Kowloon Swallowing Pearls

I saw the latest chapter again. It has been very lively recently. There are some comments in the book review area. I feel that it is a bit nonsense. I will express my opinion. I read the book Seventh Brother three times in total. The first time was at the end of June. At that time, there were only about ten chapters. The second time was in early August, when there were seventy-six chapters. This is the third time I have watched it. I can responsibly say that every time I watch it, I read the latest chapter in one go. This is enough to prove that the quality of "Nine Dragons Swallowing the Pearl" is good. There are some comments in the book review section, such as those that are extremely poisonous, those that persuade people to quit, those that were popular ten years ago, those that are out of date, and so on. I don't think they are right. As a newcomer, it is inevitable to make omissions when writing novels. But friends, could you please stop using adjectives? If you really see the problem, you can give suggestions to Brother Qi and give specific examples. Don't just yell there if you can't give an example. Take me for example. I also asked Brother Qi two questions, so I would like to share them with you. The first point is why I think the general listened to Liang's father so much and came to protect Liang Jin. It feels like protection for the sake of protection, which is illogical. The second point is that General Shou is the king of men, and the souls who died in his hands are unwilling to leave and are willing to surrender to him. I think this is a bit problematic. I discovered these two unusual problems. I also spoke frankly to Brother Qi and pointed out the problem. Brother Qi was very easy-going and thanked me very much for pointing out the problem. At the same time, he patiently explained to me that this was a foreshadowing. What I mean by this is that if you really find a problem, you can directly give specific examples. There is no need to use adjectives. What is the persuasion to quit? Brother, I didn't advise you to retreat. Who advised you to retreat? There are indeed typos and some grammatical errors. But on the whole, the plot is weird, very tense and interesting, and at the same time it is relatively down-to-earth, such as "I'll call you brother." Some people said that it would be popular three or four years ago, which means that it won't work now. I don't really agree with this. A quality novel will never go out of style. Journey to the West, a book written hundreds of years ago, still has a large number of fans. The Romance of the Three Kingdoms is still a topic that everyone talks about today. The book review area is for you to ask questions and discuss the plot. It's really not easy to write a book. Do you rack your brains and stay up late coding just to get a few words that make your lungs hurt? Gu Long once said that writing books can express depression in the heart. Brother, if you are like this, I think not only can't you express your depression, but you may become sick from anger. What does the author owe you? What you are doing is definitely wrong. In addition, everyone can only represent their own opinions. Some people criticized Jin Yong's books, let alone Brother Qi, who is a new author. If you think it doesn't look good, it can only represent you. On the contrary, I think this book is very good, and many supporting characters can also leave a deep impression on people, such as the director, Liu Banxian, etc. I won't talk about these more important supporting roles, but I will talk about Liu's father sending two younger brothers to deal with the generals, the language of the two supporting characters, and the S-shaped escape of the two supporting characters after Liu Hanbing drew his gun. The two actors who did not leave their names are both written in a more distinctive way. Not to mention others, such examples abound. So, I suggest that all book friends, if you want to find a problem, please find a specific problem and report it directly to Brother Qi. This is the ethics that a book friend should have. One more thing, don't think that your level is too high and you can give unscrupulous advice. I hope everyone can be more easy-going. If you think you are very powerful, come on, explain to me without using Baidu, what do you mean? This idiom is quite commonly used. This book review, if any words make you feel unhappy, please put yourself in someone else's shoes. Finally, I hope every book lover can gain happiness from the Qidian platform, thank you all.

