Life Is Tricky

The first five chapters are well written and humorous! The most important thing is to be down-to-earth. I am also a starting point writer, and I am quite interested in your supernatural writing. Please give me some suggestions. Ahem, I rarely write book reviews. First point: The character design of the protagonist Wang Xiaoshu in the first few chapters was quite successful (maybe you put yourself into it, so it is very contagious). The only drawback is that the first five chapters do not highlight the protagonist's abilities, which makes readers very confused. I suggest that it is better for Goldfinger to appear earlier. Also, the protagonist must have some characteristics that are different from ordinary people, otherwise your character will appear mediocre. You must know that the most fatal thing is for the protagonist to become mediocre! (You can add a little bit of cleverness, wisdom, or a tiger body to the protagonist, which will make men bend like this. Haha) The second point, after the fifth chapter, there is a bit of water in it. The key point is that the main line is not clear and the plot is no longer arresting. The protagonist has not even shown his abilities yet yet he takes on a supernatural mission just because of money issues? The third point is that the author's writing style is quite good, but the emphasis of superpowers is on being cool and interesting. It is better to do less of showing off literary talents in the starting point superpower circle. No matter what, your writing is generally quite interesting. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง has been collected!

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Since I changed my style, I feel much better... At least the plot is more compact.

It was gone in no time The book is very good and acceptable in all aspects Worth recommending

This book suddenly appeared on the bookshelf. Is it haunted? . .