Salted Fish Turns Over: the Lady Is Mighty

The front is fine, but what are you doing behind? 1. The male protagonist appears twice and is useless. 2. Dafang's morals have been collapsing. 3. There was a theft, but grandma didn't immediately separate the family. 4. There is no explanation why the brain is getting clearer and clearer. Is it the water in space?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing chapter 500, and I can't stand it even if it's limited to free!

The author describes the heroine very well when she is still a fool. She is a very simple and natural fool. The result suddenly became normal. It was really sudden, and there was no explanation why. In that chapter, he suddenly started talking eloquently. Later, the character design fell apart, sometimes she was stupid and sometimes she was normal. If she needed to be shown to be stupid, she would be stupid, and if she needed to be shown to be smart, she would be smart. The villain in it is the same, jumping left and right, sometimes good and sometimes bad, sometimes like and sometimes hate the heroine. The same goes for the male protagonist. When we first met, he even wanted to take a boar leg from the wild boar that the female protagonist played. When he saw the female protagonist sharing money with his friends, he felt that it was better to give it to me. He looked like he really wanted money, but later he suddenly became a normal and well-educated scholar. In general, it is a problem. It is impossible to present the trend of character changes and the diversity of characters in a smooth and reasonable way. Changes need to be logical, the reasons for the changes need to be clearly explained, and there needs to be a transition period. There are dusk and dawn during the day and night, instead of turning on and off the lights, one time I am good to you, another time I hate you - this seems not normal. On a final note, I really like the characterization of the heroine during her fool period. I have seen the most natural fool I have ever written (ಡωಡ)

The book looks good at the beginning, but the writing in "The Best" is a bit ink-stained. It's really annoying when Mo writes endlessly for "The Best". It's really annoying to see Chapter 482 of "The Best" is still there.

I want to say that the relationship between the characters is so confusing. Didn't Liang Fenghua say that he likes his sister Xiaoju at the beginning, but later he turned to like his sister Xiaotao and Li Dahua? She is so busy! One moment I go to work as a maid, and the next I have to learn to be a good wife and mother at home.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of my second read of this book, I talk a lot. If it wasn't for the event-limited exemption, I would have given up long ago. In the recent book shortage, this book was recommended by the daily guide. After reading dozens of pictures, I found that I had read it during the limited-time free period. So I can't help but write a long review. The writing is average. I guess the author doesn't have an outline and just writes wherever he thinks. Moreover, the author has a bad memory and can't remember the plot he wrote, which makes the plot slightly confusing.                                         For example, when the family was separated, they talked about repairing the house, but after more than 400 chapters, they still haven't moved, but instead said that they would consider repairing the house.        ，，， And many of the plots are unnecessary, just to make up the word count, and the plot is not compact. For example, after the male protagonist Gu Huaizhong returned to the village, Gu's mother's sister-in-law came to Gu's house with her daughter. She knew that she wanted to seduce the male protagonist, and the male protagonist also knew it, but she kept her cousin. After Xiaohua came to see her cousin, the male protagonist sent her cousin back. It felt like it was written entirely to make Xiaohua jealous after seeing her cousin. The plot transition was unnatural and very stiff. Throughout this article, some characters' personalities have collapsed, and they change at will, without any foreshadowing. Then the author will find a bunch of reasons to describe why the character changed drastically. For example, Gu's mother obviously hates Xiaohua, but somehow she doesn't reject Xiaohua as her daughter-in-law. Of course, the author later uses a lot of words to describe Gu's mother's reasons for accepting Xiaohua. Although Gu's mother doesn't reject Xiaohua, which is a good thing and it's fun to watch, but it's just very inexplicable.       ，，，，，， Some things are written in an anticlimactic way. The beginning is very good, but the rest of the story goes on and on, so it is not groundless that I said the author has a bad memory. This is also the disadvantage of writing an article without an outline.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   meant that the character was forcibly reduced to intelligence. Xiaohua was stupid before, but suddenly she became better, and no one suspected it. The eldest uncle had obviously suspected that something had taken hold of her, but the others accepted the fact that Xiaohua had become better without any sense of violation. Don't call it foreshadowing. If a silly child who can only speak a few words can suddenly speak in a long speech, it can also be called foreshadowing. Then, a novel in which the heroine is too beautiful for him will not be called an eunuch, but will be called a completion.

I feel like the author forgot about the plot as he was writing it. He was building a house not long after the family was divided, but forgot about it. After more than 400 chapters, he mentioned that he wanted to build a house and the author just made up the words and didn't care!

I want to ask, is the best sister-in-law still jumping around after 100 chapters? ? I'm almost sick and vomiting. I'm almost 100 chapters into it and I'm so annoyed that I haven't been educated yet and the best stuff comes and goes every day. I really don't want to continue watching this shit that's never been resolved. Do you think it's better to watch it every other day and get stuck? 😰😰

The heroine 155 weighs 78 pounds. Are you serious? He was so thin that only the bones and skin were left, right?

Oh my god, the first few dozen chapters were okay, but the beginning of the chapter was really long-winded to death, with constant repetition and ink stains. I seriously suspect that the author was just trying to make up the word count.

I don't know if the author is an adult or not, but it feels like a child playing house. The heroine can do whatever she wants and it's effortless and incredibly smoothunbelievable

I can't stand it anymore, I regret spending money to watch it, it's just a water story

It seems a bit unreliable. It stands to reason that the heroine catches the fish herself, and it is her business to eat as much as she wants. The sister-in-law and her family are not satisfied? ? ? If it weren't for the heroine, they wouldn't be able to eat so much fish. Also, isn't this village too friendly? If anyone in the village wants fish or other things, they can just ask for it with nothing. Instead of buying or exchanging it for something else?

I'm so convinced~ The selfish and top-notch heroine like my cousin actually became her younger brother? ? ? I can't understand what the author thinks. . .

Here is a homestead and a village chief, but the money spent is silver and copper coins. Those who take the exam are called scholars, and the county magistrate is called a magistrate. It seems to be a parallel world, but it is a little messy and the layout is a little small, all in one village.

I really feel that the characters of the big houses written by the author have been falling apart. How can a person change at will? Xiao Cui, who was so disgusting in the front, suddenly became better. Xiao Fang, who had no sense of existence and seemed fine, suddenly became vicious. The big brother of the big house also learned to change his face?

The heroine looks powerful on the surface, but is actually a holy mother. Aunts and cousins ​​are struggling because the heroine has raised their hearts. I really can't stand it anymore

It was okay at first. I thought I didn't have to read the best anymore. Who knew that I wouldn't be able to watch it anymore? The more I wrote, the better it became.

Chapter 65 says that Mrs. Mo loves to be clean and no one washes her clothes after she returns to her parents' home. How do I remember that Mrs. Mo was punished by her mother-in-law, Ma, not to eat dinner until she finished washing her clothes because she didn't like to be clean, tidy up housework, or wash clothes? Mrs. Mo is the one who holds the idea of ​​letting her son marry a daughter-in-law and let her take care of the housework... Am I cheating on the book? Or did the author remember it wrong...?