Ares of the Marvel Universe

I just finished reading it. The author's writing is pretty good, but it is about the joint world view of Marvel and DC. So why is the title "Marvel" instead of "American Comics"? When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was about the protagonist traveling to Marvel to replace the local god Ares. After reading the content, I realized that it was a joint world view. I don't know how the author would deal with DC and Marvel's problem of repeated characters but different settings in the gods, but it seems that Marvel's Greek gods have been cut out, right? And I didn't pay much attention to whether the author was writing a combination of DC Marvel's movie world view or a comic book. If it was a movie, then Gao Tianzun, the Grandmaster, would have one less champion, and the golden man's head on the tower in the movie would be one less. I don't know what to make of it. Who would replace him would be more troublesome if he wrote comics. After all, Ares in the comics is still very strong. He defeated Thor without taking any artifacts. If Thor, who inherited the power of Odin and held Thor's hammer, was forcibly deleted, it would be a big plot hole in the comics.

Let me talk about my opinions and suggestions on niche fan works like Marvel (don't criticize if you don't like them) 1. Protagonist character design: Many Marvel works often have a common problem. The protagonist is quite capable in setting up the protagonist, but in fact the use of the ability is very weak. He only uses the protagonist's certain ability settings to attract people. Lottery system Kamen Rider Ultraman Monster dnd template jojo avatar Jackie Chan's Adventures of Twelve Talismans, the protagonist's character is okay, but there is no need to deliberately emphasize that the protagonist is a straight man every time. I hope the author can gradually improve the protagonist's ability setting, use and personality in subsequent chapters. 2. Other character designs and behaviors: The indigenous Marvel characters in many works often behave in ways that are inconsistent with their own settings. They fall in love with the protagonist inexplicably, become dark inexplicably, and some characters are even written for blackness. But looking at the current chapters alone, the author has done a good job in this regard. Some of the descriptions of Diana adapting to modern society are OK. I hope that the subsequent characters can be written with the original taste, which is very good. After all, there are very few who can magically change the original characters and write brilliantly. 3. The layout is too big, but the writing power is not enough. Many works are often a hodgepodge. I read the author's introduction. Is it just about the Marvel Cinematic Universe? This is a good direction. Many books often add plots of X-Men, Inhumans, major comic events, and some characters and organizational forces. However, lack of writing power often leads to problems such as the collapse of combat power, conflicts with the original movie universe, and other issues. Originally, American comic works are not very rigorous in setting combat power. If they do this again, they will definitely collapse. If the author is confident in his writing power, he can add appropriate new characters that have not appeared in the movie. My personal suggestion is that the more unpopular characters from other countries are related to the plot of the movie, the harder it will be to bring them back, such as China's The Heroes and Japan's Kagero. 4. The entry point and knowledge of the plot and butterfly effect. Many Marvel works have the same time point in time travel. They are often the same, saving Iron Man, then catching up with Tony, and then kneeling down to S. H. I. E. L. D., And then changing a lot of plots, but the plot of the movie remains the same. Judging from the background and age of the protagonist, I think the author wants to write something new. I hope that the subsequent plots can be exciting and add more of your own ideas, rather than just a running account. Finally, writing is not easy, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Thank you for your response. Regarding the content and updates, I will reply here: The current first volume is the origin story, which is a prequel to the full text. It has a total of 90,000 words, mainly the story of Wonder Woman, which has been written. In terms of updates, there are 3,000+ chapters per day. The current archive is enough to update until the end of this month, and the progress is stable at 3,000+ per day. However, it may be rewritten due to dissatisfaction with a certain paragraph, so I dare not post more for fear that the archives are not enough. Meeting is fate. Currently Anjing is struggling hard in the text volume. If you read this book by chance, you might as well leave a recommendation and collect it. If you don't have a recommendation ticket, you can leave a comment to give me some motivation to continue. Oh, by the way, there is also free investment. What if more people invest and sign the contract? Thank you very much.

I guess the follow-up development is that Diana and the protagonist finally fight against Ares, and the protagonist sacrifices himself. Diana, who has been in love for a long time, awakens her divine power due to the anger of the protagonist. The bracelet mark on the protagonist absorbs the defeated divine power of Ares, and triggers the mechanism of the bracelet mark to be transmitted to the Marvel Universe. At the same time, because of Ares' power, she survived the disaster and gained part of Ares' power?

So when will the new book be released?

Come on! I hope Marvel appears!

For an annual salary of 60,000 US dollars, he went to work for Snake and Shield to fight life and death. . .

To be honest, it is better to concentrate on writing dog food and describe the heroine well, which will also attract fans.

Author, you are not writing a stand-alone game!!! Don't enter the palace if anyone sees you!!

In fact, the author's writing is okay, and it is very comfortable to read. In fact, if you stick to it, you should be able to 🔥, but the author, you are a eunuch 😳