Ares from the Marvel Universe

In fact, the author's writing is okay, and it is very comfortable to read. In fact, if you stick to it, you should be able to 🔥, but the author, you are a eunuch 😳

I just finished reading it. The author's writing is pretty good, but it is about the joint world view of Marvel and DC. So why is the title "Marvel" instead of "American Comics"? When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was about the protagonist traveling to Marvel to replace the local god Ares. After reading the content, I realized that it was a joint world view. I don't know how the author would deal with DC and Marvel's problem of repeated characters but different settings in the gods, but it seems that Marvel's Greek gods have been cut out, right? And I didn't pay much attention to whether the author was writing a combination of DC Marvel's movie world view or a comic book. If it was a movie, then Gao Tianzun, the Grandmaster, would have one less champion, and the golden man's head on the tower in the movie would be one less. I don't know what to make of it. Who would replace him would be more troublesome if he wrote comics. After all, Ares in the comics is still very strong. He defeated Thor without taking any artifacts. If Thor, who inherited the power of Odin and held Thor's hammer, was forcibly deleted, it would be a big plot hole in the comics.

Let me talk about my opinions and suggestions on niche fan works like Marvel (don't criticize if you don't like them) 1. Protagonist character design: Many Marvel works often have a common problem. The protagonist is quite capable in setting up the protagonist, but in fact the use of the ability is very weak. He only uses the protagonist's certain ability settings to attract people. Lottery system Kamen Rider Ultraman Monster dnd template jojo avatar Jackie Chan's Adventures of Twelve Talismans, the protagonist's character is okay, but there is no need to deliberately emphasize that the protagonist is a straight man every time. I hope the author can gradually improve the protagonist's ability setting, use and personality in subsequent chapters. 2. Other character designs and behaviors: The indigenous Marvel characters in many works often behave in ways that are inconsistent with their own settings. They fall in love with the protagonist inexplicably, become dark inexplicably, and some characters are even written for blackness. But looking at the current chapters alone, the author has done a good job in this regard. Some of the descriptions of Diana adapting to modern society are OK. I hope that the subsequent characters can be written with the original taste, which is very good. After all, there are very few who can magically change the original characters and write brilliantly. 3. The layout is too big, but the writing power is not enough. Many works are often a hodgepodge. I read the author's introduction. Is it just about the Marvel Cinematic Universe? This is a good direction. Many books often add plots of X-Men, Inhumans, major comic events, and some characters and organizational forces. However, lack of writing power often leads to problems such as the collapse of combat power, conflicts with the original movie universe, and other issues. Originally, American comic works are not very rigorous in setting combat power. If they do this again, they will definitely collapse. If the author is confident in his writing power, he can add appropriate new characters that have not appeared in the movie. My personal suggestion is that the more unpopular characters from other countries are related to the plot of the movie, the harder it will be to bring them back, such as China's The Heroes and Japan's Kagero. 4. The entry point and knowledge of the plot and butterfly effect. Many Marvel works have the same time point in time travel. They are often the same, saving Iron Man, then catching up with Tony, and then kneeling down to S. H. I. E. L. D., And then changing a lot of plots, but the plot of the movie remains the same. Judging from the background and age of the protagonist, I think the author wants to write something new. I hope that the subsequent plots can be exciting and add more of your own ideas, rather than just a running account. Finally, writing is not easy, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Thank you for your response. Regarding the content and updates, I will reply here: The current first volume is the origin story, which is a prequel to the full text. It has a total of 90,000 words, mainly the story of Wonder Woman, which has been written. In terms of updates, there are 3,000+ chapters per day. The current archive is enough to update until the end of this month, and the progress is stable at 3,000+ per day. However, it may be rewritten due to dissatisfaction with a certain paragraph, so I dare not post more for fear that the archives are not enough. Meeting is fate. Currently Anjing is struggling hard in the text volume. If you read this book by chance, you might as well leave a recommendation and collect it. If you don't have a recommendation ticket, you can leave a comment to give me some motivation to continue. Oh, by the way, there is also free investment. What if more people invest and sign the contract? Thank you very much.

I guess the follow-up development is that Diana and the protagonist finally fight against Ares, and the protagonist sacrifices himself. Diana, who has been in love for a long time, awakens her divine power due to the anger of the protagonist. The bracelet mark on the protagonist absorbs the defeated divine power of Ares, and triggers the mechanism of the bracelet mark to be transmitted to the Marvel Universe. At the same time, because of Ares' power, she survived the disaster and gained part of Ares' power?

