It's Too Late for You to Say Goodbye

The writing is delicate and the details are described in depth. The logic is clear and the plot is deep. Great book! 👍👍👍

Although this is too boring for me, I will still support it. 😁

After reading two chapters, let me tell you my general feeling! (IMHO) First of all, this is a modern romance novel, and naturally its main line is feelings. Regarding emotional description, I want to say that delicacy is the key, but how to express delicacy? In fact, I didn't see the delicacy in the author's article. I don't know how many words he wanted to write, but no matter how many words he wrote, he still needed a lot of language, actions, environment, appearance, and expression descriptions to express his feelings. When reading the author's novels, there is always a sense of "simplification". The character descriptions are not clear enough. There are too many characters at the beginning. Many people appear in two chapters. I can't remember it. 😓 Too many characters will cause the description of each person to be less vivid and difficult to leave an impression in the reader's mind, which will appear confusing in the subsequent development of the story. Of course, the problem I am talking about is not necessary, it is just that the style of the article is different. If you pay attention to this problem, the article will become eloquent. If it is like the author's, it will naturally give people a fresh feeling 😜 Then there is the issue of writing style. In fact, this is linked to description. The surrounding environment and characterization all need writing support. The author's writing style is fine, but there is still room for improvement! 😜 Then there is the issue of content. I would like to make a small suggestion and the author will absorb it appropriately. In the article, try not to add your own subjective feelings to your views of the characters in the article. In short, no matter how good or bad the character is, do not evaluate it from the author's point of view. Instead, use various characterizations to make the reader feel that this person is good, or that this person is good or bad! Just Jiang Zi! The writing is smooth and natural. Keep up the good work, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง I believe you can do it!

Very well written, awesome! The plot is also good👍

Here I come, great master~ First of all, the writing is good and the plot is also good. The paragraphs are also very good. It is written in the first person and gives a sense of immersion. However, it may be my fault. I always feel that when reading the first two chapters, you want to let us know the relationships of many people, and there will be many names. I remember I was a little dizzy, but this book is quite interesting!

There are three updates today, 🤭🤭🤭

Flashy little luck, growth in real stories, changes in the workplace, emotional twists and turns, and success against the current. I hope you will like it and give me some suggestions. There will be corrections in later content updates. Regardless of whether it is good or bad, leave your footprints and recommendation votes, 😁😁✌️✌️

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This is also my first time reading this kind of subject matter. I feel good about it, but I can't give you any opinions. Keep up the good work!

Dear ♡ⅴ♡ The books will start to be put on the shelves tomorrow, so I won't be able to update in time tomorrow morning. I look forward to everyone's first order. Thank you for your support and suggestions 😚😚

Very well written, keep up the good work, voted, collected, and supported by "Drunken Pillow of the Ming Dynasty"

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The paragraphs of the article are beautiful and pleasing to the eye. If you add a little sweetness and romance to the characters, the article will be even more beautiful.

Although I can't read this kind of thing, it seems that the writing style is still good. I will collect and support it first.

It's a very interesting subject matter, and I met an author who is very good at writing. This kind of subject matter has always had a large number of female readers, and I am no exception. The writing is quite attractive, but all kinds of abuse 😐 pay attention to the typos and punctuation, it looks messy. What is "stroking beauty"😁😁😁

There is no need for great sadness or joy. The whole story is filled with a touch of sadness and warm happiness. There are some bright spots in the middle from time to time. Then there will be no shortage of readers.

I don't have time to watch. I'll give you a monthly pass. Come on 🙂🙂

I caught a treasure, it's big and beautiful