Book review: When I first read this book, I was attracted by the plot set by the author. The battle between the nine dragons left a deep impression on me. The fighting scenes were described in detail, and the author also started to set up a lot of suspense here. Where did the general's sword go in the end? Has the dragon ball been delivered in the end? Does the sentence that Queen Mother Liang left on the parchment mean that she is not dead, just like Yi Xiaochuan in the original myth, immortal and living until now? What happened 3,000 years ago that caused the aura to disappear? And are there any other secrets hidden in General's mysterious life experience? And the murderous Cassia was obviously lost 3,000 years ago. Why is there still a complete cultivation method 3,000 years later? There are too many suspenses, and the author should slowly come back to them later. After all, this book has just begun, and everything has just begun. In addition, there is something I don't understand, and that is why the general fell in love with Liu Hanbing so easily? Maybe it's because of my lack of experience, but I always feel it's a bit awkward. I hope someone with more knowledge in reading can clear up my confusion. In addition, this book is very rigorous in terms of settings. You will guard the door through time and space and directly come to be reborn 3,000 years later. There is no situation where you understand everything as soon as you travel through time. It takes time to slowly adapt to everything in this world. In addition, because of the skills that General Shou obtained while seizing the dragon's inner elixir, he was destined to be connected with the world of cultivation. In addition, since I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, let me share with you some inferences I got after reading it: (for reference only) 1. The general will collect the four great beasts (the current progress is the white tiger and the red bird) 2. The Empress Dowager Liang should have taken the inner elixir in the end and gained the opportunity to live forever. She lived for more than 3,000 years. During this period, she might have What did Shou do to cause the great changes 3,000 years ago? 3. There should be other secrets hidden in the parchment 4. Liu Hanbing should also enter the world of cultivation in the end 5. General Shou should still see the gatekeeper That's all I can think of for now. I will write a more detailed book review after I take the time to read it. Thank you for watching.

[Book Review Prediction of Kowloon Bead-Swallowing Activities] After reading the update, I feel that although the clown is a bit moody, it seems to be a mask he put on deliberately, just like he does not show his true face to others. From the gang rules he set and the way he acted, it can be seen that his conscience is still intact. This is a person with a story, and now Jiang Shou comes to the door. With Jiang Shou's behavior, the clown is doomed. However, Brother Qi has carefully portrayed the character of the clown and will not let him receive the lunch box easily. I guess the clown will follow Jiang Shou. In this way, the general will have its first foundation in this world, and the clown and Shirley will become his right-hand men. Anyway, the clown and the general will not be hostile.

I predict a plot. According to Brother Qi's original text, he has conquered the white tiger of the west and the red bird of the south. He should also conquer the green dragon of the east and the black basalt of the north. With all four elephants gathered, the blue dragon of the east should be 🐍. After all, 🐍 is similar to a dragon and the black basalt of the north should be the tortoise. According to the introduction, the general will become invincible in the future, so Liu Banxian is bound to enter the world of immortality. According to the name, Liu Hanbing should gain the power of nature - ice. Is the heavenly stone that forges the war general's sword related to the general's life experience? What state did Empress Dowager Liang reach after living for three thousand years? Who is the gatekeeper? Can the True Dragon Compendium turn into a dragon when faced with a storm? Can the general break through the constraints of heaven? What is Empress Dowager Liang's conspiracy? Why does it affect the laws of nature? Want to know? It's all in "Nine Dragons Swallowing the Pearl".

How to say it! As a newcomer, I don't say how good it is, nor how bad it is. The only taboo the author may have committed is arousing the jealousy of a large group of people. Because this book is not very good, but it is recommended and rewarded much more than many people. Maybe if the author opened a small account, signed the contract silently, and wrote silently, he would not make so many people unhappy. What may be a little embarrassing is that there are many conflicts in the plot, but a group of people came and cheered. For example, when describing emotions, the characters just fall apart. The protagonist was supposed to be a mature and steady person, but now he has changed.

I always feel like there is too much emphasis on what happened before the protagonist traveled through time at the beginning. Wouldn't it be better to just introduce it slowly after the time travel? Raising the Queen Mother, slaying a dragon with a sword, and then traveling through time ? ? ? ? It's a pity to write so much just to allow the protagonist to time travel The author might as well introduce a little before rebirth and then start the chapter after time travel When encountering something in the plot, introduce or recall it For example, if you encounter some dangerous monster, the protagonist thinks that I have even killed a dragon. I'm afraid you can't do it? Readers, take a look! Why did the protagonist kill the dragon before he was reborn? Doesn't that show your attraction? After the time travel, the plot will be the main focus and the previous plot will be supplemented. I feel it will be better Of course I will just complain 🤫 I am a street fighter.

