NBA Sharks Return

The first is the choice of the protagonist... He was undrafted in 2011 and had no problem joining the Lakers, but there is a problem with the protagonist's time travel... He accepted it too easily and didn't say why he joined the Lakers? The feeling of why you must play center... It is best to add some of the protagonist's obsession with the center position (for example, the idol is the Shark, the remaining will of the body, etc., And he wants to make the Lakers regain their glory and so on) The other is the details. When the protagonist adds points, add as much as this and that, but how can he finally know which is? How much, it should be interacting with the system (I think) The last thing is the contract issue... You beat Bynum, brother, that is an All-Star... How old is the protagonist... I only gave him a one-year contract... Isn't that funny... It's still only 800,000. Why should the protagonist accept it? I don't understand... Shouldn't he be looking for someone to win the championship and open the system? Shouldn't he go to the Spurs or the Heat (you don't have any description of his special feelings for Corvo and the Lakers, do you)? There is no way you can play with this kind of strength... The Lakers have interview opportunities and you can't make excuses... The author is now making the protagonist objective, calm and pursuing, but also impulsive and wise (mentally retarded)... The last one is a format issue, add a few chapters... These are my own opinions. Author, if you think it makes sense, then reconsider your outline. If you think I said you have a problem, forget it, come on... I still like to read novels with insider stories... Come on...

One is that I don't agree with it. It's not about the size of his contract, but about his years... The protagonist almost beat Bynum, a quasi-All-Star (also averaged a double-double in 11 years), the template is Shaq, top explosive power and footsteps (meaning top physical fitness and top technical potential) The upper limit It's a big dream plus Shaq, the lower limit is a weakened version of Sparks plus a weakened version of Yao Ming... All-stars are almost no problem, backed by the Chinese market This is almost a great start... Kupchak may only let him sign for one year... Wait for him to play and then ask for a high salary... So the worst is a 2+1, and a high probability of 3+1