Picked up a Ysera

Oh my god, I've read more than seventy chapters. I don't know what the author wants to say. I don't know what I read. It feels like a running account.

Already collected and invested, author, come on, go for it!

After reading the first dozens of chapters, it feels like a novel setting collection and an original setting collection by the author. It is good for the author to write down his ideas so that readers can easily understand them, but it is better to let the interaction between the characters in the novel drive it rather than write it in the form of narration. It's hard to feel immersed in it, and it looks bland and tasteless.

An incomprehensible book with a plot that has no twists and turns. As plain as water.

How do you think the setting is more than the story?

Various novels, anime, film and television worlds that everyone thinks are more meaningful to enhance the protagonist's understanding of matter, energy, and information can be mentioned here Similar to how to do it in which world, what knowledge and experience (non-physical loot) can be obtained like this Give (ju) example (tou): the protagonist learns unique transfiguration and prophecy in the world of Harry Potter, and is a part-time professor. It feels like the savior classmate is playing house and playing tricks on him. Dumbledore rolled his eyes, picked up Emma and sprinted for a kilometer Adoption criteria: interesting>works familiar to the author>reasonable and convincing The adopted opinion will be specially written by the author to write a teleportation world Learning comes first, and there will be a plot of crazy teleportation and various troubles later to be linked with other authors' books (pypy). If this book can survive to that stage of traffic...

How to say it! In my opinion, your writing is very good, but I don't know why I feel that you write so much nonsense, why do you write so much useful stuff⊙∀⊙? There is very little text. Can't we write more text?