Take your time and come on                                                                                                                                                                                . Personally, I think it's okay, maybe it really makes people feel poisonous, but everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens, and there will always be people who like and dislike them.        ， I feel that the author is also a person who likes online articles. He has been reading online articles for ten years. From the trivial articles to the high-quality articles that everyone calls good articles, each one has its own merits. Most people's first works are not particularly ideal. I have just signed a contract for my first work. How can I put it, it is not as good as my expectations. Few people become gods instantly, and few people are born with knowledge. Most authors are constantly improving. Whoever wants to write anything is the collision of their own thinking sparks.                                                                                                                                                                                                                         as                  because there is the   The muse work is written is the work is is is is is possible may be shouted may, perhaps, some authors may shout that the muse is coming and they have a lot of inspiration, and they have a lot of inspiration and are sought after by countless people.

I want to criticize the book: ⭐The author wanted to write a complete story, but the routine is too old (a practice work?) The storyline does not lack a sense of expectation ⭐The relationship between Liu Ningbing (it seems to be called this) and the male protagonist is too blunt. The supporting character's IQ should be at Long Aotian's level. ⭐The author has many original settings, for example, this chapter talks about the dragon's combat power that the readers complained about. There is also the setting of Suzaku (the four mythical beasts seem to be all included in this book). Maybe I read it too fast, and I feel that the white tiger has become the heroine's pet inexplicably ⭐Although the article has a lot of poisonous points, please keep up the good work ⭐The new Journey to the West co-produced by China and the United States will officially start production in the second half of this year and blossom To other readers, Can you not force the generation setting when reading the book? I beg you. Every time I read this chapter and see comments about this kind of generation setting, I feel very unhappy. I see many readers of Honghuangliu then go to Zhutianliu's books to compare the combat power of xxx and xxx. Please respect the author's setting. For example, the golden cudgel of the monkey in Journey to the West is in the starting point. Many books only require golden elixirs, and people with spiritual cultivation can pick it up and use it. Just gone

I hope there will be some updates. After all, I am a newbie and I update every day. There is no hope, 365 days? If you can't finish a book in a year, how can a newcomer achieve results? There's no other meaning.

After reading Chapter 24, it felt a bit too abrupt, without any foreshadowing, and it felt too fast. I had just woken up for a few days in time travel, and I was not familiar with it, so I left behind the person I used to protect to the death! You just arrange a reincarnation for the heroine, and it's still acceptable if she looks the same! The foreshadowing is quite good and she will be protected throughout her life. Nothing can change for him in a few days!

A good book requires spirit. . . .

[Review of Kowloon Activities] The opening of this book is super atmospheric, which makes me feel that it should be a blockbuster full of special effects, which is my favorite fantasy type. But the subsequent plot really exceeded my expectations. After traveling to a thousand years later, when I thought it would become an urban cultivator, it turns out that this is a completely different world. There are monsters and beasts here, and there are various cultivators. Well, this is a fantasy world in itself 😍, and the cute Li Zhiyong will help you pretend to be cool and fly. But I want to say that Liu Banxian is definitely a relative of the author. Since his appearance, he has written more brilliantly than Jiang Shou 🤭, which impressed me more deeply. Next, General Shou, hurry up and use your strength to give full play to the protagonist's halo!

The plot and story are pretty good, but the power is worrisome. The plot is a bit cliche, which made me feel uncomfortable. I'll give it another look. I hope the author can work harder.

