing. Second point: The division of levels is seriously unclear. In the early days, it was only said that blood level can be cultivated faster. Later, I saw that level 9 cannot beat level 8, and level 3 cannot beat level 2. The third point: The IQ of the supporting characters is too low, and they can be easily tricked. The fourth point: There is no strict classification of the levels of items. In the later stage of writing like this, I don't know which item is good, and the price system directly collapses. Advantages: The theme is relatively new, with the power of blood and totems, etc. The enhanced golden finger is also good and rarely used. How to improve: Just change the map and re-edit all the background characters. For example, after this whole situation is solved, and then you think you are the best person, suddenly an outsider comes and instantly kills all the old monsters you thought before, and he is very young. You only know after you step out of this small circle. It turns out that this is the starting point of martial arts, it can only be regarded as an introduction. This place can also round up the trap of the old monster. The reason why the character is colorful is because it has been practiced for a lifetime and it is at the entry level, so naturally it has the character of a little gangster. Changing the map can throw away all the previous mess and sort it out again. It is best to re-list the martial arts level, equipment level, and price calculation before entering a new map, and then it will be reborn. Sometimes a good book may not necessarily be the best-selling one. Is the ultimate goal of writing to recognize the author's writing style or to recognize the story of a book? Summarizing some of the works of the great masters from the starting point, almost all of them recognize the author, so I think it is not important how you write it in the early stage. If you write it and readers like it, your channels will be opened, and then you can enter the master zone and truly write your own works. Come on 💪 I hope to see you in the master zone, and I will continue to support you.

I have finished reading more than ninety chapters. Overall, the beginning is quite vicious. There is a feeling that the whole world is against the protagonist (including the protagonist's mother). It is a bit depressing and makes people feel uncomfortable. Later, the image of the protagonist's mother was reversed, and it felt more appropriate. After reading it, the only memories left for me are the suppressed protagonist and the protagonist's mother who finally reversed her image. 😅

How to say it? Well! If you say rubbish, it is rubbish, bad book

The book is very interesting and a good book. My mother's obsession made me feel so uncomfortable. Fortunately, I have a good son who immediately killed people and sucked away other people's talents (this should be a powerful function).

Goldfinger is about the same, but the plot is really too addictive. After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I say goodbye 🙏

It's really rubbish. Fortunately, it has high poison resistance, otherwise it would have been poisoned to death.

When I read Chapter 9, I found that the author's character setting was really poor. Let's not talk about the setting of the protagonist. The setting of the protagonist is unreasonable. First point, the protagonist's mother was kicked out by a big family, so as a person from a big family, the author did not write about the knowledge, background, and temperament at all. Instead, she wrote about the same mentality and knowledge as ordinary people in the city. I will not give examples. Second point, as a member of a big family and with a high bloodline (the author wrote this, I am not lying), he actually has no cultivation at all, which is very unreasonable. The article does not mention that the protagonist's mother's cultivation was abolished. Although I didn't read it carefully, I can still be sure of it, so it is a failure. You might as well just set the protagonist's family to be ordinary civilians, and then your character's setting will look very reasonable. If you choose to be a member of a big family and you can't express that feeling, it seems like a poisonous point. I can't comment too much. After all, I just read 9 chapters and I can't help but say it. Taken together, the plot is old, the character setting is poor, the plot is average, there are no highlights, and it is not attractive.

I can't stand these 28 chapters anymore and retreated. . I'm taking a serious look at your grades, waiting for you to poop

The author, who is a newbie, can't say anything. I'm a novice. Farewell.

The disgusting and vulgar beginning and plot made me almost vomit after reading this kind of content on Qidian. This book is suitable for listing on Chuangshi, and I decided to put it on the main website of Qidian.

I saw the content of this novel. The hand holding the phone trembled as he clicked on the comment. My typing hands were trembling and I clicked on the discussion area. The input method appeared before my eyes. At this time, I had a question in my mind: "Mom sells batches, I don't know if I should take it seriously?" Are you really an old author? The way the plot is handled. Describe the plot. Why is it so poisonous? It's easy for you to obtain the Poison King this time. Your novel is very popular. I didn't seem interested in other novels, so I clicked on them directly. When I read your novel, I really wanted to curse people.

I'm a Buddha. Although this book is poisonous, it has an inexplicable magic power that made me pass the test of the world of heaven and earth. Then I couldn't stand it anymore. I'll read it first. Occasionally reading poisonous articles that don't require thinking is also a novel experience.

You are all wrong. The most important thing about this novel is to read the reviews. The sum of the reviews and the novel is what makes it truly interesting.

The author said that it doesn't matter what you say, you are just trying to criticize me, but I won't change it anyway!

I think it's pretty good. Everyone is probably using the keyboard as an AC to enjoy themselves.

Um, the pig's foot mother was so hateful in the front that the family in the back immediately licked it when it was in trouble. This is really a big reversal. Either keep hating it or don't write hate in front of it. Even if the family is in trouble, the family should play the emotional card and invite them instead of kneeling down and licking them. This is really vicious. I hope the author can adopt it!

What a mess of plots and power levels, I have been reading books for 15 years, and I have always just walked away if I don't like it. I never complain, and I can't help it today! Bye-Bye

A real mentally retarded person who strengthens his sword can't strengthen his clothes and armor? Do you know that strengthening ants will not strengthen poisonous insects? Do you know how to strengthen training books, but don't know how to strengthen sword skills and sword skills? Do you know about strengthening Qi and blood pills, but don't know about strengthening poison? To avenge shame, you dare to come to your door to take revenge with just three axes. It's so simple.

It's really poisonous. I think his mother is mentally retarded.

The second chapter shocked me. I knew I had traveled through time as soon as I woke up, and I was still shouting that I had traveled through time in front of so many people watching. Could I be any more idiotic?

After reading about a hundred chapters, I feel that it is extremely poisonous. I am not immune to the poison.

Finally I understand why many authors write novels where the protagonist is an orphan. I didn't understand until I read this book. I can't stand it! It's impossible to be so kind to your own mother. It is also said that blood is thicker than water. Then you tell your mother that you have traveled through time and her son is already dead and has a different soul. Do you think he still regards you as his son?

I have been reading for six years, and I thought about writing it myself after working. When I read a book, I mainly want to see the worldview, system, language and so on. This book, no matter what else, has a novel reinforcement system and a unique protagonist's life experience. It's one of the more special ones I've ever seen. I read Bai Laizhang. I would like to chat with the author.

Being able to write so viciously is a skill! 666

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This is the first time I have seen such a poisonous and strange book. The poisonous point is the protagonist's mother. She can write such a poisonous book about her own mother. It is also the first time I have seen such a poisonous book. Is this the plan to kill one's mother? ?

Those who can spend money to watch it are all big guys, really 😰

Even Shennong couldn't resist this poison.

The protagonist has a clear mind, while the time traveler runs away with a bucket without any brain.

This is a very poisonous book. Please read it rationally. There are many books that you can't stand and just leave. I rarely want to criticize this book. I can't criticize this book. The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the author turned the book into a mess.