
Become a Swordsman in a Collapsing World
在崩坏世界当剑仙
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- Completed
- Length
- 250k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Honkai Impact Three Tongren. The first chapter was a bit toxic. I really couldn't bear the thought of an adult being reduced to a child after traveling through time. Fortunately, he became an adult in the second chapter. After ten years of cultivating immortals, I have reached the Nascent Soul stage. The progress is slightly faster, and it does not reflect the corresponding level of cultivation. It is not fun enough. Although the author has explained it, readers don't care about it, they only care about whether they feel good or not. 6.5 Points, no intention to continue reading.
Author: I thought about the following plot, how do artificial people practice? Just like K423 and Theresa, their bodies are artificial. If you only have a soul, you can't practice ghost cultivation. Is it necessary to use all kinds of treasures from heaven and earth to reshape the body?
I re-read it and found the last paragraph of the first chapter. Isn't this cultivation? It feels like science fiction.
The author has discovered a problem. All cultivation techniques require spiritual energy. Without spiritual energy, it is impossible to practice. The basic breathing method should only be used to strengthen the body!
Author, you write about how you achieved it during physical training. How high your body's strength, defense, and speed are. It should be very powerful when you are already in the Nascent Soul stage.
Author, when you write a Cultivation and Honkai Impact fanfic, do you know the meaning of "The Tao cannot be taught lightly and the Dharma cannot be passed on?" And why "The Tao cannot be taught lightly and the Dharma cannot be passed on." I won't say whether the spiritual energy in the exercises can be replaced by Honkai energy. Let's just assume that Honkai energy can be refined. The body of the Valkyrie will definitely be damaged by Honkai energy due to the use of artificial holy marks. The meridians cannot be repaired with exercises, and repairing the meridians requires treasures from heaven and earth. These treasures are particularly precious. There is also cultivation that pays attention to age and talent. The earlier you practice, the better. The later you practice, it will limit your future growth. Only when the monsters have reached the level of Nascent Soul can they become spiritually intelligent. They should be able to transform when they reach the golden elixir level. Cultivation has inner demons and inner demon tribulations
In fact, I think the appearance of the male protagonist should be changed to be more manly, such as "an ordinary face, a face like a knife", otherwise I always see the male protagonist transforming into a girl.
Author, you wrote the last paragraph of this chapter in a complete mess. Since you came from time travel, knew some of the plot in advance, and entered the Stigmata space, why didn't you know that Yae Sakura was here?
The power of the current cultivation system has begun to gradually rebound. Ten years ago, the Nascent Soul could destroy the most cities. However, now that the setting of Daluo Jinxian has been restored, the cultivation system has also become a blessing in disguise and its power has increased significantly. In the past, the Nascent Soul destroyed the city and the aftermath of the Battle of Transformation stretched for hundreds of miles. Now, I read that a nuclear bomb is comparable to the golden elixir, but the reaction and thinking speed of the golden elixir is so fast that it is almost close to the speed of light and cannot hit it at all. When the Nascent Soul cultivators restructured their bodies, they became more perfect and could be called semi-immortal bodies. Moreover, the aftermath of a battle destroyed the world and spread thousands of miles. Seriously, the earth could not bear it at all. The transformed god casually struck the sun and it was gone. For them, the Milky Way was just a trial battlefield. When they passed through the tribulation, it had begun to affect a small half of the universe. The top level of the universe in the Mahayana period, the universe would shake every time they fought. When you become an immortal, you build your own universe ( Daqian Universe Prototype), Jinxian (Daqian Universe), Daluo Jinxian directly multiverse level. After reading too many novels about fantasy and infinite power systems, I can't stand other novels that belittle the power of the cultivation system, because you are going in the opposite direction. You could still write like this a few years ago, but many authors now restore the setting of Daluo Jinxian, which also invisibly raises the threshold for the power of the cultivation system. Sorry, author, farewell
Oh my God
Wang Daoyi, why are you here?
I don't know if you have played Honkai Academy 2, but Beichen Mei is very good-looking.
Sorry
When I wrote this book, I was encouraged by my classmates to write a book together and rush it to the shelves. So it's the same, I'm sorry for this.
Already invested, come on! I'll eat first😁
It's a pity, I hope I still remember you in a year's time
These first few pictures are exactly the same as the dialogue in "My Collapsing World". It makes me confused
Shido now! Wu, Wang Daoyi. . . . You have to be good Oh mom, Chicken Ou
Congratulations on putting it on the shelves. Please support with your first order, keep up the good work!
If there is no fifth update today, I will dress up as a woman in the group to apologize.
According to the main plot of Sanbengzi, Kallen is dead, Himeko's condition is unknown, and she is very likely to be dead, Yae Sakura is also dead, and the person who lives on Mei is an outside line, Kiana entered the quantum sea because of the void law, and Mei Yi is looking for him inside, Banya is trapped in the sea of quantum, and is forced to accept the test of logic, and the aunt cuts the Honkaiju at the entrance. Thinking about it this way, the main plot of Sanbengzi is actually a tragedy.
Let's talk about other Herrschers, such as Konglu, who can control all spaces in the world. This ability is also very good. As long as you have a rich imagination, you can do dimensional slashing, space cutting, dimensional faults, world walls, dimensional travel, world travel, etc. (Not to mention the supporting knowledge, MiHoYo doesn't explain anything, and you can talk nonsense. In my opinion, using your own abilities is instinctive. After all, Wendy - becoming a Herrscher Being able to use wind is not scientific at all. Isn't she illiterate? I), as long as it has something to do with space, she can do it for you, as small as inserting a blade into your stomach from a distance. Let's talk about the Third Herrscher, who controls all thunder and lightning. To put it simply, this guy is a life body killer. Every life has bioelectricity, and bioelectricity is closely related to life. Can you imagine what it would be like if you lost bioelectricity.