A person with the level of general protecting the country forced you to write ***🤓

I just took another look at the character list, emmmm, are all the heroines in books nowadays just for fun? Come out and have a public appearance, and then hide in secret. Anyway, many books follow this routine, and those who cultivate immortality do not care about their age. It is normal not to see each other for tens of millions of years 😅. By the way, congratulations on the launch✌️✌️

Newcomers and new books seek support.

Someone once asserted that I could not write more than two hundred chapters, someone once accused me of capital as king, someone once slandered my book as highly toxic without reading it, someone once reported me... What is wrong with a literature lover who wants to write a book? You can point out any problems with the content of the work. We welcome this, and we will encourage you to correct it if it exists. If you criticize the recommendation of a book or its promotion methods, it will make people think that you must have selfish motives. Do you know how to promote books better than the professional editors at Qidian? In addition, these senior authors are optimistic about newcomers, so what does it have to do with supporting newcomers? Furthermore, if others spend their own money to promote books, what do you do?

There are so many nasty posts... Say a few words for Brother Qi. First, Brother Qi is just a big brother who has a dream of writing online. Everyone has seen his confession letter. To be honest, Brother Qi didn't even think about making money from this, and he didn't care about the money. All he cared about was the story, the readers' evaluation of him, and whether the readers could understand what he wanted to tell. It was that simple. Who didn't have a dream of drawing mountains and rivers with a bamboo pen when they were young? Second, about recommendations. You may think that there are so many great gods recommending it, and there are a group of big guys headed by Brother Aiai who are crazy about silver, and you just think so. Don't think too much, they are friends, and throwing a few silver alliances is like passing a cigarette. Everyone supports it because I think it is not easy for Brother Qi to write a book. He has a dream and is persevering. I must support him a lot. A man in his thirties, under crazy work and huge social pressure, stays up late every day to write a book for his dream. He doesn't care about money and just wants to get your approval and helpful opinions. This is very rare in itself. Third, about the quality of this book. It is true that Brother Qi is a novice, and there are many things that are unreasonable in writing a book. Everyone is excited to see so many great people recommending this book, so their expectations are naturally high. But how many people jump to conclusions without even taking a few glances? I read this book and found a lot of bad points, but the most gratifying thing is that Brother Qi will continue to revise and improve based on everyone's opinions. By the end, the plot has become much smoother. Isn't this a gratifying thing? Let's all be less violent and more supportive. Fourth, about acid. This is really unnecessary... I have always felt that if you don't like reading, you have your own reasons. If you don't like it, just delete it from the bookshelf and say goodbye. Why do you have to step on it? The book Qi Ge has more than 300,000 words on the shelves, and enough space has been left for everyone to identify the quality. If it is really not to your liking, just delete it. If you don't see the quality... This should be the problem of the Chinese teacher. Why are you giving me more than 300,000 words for nothing, and then you have to scold me for doing a bad job after you are done with it... This is really unreasonable. Fifth, I hope everyone will give Brother Qi some room to grow. Brother Qi is really writing with all his heart. If you don't like it, just don't say anything. And I believe you have grabbed the treasure chest of Brother Ai Ai, right? It's okay to take advantage of others. If you don't love them, don't hurt them. Finally, I support Brother Qi in writing this story. There may be some dissatisfaction in the middle, but everything will get better. I hope this story will become more and more exciting. The above is respectful to all book friends.

I saw some funny comments and couldn't help but post. Those people who help some books openly and honestly collect data to get recommendations are the right way. Brother Qi's side can't move any data at all, and those who have recommendations are evil heretics. I'll give you the moral high ground. Please continue.