So when will the new book be released?

Come on! I hope Marvel appears!

For an annual salary of 60,000 US dollars, he went to work for Snake and Shield to fight life and death. . .

Author, you are not writing a stand-alone game! ! ! Don't enter the palace if anyone sees you! !

To be honest, it is better to concentrate on writing dog food and describe the heroine well, which will also attract fans.

Also Ares, trash. Ability is not your own.

Ranked fourth on the newcomer list, come on 💪

In fact, the author's writing is okay, and it is very comfortable to read. In fact, if you stick to it, you should be able to 🔥, but the author, you are a eunuch 😳

He was hit and killed by a car while crossing again to save someone. It's really annoying to see this now. If the author really doesn't know how to write, then he shouldn't write about how to travel through time. Like other novels, it is inexplicably time-traveling.

Don't use DC anymore. Some of the heroes from Marvel and DC are the same.

Is this... Going to be a SHIELD agent?

I like your novels very much. Keep it up. It's rare to see one that's right for your appetite. Many of your previous novels are too good.😭

I came to read it again. Where is your new book?

It is still recommended to spend more time with your wife, at least one chapter a day, the people around you who love the most are the most cherished, so just take your time with the book! Come on.

Mo Chen came to visit with "For Whom the Colorful Clothes Dance", please collect it and share it with me. Thank you, boss. Come on.

Isn't it Ares? Why is it the dead male protagonist?

Can the author write DC plots? And 20% to 30% is Marvel, and the rest is DC plot, which can include the Arrowverse.

Some books disappear as soon as you keep them... Disappointed... Farewell

The protagonist is just a bitch, nothing to show for it.

The last time I posted a long comment, it was inexplicably swallowed. When it comes to a single chapter. Then reply again this time.         ，，， That book has now entered the palace. It's not a curse on the author. People who write fan fiction can't care about the early data, because many comic fans and movie fans will come in and take a look if they don't have anything similar to watch during this period.         ，（），， Secondly, fan fiction must find the right readers. At present, most Marvel fans are probably fans of movies. TV series and comics are in the minority. Although these few will say that they have long wanted to read the plots of comics and TV series, but pay attention. When it finally hits the shelves, the biggest paying audience will still be movie fans. Therefore, the plot tends to find the right audience. Finally, let's return to the story. The story is the experience of the characters written by the author, so you should pay attention to the character's personality. The protagonist's personality can be the reflection of the author's own heart, but the supporting characters must not be, especially in fan fiction. Most supporting characters in fan fiction readers have impressions. The source of this part of the impression is that you are not too divorced from the original work you are attached to, otherwise it can easily become a poisonous point. Finally, I wish the author an early success in signing the contract and getting it on the shelves soon, come on

This book has done really well. As a street kid, I am a little envious of the author. I also hope that the author can persevere! ! ! ! However, there is no need for a preface at the beginning of this book. It is completely unnecessary and a bit redundant.           ，，，， If you have enough time, just revise it (personal opinion, for reference only.) By the way, I recommend my own book. During the Chinese Valentine's Day, singles should study hard. The author will work hard to update it, haha

Can we add another Shazam character?

Why do everyone like to speak in tongues? Many authors write in dialects. Is orthodox Mandarin so difficult? If it is okay to add dialects to create a person with personality, but is it too much for everyone to speak dialects? Many dialects are not well understood, but those who do not know them are confused. It is impossible for all China to learn dialects, right?

Can some DC abilities be added to Marvel's native characters, such as Shazam, Blue Beetle, Speedster, and Shockwave? It can also allow DC characters to accidentally travel across time to do things or help, just like the Arrowverse of DC American TV series. After all, Supergirl, The Flash and Green Arrow are not in the same universe. Cisco has the ability to travel across the universe, and he can also write a major event such as Crisis on Infinite Earths.

Two worlds that were already very chaotic, and then they had to be mixed together, and it became even more chaotic! As a fan, soul travel is barely acceptable, but why does Mao want to be a foreigner? He found many American comic fans and became a foreigner. No matter how good the writing is, it will be very awkward to read and have no sense of substitution! Hmm~ I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and now I prefer fan fiction~