Speedsters from the Marvel Universe

Can you correct the wrong sentences and typos? I can't quite understand your book.

The Speed ​​Force is not a gift to anyone, it is a curse. No speedster has a good end, and the characteristic of traveling through time at will determines that every speedster is destined to experience sorrow and pain all the time. There may be beauty, but it is difficult to erase the tragedy. Xiao Shen has been experiencing the death of his mother, repeating it every moment.

Who should you offend? Don't offend the Speed ​​Force. Not to mention traveling through time, just put the (ordinary) people who offend the Speed ​​Force in the middle of the battlefield. They won't die once or every time? Playing with the God of Speed, I made a series called Death. It's scary to think about it.

To be honest, Barry, who is not compatible with Marvel's Speed ​​Force, has been in Marvel and immediately slowed down, even Quicksilver can't compare.

Finally found a speedster novel, it's not easy 😭

I feel that the author writes too quickly, barely describing details, and just passing through most of the plot. In a sense, it fits the theme quite well. Also, why should we learn the magic of Kama Taj? The essence of that thing is to communicate with the gods, which is not an easy task. The price to pay for borrowing magic power from others is even more tragic. In the comics, the monks who help Doctor Strange bear the cost of casting spells are not human, and he himself cannot eat normal food.

This is a running account! There is no main line, just write whatever comes to mind.

Chapter 11 is poisonous. General Ross wants to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist doesn't care and asks why he killed you. Be convinced.

To be honest, it feels like a running account

I came here just because of Savitar's Armor, but it turned out that it was not good and the protagonist said it was ugly... If you had told me earlier, if you wanted to change the shape of Savitar's Armor, I would have left early 😅

Convinced, everyone who travels to Marvel has to save Tony and deliver it to him. . . Without him, we can't live. Without him, we will starve to death, right? .

Finally waiting for you, the one who wrote about the Marvel Cinematic Universe has not included the mutant package. By the way, let's learn about the Inhumans~

After reading two chapters, I was successfully persuaded to quit. It was so shameless that the original plot was taken away. The two chapters were full of how awesome the protagonist is and can do whatever he wants and directly reveal the plot to other characters. According to the Marvel setting, the protagonist in Chapter 2 will not be able to survive. Are the Earth Defender and the Supreme Mage just kidding? This kind of random time-traveler is destined to die when Gu Yi discovers it, regardless of whether you are from Earth or not.

If you write about Marvel adding mutants, please remember not to follow the plot of the movie. Please refer to the plot of Marvel comics for everything.

To be honest, it's too confusing and the descriptions are too crude.

What I hate the most is that the author adds all kinds of settings to the protagonist. I want to make the protagonist very strong, but I am afraid that my writing skills are too bad and I can't hold it anymore, so I weaken it in various ways, which is also drunk.

I think it's best not to move the timeline. Uncle Gu is a man with precious stones, and the cover composed of three base stations in London, New York, and Hong Kong surrounds the earth without any blind spots. If you dare to touch the timeline, he may destroy you in minutes. In terms of strength, Uncle Gu is on the same level as Fat Leilei's father. What do you think?

No main plot, no idea, invincible, boring

Seriously. Has the author of the article checked it? Lots of typos. And sick sentences. It looks uncomfortable.

Why no Spider-Man? 😥

I don't have any objections to this novel, but why is it that the cover of your speedster is not the Flash but Colonel Mustang... (No harm intended)

I was speechless after reading the first chapter. If you kill Barry, do you believe you won't survive the next day? The Speed ​​Force is only possible with Barry. If you kill Barry Allen, will the Speed ​​Force be useless? By the way, how did you get the speed of the Flash? Do you think you are the Reverse Flash from the future? And the Speed ​​Force is shameless? The consequences of stealing the Speed ​​Force are generally "awesome"

It's hard to find good Marvel books. I almost vomited just reading this little plot. The only two books that are interesting are Deathstroke and Transformers.

Poor grades are not without reason

It's so noob, I really can't stand it

The creativity is good, my eyes light up, I really want to read it, but after entering, can you write more journals, can you be more idiotic, I can't stand it anymore, do it.

I think I should write a horror novel called "Cat, Feline, Urban Legend". Feline Cat was infected by a terrible virus and turned into a terrible monster. In order to eat lasagna, he destroyed the whole world. This happened in an infinite multiverse. Please look forward to this horror urban novel. Note: If you have heart disease, high blood pressure, trypophobia, etc., Please do not read the novel. The author will not be responsible for the novel. If this happens, read this novel at your own risk and bear the consequences. (Under 18 years of age, minors are prohibited from reading novels)

The evaluation is not very good, sometimes I am not afraid of anything, sometimes I am afraid of everything, sometimes I am superior, sometimes I am attacked and I don't do anything to the other person, sometimes I scold Barry, sometimes I am "Barry" myself I can't say that the author has not read these two comics, I can only say, don't be the author.

Are you friends with Barry? What the hell? Dead loser