Kowloon Tunzhu Book Review: Let Go and Love Unknowingly, tears fell from my eyes. I seemed to see you, Liang Jin, standing alone at the top of the city, with tears on your face. You smiled at me while crying. This image was like a knife. The scene switched, and in front of me was Liu Hanbing wrapped in gauze. I knelt in front of the bed and prayed to the sky to give me the courage to face everything. When I first met Liu Hanbing on a desert island, he was calm and calm when he reminded me that he was about to go to war with the enemy; Liu Hanbing was trembling and arrogant after killing the Taoist priest; Liu Hanbing chose clothes for himself and had a gentle face; Liu Hanbing drank with me and had a happy face... But I inadvertently let you turn around and walk away. It no longer matters that I missed you. Thousands of miles of yellow sand, thousands of horses galloping. A famous general of a generation, surrounded by darkness. Uncle Gui once said that the Xia Dynasty Empire had been destroyed and the Empress Dowager Liang had died of illness. His heart was very painful and he was so anxious that he vomited blood, but he did not shed any tears. Why am I crying now, feeling heartbroken, and even vomiting a mouthful of blood in a hurry? Why do you feel heartache because Liu Hanbing was injured? Why am I so angry when someone hurts Liu Hanbing? This feeling only appeared when Liang Jin was injured. Could it be that I... "Have you ever shed tears? No. That's because your heart has not been hurt yet. People who are heartbroken will shed tears!" Han Bing, I will accompany you after I kill them. No matter if I fall in love with you or not, I will never let go of those who hurt you! I can see you happy until you grow old, that's good... Jiang Shou, love can't be obtained only if you want it. There are several opportunities to find it in your life. How much hard work is worth showing off. Let go and love, come on!

[Kowloon Pearl Swallowing Activity: A Mind-expanding Event] One afternoon, a group of bodyguards who had nothing to do gathered together and chatted about the general. Bodyguard A: "Miss Liu's boyfriend is the general, he is so powerful! He killed the people Zhang Zhiyuan invited in minutes." Bodyguard B: "I thought I said he was a freeloader! I didn't expect..." Bodyguard B had a look of fear on his face. What is the background of this person? Isn't that murderous spirit too terrifying?"​ Bodyguard D: "I thought about it again, I shouldn't have offended him, but it's okay, my head is still stable..." After saying that, he touched his waist again, it's okay, he's still there... When everyone heard this, they couldn't help but think of Zhang Zhiyuan's head being chopped off by General Shou and the waists of Turkey and the others. Thinking about the scene at that time, their stomachs turned. It took a while for Bodyguard B to recover: "Hey? Why are you two so quiet today and not talking?" The two bodyguards who had been arranged by Liu Dajun to test the general looked at each other silently and said in unison: "Thank you so much, Miss! It's good to be alive!" Then left the bodyguards who were all confused and left.​

[Plot speculation of Kowloon Swallowing the Pearl] The general's murderous aura has improved, and he has some security when going to Yue this time, but the old man with a hunchback is definitely not something that the current general can defeat. Look at Xiaohong, how pitiful she is! So where did Xiaohong go? I think I might have gone back to Maoshan, or I would have gone to a place with heavenly spirits and earthly treasures to recuperate, or I would have gone to find helpers! The kid who was bullied went home to find his parents🌚 When Jiang Shou was in the country of Yue, he should meet another big shot in the cultivation world to save him from danger, and then Tang Zhiyan would jump into the arms of the general after being rescued😏😏😏 The country of Yue can be said to be Vietnam, right? The national treasure of Vietnam is the spotted turtle, so will the general harvest a black turtle here? ​According to the current development of the show, Da Qiao should be enamored with the general, and maybe Xiao Qiao too🌚​ The Blood Wolf Killer Organization should be seriously injured this time, but it is impossible to be destroyed. After all, there is a hunchbacked old man. There is also the light yellow yellow leather scroll. Collect them all to summon the dragon. It should be related to Shenglong Cave. Liu Hanbing will also enter the cultivation world in the future. As for her ability, it may be ice control or something like that, oh! By the way, the general may ask Liu Hanbing to practice the True Dragon Compendium, but it will be impossible to complete it! The above are all speculations about the drama, any similarities are purely coincidental🌚🌚🌚 ​

