The Otherworldly Career of a Spiritual Thinker

I won't read this book, but I'll give you some trivial suggestions! Next time you write a book, remember to bring the chapters.

I don't know what world view you want. Famine is the West and the East is the East. Don't mix the two things together. It's very strange. Just change the names and names. I don't know if other people will have it. I really feel that

Dad's novel, the author works hard to update it, don't be a eunuch, come on＾0＾~

This catalog really makes me want to read it!

I didn't understand the first few chapters, but the writing gets better and better in the following chapters, keep up the good work

The writing is quite good, but it cannot be divided into paragraphs. If it is dense and dense, it will put off many people.

Author, my next fantasy book will be about Priests! 🙂

Is it a green sun? 😃

(ง •̀_•́)งAoli gives! The author is great!

The writing is getting better and better! Hurry up and update 😁😁

Struggling to his death, he sat up in shock, another short and meaningless update

Whether it's the setting of the name, the setting of the world view, the encounter of the protagonist, or the change of body, it's all good. It's old-fashioned. It's enough. Can you innovate? If you keep repeating what others say, you can also write your own personality later.

I know my writing is not good, so I want to ask for your opinions. Do you like buff breasts? Or what about hammer breasts? If anyone is still watching, please leave a comment 🙂

I don't feel the joy of exploring the unknown world, everything seems to be taken for granted

Little Piggy, please recommend 😭

The plot is new. It seems to be quite smooth. I have saved it. However, there are some typos. I suggest the author correct them.

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