The captain of the Eagle 🦅 brigade came to support

It's something like this for authors. It's not that unusual. It's not too easy to register for a writer's assistant. It only takes a few minutes. You might register today and forget about it tomorrow. I just registered three using QQ. It's quite boring. I haven't read a novel for a long time. I occasionally come in to take a look. To be honest, I can't afford to buy all the novels I read. Twenty thousand words cost one yuan, and two million words cost one hundred yuan. Now I can read books at a glance. Two million words seems too much. How long can I read it? What do I mean? Having relationships, friendships, and friends is also a person's ability. Envy can be too much, and there is no such thing as fairness or unfairness. Old readers who were so rampant in cheating on tickets a long time ago should know this. What's more, this is not a brush or anything. There is no need to argue. I only spend four to five hundred on food a month. It is unrealistic to spend money to read books. It is good to have dreams. The question is how much money are dreams worth? Life is the most important thing. Those who like it can stay and contribute, those who don't like it can just leave. It's unnecessary and will make everyone unhappy.

The master is wandering, the clown is in the palace

The author writing this book is equivalent to Wang Sicong playing e-sports. You understand what I mean (づ ●─● )づ

Jiulong Tunzhu Book Review: The White Tiger's Philosophical Thoughts I am a white tiger who has lived for five hundred years and gradually developed spiritual wisdom. Does a tiger have any other great mission besides hunting? I think that apart from me, very few people would think about this issue. When I was a child, I hunted with my mother. But one day, my mother never came back when I became an adult. I don't know whether my mother left me on her own or was killed by humans, but I hate humans. They always come to disturb my happy life. I sleep during the day and go out to hunt small animals on the island at night. The occasional human beings appear and all that disturb me end up in my stomach. Just like this day after day, year after year, my life was suddenly broken one day by an unkempt human being. That day, I woke up from sleep and found someone appearing in my territory. I was going to show up quietly and eat him. But when I suddenly rushed in front of him, I found that this savage was actually a man whose whole body suddenly exuded cold murderous aura. How many lives were condensed into this bloody murderous aura? He ate more than all the people and animals I have eaten. Damn, I can't afford to offend this guy. Run! When I ran far enough and saw that he didn't catch up, I was relieved, but when I turned around, he appeared in front of me. I wanted to make a move to throw him down and take the opportunity to escape, but this guy knocked me out with one punch. When I woke up, I found that I was already in the human camp. Huh? He didn't kill me? And why are there so many auras around him? I liked it so much. I didn't leave. I ignored the corpses of wild beasts and squatted beside him. He didn't drive me away either. This is so comfortable. The spiritual energy enters my body and I feel that my strength has increased. I am so happy. No one can try to separate us now! Later, a group of people came to attack the camp. The savage immortal killed them all instantly. One Taoist priest even showed a greedy look towards me. He didn't even look at himself My own virtue! Later, the Immortal told a beautiful woman to let her decide whether to take me with her. I quickly rolled around and acted cute, and finally the beautiful woman agreed to take me. Although the cost was to make me listen to her, as long as I was by the Immortal's side, everything was easy to discuss. I was going to live a new life! Go! Go! Go!

It's already very good for newcomers to write like this, and they should always be given time to improve their abilities. 😁😁

Have online novels started to be hyped these days? Online novels rely on creativity, writing, information and persistence! After reading ten chapters of various embarrassments, the protagonist, an ordinary person, leaps high into the water? Left foot on right foot? Marching in the desert with helmets and armor, no guide, no camels and no horses to provide animal power? Is this a general who is good at conquering and fighting? Is he a general who doesn't have any common sense and can't surf Baidu? There is also the old nun, the early boss. She used a weapon against the protagonist earlier, but the protagonist kicked her when she was stabbing her in the back. Then she used a weapon again when facing the protagonist's subordinates. All kinds of weird plots will not be described one by one. It doesn't matter if there are one or two awkward spots, but it doesn't matter if Zhang Zhang makes some elementary mistakes. This is because you are not careful.

It's like the novels written more than ten years ago, just like you are watching Dou Po and Douluo now, and they are as embarrassing as the ones you read now.